Comments For Skin Deep
MochaB (Signed) on Apr 19, 2010 02:11 am (Five)
Gaaaah ohmygoshohmygosh. Seriously?! Like...really?! I love you. That was amazing. The kitchen scene was so incredibly intimate. It was innocent, sweet, pure, sexy...just plain intimate and they didn't even fully kiss, and I was on the edge of my seat reading it. I could just feel it. And it's great to read this and see how they both may worry about society, but justin's is in a more optimistic way while patty's is the realistic pov. But I love justin and his raging hormones for it, even though it can probably be considered borderline naïve (not saying that he thinks racisim doesn't exist), but he's just so hopeful and wanting to be brave and take a chance because he feels so strongly for this person. Ugh. Makes me feel all mushy inside. Haha. And girl the mashed potatoes line and the good kind of lovin' line had me rolling! I was laughing throughout this whole chapter really, but yeah. Ok. Ending this rambling review. Amazing chapter though. Update soon! :o)



kole (Anonymous) on Apr 16, 2010 01:05 pm (Five)

awwww, i loved it. i'm so happy patty's starting to let go and let her self feel!! Now let's hope it stays that way.

i'm just scared that once they start getting really serious she's gonna pull away, oh well let's hope not

great chapter and i can't wait for more!!!




SexualCoco (Signed) on Mar 21, 2010 04:00 pm (Five)
Hey girlie, just wanted to let you know that I am loving this story. It is too cute despite some of the serious subject matter. Thank you for also creating a story like this that touches on issues that people had to and still have to deal with today. Keep it up, I can't wait for the next chapter! Hope you're well too.

Author's Response: i'm doing good! it's so nice to hear from you again, miss! i hope all is well with you. write me a story, damn it! lol



lykeoilnwater (Signed) on Mar 19, 2010 05:56 pm (Five)
not too fast for me at all! i mean, they didnt even kiss even though i rly rly wanted them to! lol. it was sweet tho. when he was talking about how he needed to have her or else he'd die that was beautiful. but damn is there gonna b some heavy drama in the future... cant wait for more!



lykeoilnwater (Signed) on Mar 19, 2010 05:38 pm (Four)
hahahaha! best ending line ever! moving on to ch 5 now...



lykeoilnwater (Anonymous) on Mar 18, 2010 11:24 pm (Three)
oh shit! damn rehearsal! i have to stop reading for the moment, but wooowwwwww. this just got super intense! i'll b back to finish reading later.



lykeoilnwater (Anonymous) on Mar 18, 2010 10:50 pm (One)
great start! love the concept. mrs. timberlake is a total bitch. moving on to ch 2 now... lol



princess (Anonymous) on Mar 18, 2010 03:52 pm (Five)
wow that was so cute... and innocent... and perfect. especially the little prayer at the end (even though apart of me thought of Dear GOd it's me.. Margaret lol. don't ask)  Le sigh. more soon



Tina (Anonymous) on Mar 18, 2010 08:51 am (Five)
I want them to kiss. DAMN IT



MissTasha (Signed) on Mar 18, 2010 07:01 am (Five)
Dammit, I thought they were going to bone. lol. It was still hot, though. Please update soon.



Tash2 (Anonymous) on Mar 18, 2010 01:32 am (One)
OH MY I HAVE JUST GOT CAUGHT UP ON MY READING AND THIS CHAPTER JUST OMG! I THINK MY HEART WAS BEATING FASTER THAN THIERS I SO WANTED THEM TO KISS BUT THE ANTICIPATION WILL BE WORTH I JUST KNOW! I FELL INLOVE ALL OVER AFTER HIS QUICK PRAYER TO GOD. JUST TOO CUTE IM DONE YOU CAN GO UPDATE NOW!! 



MochaB (Signed) on Jan 20, 2010 01:09 am (Four)

eeeek!! haha. ok well...that was really intimate and beautiful. i love how they were both nervous for their own reasons. justin cause he can't seem to hold in what he thinks and because he enjoys the way he feels around he. patty cause well she thinks of the problems that could ensue if she lets herself like him and it will hurt personally knowing it can never be due to society, but she still enjoyed his closeness even though it was completely new to her. she got jealous about the girls. haha. and he enjoyed her touching his underwear. ha. cute. lol and the words he spoke to her...*sigh* haha. it was really sweet and i loved this chapter. can't wait to read more. :o)




Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jan 19, 2010 08:42 am (Four)
I love how comfortable he's with her. Cuteness.



Tina (Anonymous) on Jan 17, 2010 04:42 pm (Four)
Oooh can't wait to see how the "studying" went.



princess (Anonymous) on Jan 17, 2010 04:29 pm (Four)
oooh I know what he wants to do. lol that was awesome. more soon





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