Even though the story was posted in one paragraph, more than likely accidentally, i still read it because I love this story.

Justin is so sweet and caring to Patricia, it always makes me smile! I love that they had that intimate time together, I think it just confirmed his feelings for her. I can't wait to read about the study date!

justin does seem to be blind to what really goes on. well actually i take that back. i don't think he's blind, i just think he doesn't grasp how it actually is for people that are not white since he doesn't actually experience it, no matter how things have so-called changed. plus he isn't racist like the others so he forgets that everybody isn't as accepting and open-minded as he is.  but what he just did...get into that fight...no matter how stupid it may have been to others for him to get into a fight during his Senior year and blah blah...i love him for it. he cares so much for patty and her mom. it was a wonderfully sweet gesture for him to get those tickets too, but the result of her not being able to go is going to be very interesting if she does come by to help him study while the parents are away.  it would give them a better. more relaxed atmosphere to talk and stuff. anyway, great chapter. i know i've said it before, but it can be so hard to read, but i'm sure it's hard to write too, but you do a wonderful job. update soon! :o)

Refreshing story. I like it very much. Update soon.

I absolutely love this story.  Please keep it comin

I love this story and how real you're being to the attitudes of that time period even though it was complete foul.

Justin's naivete and ability to look beyond race is sweet and touching, but he's not being realistic. It's unfair, but they have to keep their feelings for each other hush hush or things might get ugly. Maybe they'll be able to stand up for love and the town will let them be. But if that's not possible, they should do like the Lovings and just move to a more tolerant town. However things happen, I hope Justin and Patty find the courage to be together no matter what anyone thinks.

Aw, he defended her honor! Love it.

I love this story, because this was life back then. Coming from a black girl that loves her white chocolate :p, I would've hate living in that time frame. This story pisses me off, because well the obvious, but Justin is so refreshing in this. :)

Can't wait to read more.

 You're simply amazing

OHH drama

This is one of those stories that is going to push my comfort level cause it's just very real. Love it and I love you for creating another amazing story. Only 2 chapters in and I'm hooked. His mother...no words. But then I read about these moments between justin and patty, or read about what justin thinks of her, and it just makes me all warm. Haha. All awkward and jumpy and nervous. The concern that justin has for her mom and wanting to help just really makes me smile. I'm glad that at least Mr. Timberlake is nice too. I hope her mom does get better though. Can't wait to read more! :o)

Great section. I love all of your stories. You're a madly talented writer.

this is great!

Can you do something about his mother? I don't like her.

Can hi smom die soon? Like very, very soon? Train, bus, dog attack, fire, arsenic poisoning, whatever works. I'm not picky. Please update soon.

I am very impress with this tory. Please update soon.