MochaB (Signed) on Oct 28, 2009 10:41 pm (
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Obviously it hurts a little to read, but well...life you know? And when it's kept real that's what makes it amazing. So I really am liking it so far. I can't wait to read more so I hope you post more soon! :o)
monijt1 (Signed) on Oct 28, 2009 04:45 pm (
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I'm in love with this story. It's refreshing to read something like this.
What Justin's mother did at the end was totally disrespectful.
I am feeling this and i hope you continue this story.
god gave me style (Signed) on Oct 15, 2009 10:19 am (
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i love this!! i definitely think you should continue this one, i haven't read a story set back in this time in a really long time. that's what i love about you, your writing is so refreshing, lol.
did you get the email that I sent you a while back? i'm pretty sure you know that TE is gone and I just wanted to see if you still wanted your site. I have a domain and I'm hosting Donna, so if you want to get your site back up, you have a home, lol. if you don't, that's fine, I just wanted to put the offer out there :)
Author's Response: aww, boo. i'm so off the internet track it's not even funny. i would definitely love to get a site, but i think i'll keep my stories on here and use the site as a blog/poetry/announcement site. is that cool? i gotta check my email more often :/ LOL i'll do that now.
Tasha (Anonymous) on Oct 15, 2009 12:06 am (
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WELL THAT WAS INTENSE I LIKE SO FAR IT STINGS A LITTLE BUT I WOULDNT HAVE A HEART IF IT DIDN'T.I HOPE JUSTIN KNOWS WHAT HIS MOTHER DID SO HE CAN FIX IT! MORE SOON PLEASE.
Keediluv (Signed) on Oct 14, 2009 11:42 pm (
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I want you to keep going. It's nice to see that someone is willing to write about race because it's STILL something that many people don't like to talk about. This may scare some folk but I'm sure you knew that before you posted the story and I for one, commend you for it. I never thought to write something like this simply because I'm all bright, shiny, sunflowers and hugs. Thank you for approaching the reality of racism...it's not a very easy pill to swallow.
Justin never could resist a girl with a big butt and a smile!
Please keep writing this...I want to know what happens.
Ki
P.S-I love that bible verse!
Tina (Anonymous) on Oct 14, 2009 01:29 pm (
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I love it as usual!
MissTasha (Signed) on Oct 14, 2009 01:20 pm (
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Goddamn, that was mean. SMH. This chapter, honestly, made me mad. Good stuff. Please update soon.
Devon (Signed) on Oct 14, 2009 12:02 pm (
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Wow, this is so sad. But I love it. I can't wait to see what happens next, and I can't believe that Lynn just tore that money up like that. That's fucked up, this story is fucked up. But oh so good.
mzmillion (Signed) on Oct 14, 2009 10:48 am (
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i dont know if ill be able to take this one.........ugh... i cant imagine Lynn that far off.....lol.
