Comments For Skin Deep
ChyTop19 (Signed) on Aug 07, 2014 10:51 am (One)
His mother in this story is a Bitch. Let that have been me I would have whooped her ass
alee_92 (Signed) on Mar 16, 2013 04:21 pm (One)
You're such a great author, I can't wait for updates to your stories.
MochaB (Signed) on Aug 11, 2010 12:33 am (Six)
ugh. my heart. *holds hand to chest with dreamy expression* haha. it's just so pure and innocent and honest and it makes me feel all warm and gooey on the inside. the poem? how freaking cute was that. and then ohmygosh they kissed!! her first kiss!! eek!! they just...*sigh* of course all the racism made my heart hurt and my eyes get all watery because i'm all emotional, but it just makes it real. the same goes for when she compares herself to the other girls and longs for an open relationship. then the moments between patricia and justin just make it all go away for the moment. justin's mom...i have no words for her. well no good words. haha. but mr. timberlake...he's freaking amazing. how wonderful that he's having the doc come look at her mom. i really hope that everything works out and she's on her way back to good health. anyway, wonderful update! glad i was finally able to read it. :o)
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Aug 05, 2010 04:04 pm (Six)
SO cute and hot!
Devon (Signed) on Jul 28, 2010 07:39 pm (Six)
Gahhh, I love these too!
It's just soo perfect how Justin sees Patty the way he wants to without the world interfering with his opinion. Their love is so innocent and yet so real. And I love how Justin could never imagine to hurt her.
And awww at Mr. Timberlake being so nice to her.
And fuck that bitch aka his "mom".
It's just soo perfect how Justin sees Patty the way he wants to without the world interfering with his opinion. Their love is so innocent and yet so real. And I love how Justin could never imagine to hurt her.
And awww at Mr. Timberlake being so nice to her.
And fuck that bitch aka his "mom".
Keediluv (Signed) on Jul 27, 2010 08:48 pm (Six)
Quick question: Who do you see as Patricia? I was trying to think of someone but I really can't picture any particular person. So, who's your Patty?
Author's Response: to be honest love, i'm having a hard time picking SOMEBODY. i have a girl in my head, but i can't give you someone to google just yet. i'll post a pic when i get it. then again, i don't want to through off people's imagination too much. i'm not the most detailed person as far as distinct characteristics of physical features are concerned cause i like to leave room for people to get their minds in it, so yeah... all that just to say i don't have a person lol.
Author's Response: to be honest love, i'm having a hard time picking SOMEBODY. i have a girl in my head, but i can't give you someone to google just yet. i'll post a pic when i get it. then again, i don't want to through off people's imagination too much. i'm not the most detailed person as far as distinct characteristics of physical features are concerned cause i like to leave room for people to get their minds in it, so yeah... all that just to say i don't have a person lol.
Keediluv (Signed) on Jul 27, 2010 05:28 am (Six)
I am SO in love with them! Justin was right, her innocence is so cute and endearing. And Justin the gentleman never cease to amaze me. I just hope they have a chance to explore the relationship before any dumb stuff creeps in. I love this so much Mari. Thanks for writing it and giving me something else to look forward to!
Author's Response: aww, i'm glad you're loving them because i really love them too. this is a little different from what i'm used to writing, so i'm glad people are following and responding well to it :) and lol @ 'any dumb stuff creeps in'. you know it can't stay blissful when the world's against them, but i'mma let them have their love affair too ;)
Author's Response: aww, i'm glad you're loving them because i really love them too. this is a little different from what i'm used to writing, so i'm glad people are following and responding well to it :) and lol @ 'any dumb stuff creeps in'. you know it can't stay blissful when the world's against them, but i'mma let them have their love affair too ;)
Keediluv (Signed) on Jul 27, 2010 04:30 am (Five)
And if you have some time for me, could you let me have her, Lord?
Really?! Don't do me that! You got me in her tearing up and stuff :) That was so beautiful. And I must say; I've never been so anxious for a kiss to happen in my entire life! I love it all sweetheart! Fan-freaking-tastic mama!
d_simplicity (Signed) on Jul 27, 2010 12:48 am (Six)
Eep! This story is sooooooo omg! I love it, I've fallen in love I love these stories!!! I read through everything and I'm hoping you'll update often. I know you have "Do over" and I'm slowly catching up on that one finally, but update this one too! I'm nervous about what would happen if people found out but Justin and Patty are too damn adorable and sweet and just ugh! These stories are moving.
Author's Response: lol i love your reviews, i swear. i'm trying to update do over and this one equally, life is just getting as crazy as ever, so i'm glad i'm at least giving you time to catch up. i'm really surprised this is catching onto people. i didn't want to be too strong about race issues, blah, blah, blah, but i have such a mature audience, so i can press forward. justin and patty being caught would be INSANE - trust me. that's all i'm saying lol
Author's Response: lol i love your reviews, i swear. i'm trying to update do over and this one equally, life is just getting as crazy as ever, so i'm glad i'm at least giving you time to catch up. i'm really surprised this is catching onto people. i didn't want to be too strong about race issues, blah, blah, blah, but i have such a mature audience, so i can press forward. justin and patty being caught would be INSANE - trust me. that's all i'm saying lol
princess (Anonymous) on Jul 27, 2010 12:24 am (Six)
AAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: i felt the same way, thanks! :)
Author's Response: i felt the same way, thanks! :)
LikeWaterforChocolate (Signed) on Jul 26, 2010 11:24 pm (Six)
I'm seriously in love with this story! Your writing is so amazing. I hope you keep up with all you stories, just so I can have a wonderful imagining in my mind of your characters as opposed to the crap on tv. Thank you!
Author's Response: awww, thank you! i don't even know what to say to reviews like this lol i can definitely agree that television is full of crap tho lol
Author's Response: awww, thank you! i don't even know what to say to reviews like this lol i can definitely agree that television is full of crap tho lol
Tina (Anonymous) on Jul 10, 2010 03:57 am (Five)
Just re-read the story. I need an update so freaking much..
Sheree (Anonymous) on Jun 12, 2010 09:50 am (Four)
Hey ! Just wanted to tell u i love this story so far gurl. My favorite story by u is `do over` im dang near obssessed with that story. I seen ur update and how busy you are and then i stumbled upon this one, and omg i just wanted to tell u pleeeaaasssseeee dont forget about this story =( , please lol. Like i love stories from that era but can never find em, and patty and justin are so adorable... shes so innocent u cant help but to love her ! That mother of his tho ugh... cant stand that tramp smh. And that one white boy at school that his last name is green? Annoying ! Love this story and how well uve developed the characters so please dont forget about it and in your spare time can u update it for us fans? So far so great so dont keep us hanging missy ! lol thanks =)
