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treasure (Signed) on Oct 16, 2009 01:28 pm (Chapter 25)
Wonderful story. Nice shocker at the end.



treasure (Signed) on Oct 16, 2009 01:17 pm (Chapter 23)

Beyonce's a mess!

Justin's ex girlfriends need to learn how to pick up a phone and call before coming over.




treasure (Signed) on Oct 16, 2009 01:09 pm (Chapter 21)
Rena is a crazy bitch!



treasure (Signed) on Oct 16, 2009 01:03 pm (Chapter 20)
What's with justin and all these damn females. Beyonce needs to relax though. She's starting to get on my nerves.



treasure (Signed) on Oct 16, 2009 12:46 pm (Chapter 16)
Okay I'm a little confused. Was it Cameron he was with before or Jessica?

Author's Response:

You're right. Actually, it was Jess and Olivia he dated before Cameron, but I forgot to mention Cam in this chapter so it was like they never dated which was confusing.

Any way, thanks for all the reviews and I'm glad you enjoyed the story!




treasure (Signed) on Oct 16, 2009 12:30 pm (Chapter 14)
Pregnant?



treasure (Signed) on Oct 16, 2009 12:26 pm (Chapter 13)

Magnum Size! Get it boy!

He better not play her.




treasure (Signed) on Oct 16, 2009 12:21 pm (Chapter 12)
Nice dinner, sweet conversation. I still think Beyonce needs to be careful.



treasure (Signed) on Oct 16, 2009 12:12 pm (Chapter 10)
I have to pick my mouth up off the floor now.



treasure (Signed) on Oct 16, 2009 12:05 pm (Chapter 9)
You made your bed now you have to lay in it so to speak. I honestly don't feel sorry for Justin. I love Beyonce in this. I like that she put his ass in check.



treasure (Signed) on Oct 16, 2009 12:00 pm (Chapter 8)
That's a big no no Justin! Don't shit where you work my boy! Plus, as much as I dislike Cameron the chick is your girlfriend and I don't fancy cheaters. oh well! reading on.



treasure (Signed) on Oct 16, 2009 11:55 am (Chapter 7)

Smokin' hooooooooottttttttttt!

Somebody bring me my mocha latte! lmao!




treasure (Signed) on Oct 16, 2009 11:50 am (Chapter 6)
The Director is a little freak! Justin better watch out.



treasure (Signed) on Oct 16, 2009 11:44 am (Chapter 5)
Good chapter. Really like that beyonce's not playing the vitim card with Sean and I'm glad she knocked the hell outt him.



treasure (Signed) on Oct 16, 2009 11:32 am (Chapter 3)
I like the way you did two scenes in one that was cute. Both of them in the same movie. Exciting!





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