Comments For All The Right Moves
Hollie (Signed) on Nov 05, 2009 04:11 pm (One)

Deary deary me. She was dumb enough to start falling for that old chestnut?

 

I love this story so much. More please



Author's Response:

haha hmm... maybe.... maybe not!

thank ya lady! mucho appreciated!




meggie (Signed) on Nov 05, 2009 05:46 am (One)

i was gonna go with one word to describe how i felt after reading this one but I'M TOO EXCITED TO DO THAT!!!!

justin is a mean bastard!! but in that hot sexy 'i wanna fuck the killer' way! 

and veronica- what the hell?!? you cant just be all 'i'll tell you whatever you want to know' AFTER you've already asked (TWICE) for your laywer!! idiot girl!

i NEED more!! 



Author's Response:

lmao... you're not supposed to like the bad guy woman!

umm... yeah... i'm not saying a word about veronica and her almost confession. lol.

thank ya my dear! mucho appreciated!




glowbug917 (Signed) on Nov 05, 2009 01:58 am (One)

all those years of obsessive SVU watching have done you GOOD, woman! ah i fucking love this, there aren't even words.

i love how i got in pretty much everyone's head by the end of this. and am disturbed by the fact that i find sociopathic justin kind of sexy? okay moving along. 

was surprised to see veronica was gonna break so easily buuuut you're a shifty motherfucker so who knows if that was actually the case haha 

okay i need more like, now. 



Author's Response:

haha well, it's good to know all those hours with my ass planted in front of the tv weren't completely useless!

psh... i so am not shifty. alright, maybe a little. haha.

thank ya lady! much appreciated!




d_simplicity (Signed) on Nov 05, 2009 01:13 am (One)
Awww damn, that was close but it would have been too easy. I'm amazed at how cold and callous Justin and Veronica are but I love it to pieces. I like how you're writing them. It keeps the suspence. I swear, it's like a real movie scene flowing out here. Keep it up. Can't wait to see where this goes and if the bad guys win or lose. hehe. Update soon!

Author's Response: eep yay! thank ya lady! that is beyond awesome to hear!



JoJo (Anonymous) on Nov 05, 2009 01:02 am (One)
That was close! I like it! Keep it coming!

Author's Response:

haha indeed it was!

thank ya my dear, i appreciate it!




MochaB (Signed) on Nov 03, 2009 01:58 pm (Prologue)
One person's ADD is another person's happiness. Mine! Lol jk. Really though I can't wait to see what it's all about. :o)

Author's Response:

lol well, i've got plenty of add to go around, believe me.

thank ya love! mucho appreciated!




LoveYou2 (Anonymous) on Nov 02, 2009 09:59 pm (Prologue)
This is so funny. Because the song "All the right moves" actually came on my ipod just as I saw this story lol *coughitsagreatsong* sorry sounds interesting so far!

Author's Response:

oh my lord yes... the first time i heard it i was like ok, i'm obsessed. lol.

thank ya my dear! i appreciate it a ton!




Hollie (Signed) on Nov 02, 2009 01:27 pm (Prologue)
I'm intrigued. Bonnie and Clyde '09...

Author's Response: haha thank ya lady!



meggie (Signed) on Nov 02, 2009 08:43 am (Prologue)

oh my god! i feel the urge to post something up on mine now!! haha but it's birthday do whatever i want day and i've got shit to do right now so maybe i'll throw the first part up tomorrow....??

sorry, i got sidetracked, i LOVE this! but i love you so anything you write is a given! now, just give me some sexy time with justin and handcuffs and the world is well again! mkay, thanks! loved it loved it loved it!



Author's Response:

eep! do it!!! lol.

lmao justin and handcuffs. i shall see what i can do, just for you! haha




d_simplicity (Signed) on Nov 02, 2009 01:51 am (Prologue)
I love you for making a story like this. Law and Order is my shit! lol. Criminal Intent and SVU. ooh, this Justin sounds like he's going to be fun to read about with their wanted criminal bonnie and clyde selves. lol. Gosh, you suck me into your stories every single time. I'm totally supporting the ADD. lol. I bet they're going to get out of jail soon. lol.  Post more soon. love the start.

Author's Response:

lol, i never got into criminal intent, but i am beyond addicted to svu!

haha, thank ya lady! i really do appreciate it a ton!




Jbear (Anonymous) on Nov 02, 2009 01:12 am (Prologue)
I have to admit I am an SUV junkie so when I saw who Cater was I was very intreseted to know where this was going. Nice start now I want to know what happened. But can say why do u have to have such an ADD personality? U finsih one story just to start another. LOL

Author's Response:

oh man... don't even get me started on svu. i am hopelessly addicted, so yeah... christopher meloni was completely intentional. lol.

haha, i'm insane. that's the only answer i got! lol.

thank ya hun! i appreciate it!




JoJo (Anonymous) on Nov 02, 2009 01:06 am (Prologue)
Every time you start something new you always suck me in with the first chapter! I'm very interested to see where this goes!!

Author's Response: haha thank ya my dear! mucho appreciated!



glowbug917 (Signed) on Nov 02, 2009 12:52 am (Prologue)

Woo! I do so love enabling your ADD.

Well, as you know I think your batshit brain has come up with something decidedly and awesomely insane. 

I can't wait to see where this goes and well, anything with Clive Owen and Stabler is made of win in my book.

More! Now!



Author's Response:

haha well thank ya lady!

and yes... you are an awful, awful enabler. but this is why i love you!






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