grishy (Signed) on Nov 16, 2009 09:10 am (Chapter 1)
Great start! intriguing, with enough clues that you could hang on to see more.

Author's Response: Thanks, truckin' along!



musicmel (Signed) on Nov 16, 2009 08:53 am (Chapter 2)

I was totally expected them to back into each other or something. lol I do however expect them to 'run' into each other again at 5am.



Author's Response: worlds collide, and such. LOL.



musicmel (Signed) on Nov 16, 2009 08:30 am (Chapter 1)

I am very interested to see where this is going. They both seem to be 'broken' from past relationships. I can't wait to see where this goes.



Author's Response: Thanks for your review! Bustin' butt on the rest of it. I think you'll like it!



Ambs07 (Signed) on Nov 15, 2009 09:35 am (Chapter 1)
Okay you have me completely intrigued. I really like this story, an i dont usualy read JC. but i like this one. Please update soon hun!

Author's Response: Thank you thank you thank you! I hope you enjoy the rest. More coming soon... trying to finish and also edit old chapters at the same time.



azchickadee (Signed) on Nov 14, 2009 11:25 pm (Chapter 1)
I'm hooked :)  Can't wait to see what happens next.  You're writing amazes me!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks ! I enjoy it (most days)! Thank you for leaving feedback, more coming!





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