band nerd (Signed) on Nov 23, 2009 11:07 pm (Chapter 1)

I keep checking back like every other hour even though you said it was going to be a while for the next update.   *sigh*

I'm not even a "jc" girl, but I want more JC!!!

I love all of your stories . . from JC/Serena to the wrong email computer chick.  Good stuff!



Author's Response: Look! 2 chapters! Hahaha!



ChaseznLuccaLover (Signed) on Nov 22, 2009 07:38 pm (Chapter 5)

What do you mean, "This will be the last update for a bit". I refuse to comprehend this statement because it is unfair to me!! I should have held off on my review until you updated, held it ransom. 

OMG I cannot believe that you are writing another story. At first I was mad because that means you might neglect JC and Serena, and we all know how much I love the two of them. After reading this chapter though I am not as mad as I first was, because DAMN! I like this JC. Very pervy. 

Guess I will just have to reread the first five chapters (or just this last one) to tide me over until the next update... just don't make me wait to long. I am drained of all my patience, so who knows what I might do! 



Author's Response: HAHAHAHA. I love your reviews! I'll update as soon as I can, but I want to make sure I don't want to go back and change things. It'll be worth the wait.............I'm pretty sure. Thanks for the review! I'm so happy you like it!



glowbug917 (Signed) on Nov 22, 2009 05:36 pm (Chapter 5)

all caught up. i love these two, man. but i have this sinking feeling that they're not just gonna be able to keep coasting in their little bubble of sexiness, haha.

but whatever, for now they are and i will take it! him putting her down for a nap was adorable. 

now you're going to make me wait? harumph! evil girl. 



Author's Response: I do apologize, my dear. It is a necessary pain! I'll update soon.



SJane (Signed) on Nov 21, 2009 07:32 pm (Chapter 5)
Girl I swear you could write about the tortoise and the hare story with jc as the hare and him needing to win the race (crazy I know) and id be addicted to it, weither its dramatic,lovely dovey or the smutty stuff we love u have a way of drawing a reader in and wanting more and more

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I try, I try. At least it's entertaining for a few minutes, eh?



band nerd (Signed) on Nov 21, 2009 07:26 am (Chapter 5)
I LOVE this!!!!  OMG FINISH IT NOW!  :)

Author's Response: THANK YOU!! WORKING ON IT!



Vikki (Signed) on Nov 21, 2009 12:01 am (Chapter 5)

wait... WHAT?! a few WEEKS?! no... no I wont stand for that.

this. this right here is my newest fav. update or bring back Serena or I will through the biggest hissy fit ever lol!

 

aaaaaahhhh! I loved this. it was sloooow and seeeexy and totally made me want JC more if that was even possible.

 

and i lol'd at him smelling toast. i dunno why i found that hysterical, could be bc I'm not an insomniac and I want to sleep lol! speaking of..... how adorable that he got her to nap on the couch! aaaawwwww!

 

 



Author's Response: Lol, yeah he put her down for her nap. Yeah, at least a week. I need to make sure the rest of the story makes sense!



Vikki (Signed) on Nov 20, 2009 11:14 pm (Chapter 4)

LMAO! ok horny!JC is my fav right now.

but maaaaan.... I want cake now. or pie. Or JC with cake and pie.

every time he smiled at her, her stomach lurched and she felt warm inside.

ugh I miss that. I need a man *pouts*.

"And I'll want to taste it." He leaned in to her, his lips almost touching her ear. "Maybe I could lick it off of some places, too."

yeah... i kid you not, I got a shiver right down my back lol!



Author's Response: *giggle*  GOOD! I like shivers!



Vikki (Signed) on Nov 20, 2009 10:28 pm (Chapter 3)

OMGZ! He called her honey! *giggle*


That voice. It was him. ‘Holy. Fuck. It's. Him.  What do I do?!'

I think... what I love the most is that you have these female characters that are just so real. It can be you but I love to think that its me lol... or it can be anyone else reading this you know? because hell that would be me, staring at his bulge for a second too long HAHA!

He gave her a nod, just a tip of his head and wiggled a few fingers at her in a wave, then turned and walked inside. Sauntered inside. Goddamn, that man was sexy.

damn.... damn he is good.

and can I just say THANK YOU for writing this 3rd person because i love how your brain writes JC's brain. yes.

 ‘Well,' he thought to himself, ‘let's be honest, now.' He wanted to fuck her.

LMAO! i was thinking the same thing when he was going on about how she "intrigued" him... heh.



Author's Response: I was just saying today that it's kind of fun putting myself in the mind of a man and trying to figure out what he would be thinking. As nice as I'm sure he is, a man's internal dialgue is likely a whole different story. What makes him nice is his ability to hold his tongue and not say the stupid shit men actually say, and not do the stupid shit men actually do. :/ ANYWAY. Yeah. FUN. lol.



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Nov 20, 2009 07:39 pm (Chapter 5)
DAMN! I would glady change places with her and be "kidnapped" in JC's house with him.

Author's Response: LOL! Right? Daaaaaaaaaarn, I can't leave!



glowbug917 (Signed) on Nov 20, 2009 05:41 pm (Chapter 4)

okay this chapter was just full of awesome. they were playful and sexy and the banter was adorable.

hee, dirty little perverts



Author's Response: Hee. But of course!



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Nov 20, 2009 05:19 pm (Chapter 5)
LOVE the story! One of my favorites to check for now!

Author's Response: THANKS! :-D



glowbug917 (Signed) on Nov 20, 2009 04:51 pm (Chapter 3)

i love how she was so awkward initially and then by the end had this smartass little comment to give him:

"They have these things called cell phones. They're pretty handy. You can call me, on mine. From yours." 

it made me laugh out loud. so i now look like a crazy person at my desk. good job you. :) 



Author's Response: I laughed writing it, and every time I read it. LOL>



glowbug917 (Signed) on Nov 20, 2009 03:44 pm (Chapter 1)

"Play it again, Sam.”

Oh I love you for this almost as much as I love you for Bruno.



Author's Response: *snort. I feel like I'm as corny as JC sometimes. I totally didn't name him Sam on purpose. It just sounded like a sax player's name.



glowbug917 (Signed) on Nov 20, 2009 02:27 pm (Chapter 1)

you are just such a lovely writer, i swear. i started this the other day but hadn't gotten to finish the first chapter cause work blah blah, but yes.

you have a way of incorporating these tiny moments that people could otherwise skim over but they're so specific to your talent that it's noticable. 

anyway, love this already. more once i get there. 



Author's Response: Aw, thanks! IMO chapter 1 is a bit clunky but I think it gets better as it goes.



grishy (Signed) on Nov 20, 2009 02:23 pm (Chapter 5)

Guilty I read in the office again.

Another thing I like about your stories are the confident, intelligent, sexy women you pair with JC, they're the key for a good balance. The reason why I could read an entire chapter (basically) about sex, without missing a beat.

Neet freak haha! I LOVE the fearless way you describe him (even phisically)

PS: I'm missing some JC/Selena action



Author's Response:

Hahah thank you! Yeah, sex takes up so much wordspace! argh.

 

I'm gonan try to pick up AIWD soon. It's hard to change gears between one story and another, one set of characters and another. Two different main characters, essentially two different JC's. The stories start to mix in my head and I want to keep them separate.  thanks though! 






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