Vikki (Signed) on Nov 20, 2009 01:34 pm (Chapter 2)

SO MUCH LOVE FOR THIS RIGHT NOW!

 

The radio alarm clock busted into pieces on impact, moments after it was yanked from the wall and hurled across the room, sending sharp plastic chunks in a spray across the carpet. He stared at the mess for a few seconds, finding it hard to believe he’d actually done that. Especially since that wasn’t his alarm clock.

I laughed, out loud, at my job. Thank you.

 

“Aruba, Jamaica, ooh, I wanna take ya…$4.59 for Cheerios? That’s highway robbery right there, man…

but seriously... you KNOW he does this right? there's gotta be some security footage that can back us up here.

 

Praying she hadn’t seen him leering at her like a creepy old man. But afraid that she had.

Ooooo my god! I just love her! I would totally be kicking myself in the ass too bc I shop really early on the weekend and ALWAYS look like I just rolled out of bed, because I did. And fuck-me if I ever bump into any hot guy, celeb or not.

‘Down boy,’ he muttered to himself. ‘Not today. Not right now, anyway. But good to see you’re still alive.’

lmao... omgIlovehim!



Author's Response: Just adding to my love for the way vikki reviews a story. *eep* LMAO. Thank you. I was pretty sure you would like it!



Vikki (Signed) on Nov 20, 2009 12:47 pm (Chapter 1)

UGH!

you've gone and done it again... now I must continue reading and get no work done for the rest of the day.

whatever. its friday anyway lol!



Author's Response: HAHAHAHA! At least I didn't squeeze every last drop out of the chapter and have to scrimp my words to fit it on the archive, Lol.



musicmel (Signed) on Nov 20, 2009 12:32 pm (Chapter 5)
Ok.. I love them together. You can tell it isn't just a sex thing with them but ya never know I guess. I cant wait to see where this goes.

Author's Response: Thanks, I think there's a good connection there. They have more in common than they think they do.



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Nov 19, 2009 07:42 pm (Chapter 4)
Wow...That was HOT! I love how he shared his dessert with her. I cannot wait to see what happens when he actually gets her home.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comment! :D I thought it was pretty steamy myself. More coming over the weekend, stay tuned!



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Nov 19, 2009 11:32 am (Chapter 4)

jesus christ that was hot!! i hope the next update is coming like now!



Author's Response: Soon coming soon. Gotta make sure it's PERFECT.



grishy (Signed) on Nov 19, 2009 11:20 am (Chapter 4)

Lady...this was the best scene of a date ever! I keep saying this but, really your style is so good; this' smut but there's a plot (a good one) that pull you in to the sex scenes.

HOT, sexy, intelligent, funny... the peanut butter kiss...ufffff

I have to remember: do not read this story in the office.



Author's Response: I love you. TO DEATH. GUh. SO MUCH. Lol. I worked SO HARD on that scene. Thanks to all who've complemented!



musicmel (Signed) on Nov 19, 2009 10:14 am (Chapter 4)
Great update!!! I am not surprised at all this is how the date is going to end up. It's how I would have wanted it to end.

Author's Response: Thanks! *claps*



kacavendam (Anonymous) on Nov 19, 2009 03:55 am (Chapter 4)
I like this story very much and the way you are describing so I just hope that you will continue with the updates on a regular basis:))))))

Author's Response: thanks!



grishy (Signed) on Nov 18, 2009 10:00 am (Chapter 3)

To me the appealing in this story is the music side; I enjoy your understanding about his connection with music. and share your wishes of success for him. The scene in the rehearsal was GREAT, I love bossy/creative/ in charge JC.

"She wondered if the rumors about him and his...assets... were true" hahahaha...We all wonder girl!



Author's Response: Thanks! Lol...



azchickadee (Signed) on Nov 17, 2009 09:15 pm (Chapter 3)
I love how you've captured JC's rambling and stuttering!  It makes me happy and made me laugh out loud several times.  :) 

Author's Response: yeah he makes me laugh, himself with that.



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Nov 17, 2009 06:45 pm (Chapter 3)
Oo...I am so glad that they made plans to meet for dinner. I cannot wait to see how that goes.

Author's Response: Fun fun fun!



musicmel (Signed) on Nov 17, 2009 06:21 pm (Chapter 3)
Great update! yay finally things are going to start with them!

Author's Response: *Does a dance*



azchickadee (Signed) on Nov 16, 2009 10:12 pm (Chapter 2)
Ahh!!  Random run-in at the grocery store!  Love it :)  I was just talking to a friend of mine about how this is a fantasy of mine...not necessarily the whole meeting JC in the grocery store (although that would be nice) but just meeting someone and having it turn in to "something".  Can't wait to see what happens next!  :)

Author's Response: Wouldn't that be awesome? Lol.



Ambs07 (Signed) on Nov 16, 2009 02:40 pm (Chapter 2)
That was so cute, omg it's so true when you look your worst you always meet the cute guys... An if i would of been in her situation i would of probably died. omg. lol love love the chapter can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! hard at work on more!



grishy (Signed) on Nov 16, 2009 09:58 am (Chapter 2)

Why Rod's character ring a bell to someone else? prodige, start child, hit maker, cocky...

Hope I could be that cool If I met him, and looking like shit to top the scene. HA!



Author's Response:

Rod is a figment of my imagination. He's not a dig at anyone else. ;)

 

Whenever I meet someone cute, I look like shit. It's it the law of nature. 






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