Comments For Broken Wings
Glow (Anonymous) on Sep 24, 2013 11:03 pm (Chapter 36)

While I would have liked to see her get good and sloshed, I suppose this will suffice.

 

But I'll have you know, Missy, all this adorable cuteness that's happening between them makes me nervous because I know your evil ways entirely too well. 



Author's Response: Takes one to know one.



Glow (Anonymous) on Sep 15, 2013 09:40 pm (Chapter 35)

Aw, they're like a super dysfunctional version of the Avengers. Er. You know what I mean. Pun intended? 

Ahem. More please. 



Author's Response: But those Avengers are super dysfunctional too, so maybe there's not much diff. lol



Glow (Anonymous) on Sep 13, 2013 12:16 pm (Chapter 34)

Hmm perhaps I haven't had enough coffee yet this morning but I'm not seeing the lightbulb moment Anton's having. WHAT IS HAPPENING. I MUST KNOW NOW. 

Also Justin being all sweetness is cute.  



Author's Response: I think it might just be the coffee, but I  promise you'll know soon enough either way lol



Glow (Anonymous) on Sep 12, 2013 06:06 pm (Chapter 33)

“Uhh… why did sexy go away, exactly?” I love her and you and everything about this line is perfect and hilarious.  

Author's Response: I love you bunches x



Nikki (Anonymous) on Sep 12, 2013 01:14 pm (Cast list)
Definitely regaining interest in this story.

Author's Response: Thanks boo x



Glow (Anonymous) on Sep 12, 2013 11:23 am (Chapter 32)

“I could tell them you finally went to rehab.” I love Trace. Trace is always my favorite.  Also I don't know why but I am getting serious Danger Will Robinson wives about the two of them in the middle of nowhere with no protection.  

Author's Response: I just love writing Trace. That's why he gets all the good lines



Glow (Anonymous) on Sep 09, 2013 12:06 am (Chapter 31)

Oh, how I have missed this story. Nice bait and switch with Alex - never would've guessed he'd be helping her out. 

I'll have to catch up more tomorrow but for now YAY!  



Author's Response: :o)



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Aug 24, 2011 04:13 pm (Chapter 29)
I love these two.  I especially love that Charmian is human now, which means she's got to start feeling things and facing them.  Bravo.  I always love reading this story.



Glow (Anonymous) on Aug 23, 2011 09:21 pm (Chapter 29)

That whole human emotion thing is pesky indeed...at the risk of being redundant, poor Charmian. She doesn't adapt so well to change, I'm gathering. 

And look at Justin go...actually managing to be logical for once instead of a panicky, hysteric girly mess. I'm almost proud of the boy!  




meggie (Signed) on Aug 23, 2011 07:22 pm (Chapter 29)

much as i love that she's such a BAMF, you literally broke my heart with "it hurts". broke it. i'm totally in love with this so much that it hurts.

also, thank you for the update cause now my brain waves are really going. however finding the time to write is only making it worse :) 




a_moments_grace (Signed) on Aug 21, 2011 07:38 pm (Chapter 28)
Oh Good Lord.  I did not see that coming!  She's human? And how the hell is she supposed to save Justin??? Damn girl, you've got all kinds of cliff hangers going in this thing.  I don't know which way to turn for fear of falling off one of those said cliffs.  Sheesh!  Update soon, please!



Rachel (Anonymous) on Jun 08, 2011 01:38 pm (Chapter 28)
I absolutely LOVE this! Great job! Excited to read more and see where else this will go. :)

Author's Response: Thanks :o)



Jbear (Signed) on May 30, 2011 07:45 pm (Chapter 28)

Holle you are so awesome! 

 

“So far resisting you has only got me some mystical version of chlamydia. I’m doing everything you say from now on.”

Best line ever. I cracked up when I read that! So seriously why take her powers what did I miss? Did Micheal discover she lied about something? Please update soon because I am way to hooked! Please and Thank you!



Author's Response: I did enjoy writing that line. Possibly a little too much lol



glowbug917 (Signed) on Apr 18, 2011 10:27 pm (Chapter 26)

WOMAN! Why must you do this to me?? I just. You are. I swear. I can't even articulate, see what you've done! 

Ahem. Anyway. Poor Charmian - was only a matter of time before the flimsy thread snapped. Still, I cannot wait to see her bringing lots of pain to one devious fucker named Anton. That'll be a good day, and will make me love you again.

(Okay, I'll love you anyway, but you must update immediately!) 



Author's Response: Heehee :op



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Apr 18, 2011 08:07 pm (Chapter 26)

Oh snap.  That was intense and you've got me all worried.  A succubus? That sounds...like the worst STD ever!

although, I am happy that it can be washed off and that JT got to witness Charmian getting territorial.  Is it pervy of me to think that JT and Charmain would probably have epic sex together?  Because I've thought that and I think you should write the get-it-on part already :)

Love it!



Author's Response: Just so you know, this review has pre-empted a joke I've been planning for about five chapters lol





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