Oh, I love this story.  But the dirty side of me wants Justin and Charmian to get it on already! lol. 

I can't wait to get more :)

He would have, but he didn’t want Nate knowing how utterly uncool he was.

Aw, baby. Nate already knows you're a lame-ass. As do the rest of us.

I love that Charmian barely breaks a sweat while kicking ass. It gives me Buffy nostalgia and that always makes me happy.

I am also greatly entertained by Justin's "annoyance" over her lack of reaction to him. Hilarious and sort of adorable, in that stupid boy way.  

hahaha poor confused justin.

and he raises good points. all along, i've been confused about why she's all indifferent to him. on one hand, i get that she's trying to be professional, but i feel like there's more behind me.

me thinks you're up to something missy!

Please tell me you write novels and I can get one in a booke store somewhere.  This is the most genius pieces of writing I've read in a long time, and that's saying quite a but because I'm an English teacher! 

But honestly, if you're not writing books or non-*NSYNC related writings, you should be.  I would buy your things in a heartbeat.

See what you do to me? You make me gush!

Dude, there are some THINGS happening here. Bad things. (Just thought you might need someone to point out the glaringly obvious for you)

I'd tell you I'm hoping that Justin isn't a complete dumbass and picks up that he's surrounded by demons, but, well, boys can't be pretty AND smart, can they? 

Also Bob = genius. This is why I love you so.

"...Aphrodite, Venus and Halle Berry all rolled into one, only better."

I love it!

good lord woman... you definitely know how to leave us hanging with this one, don't you? pure evil you are!

Charmain and her whole 'i'm not jealous' bit was completely adorable/hilarious. 

I have no idea why, but having a demon named bob is cracking me the hell up.

you win my dear. and i'm going to need more of this in the very near future!

well, anton is a devious fucker, isn't he?

and you have officially thrown me for a complete and total loop. i have no idea where this is going now and i so love you for it.

so, i'm gonna need more immediately woman!

Just when I think I've got an idea where this is headed you go and change it up. Anton is so deliciously evil, as I'm sure I've mentioned.

However, not as evil as you. I didn't yell at you before for cliffhangers, that was Meaghan, but I'm going to now!!!

I seriously adore the dynamic between Nate and Charmian. There's such an Atticus/Scout vibe to it, which just makes my entire soul happy.

Also, I've decided Charmian is officially my favorite character of yours alone for this line alone:

“If you tell me a Bible story I am going to hit you.”

Love you! More please. 

this leaving us hanging bit you've got going is so not fair, i hope you know.

and now that charmain is all worried something bad's going to happen, i am too. damn you! you are pure evil woman, but it is so very entertaining.

you are full of so much win for the acting crack.

lucas is like, mr. doom and gloom, isn't he? i'll let it slide because he's pretty.

i don't know why, but the thought of justin running from demons cracks me up every single time i read this. and that means you are awesome.

so more now. please and thank you.