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haha oh yes, grandpa is so very much fun.
haha more insanity is on it's way soon, i swear!
thank ya my dear! i appreciate it!
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lmao i am so glad everybody loves the crotchety old man.
thank ya my dear! very much appreciated!
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haha oh yes.. the one everybody thinks is off his rocker just had to be the sane one. lol.
ooohh... yes. totally whacked out family. lol.
thank ya hun! i appreciate it!
Author's Response: lmfao good lord... you guys are starting to freak me out with all the old man love.
well goddamn you're a productive little shit, aren't you?
oh trace - so adorable yet so incredibly stupid. yeah i think if justin's gonna leave her with anyone without her trying to split it might not be wisest to leave her with the one she can outsmart the easiest, haha. still him locking her in a closet is priceless, as i already told you.
and grandpa is so so my favorite. i'm gonna marry him.
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haha apparently laziness makes me productive. who knew?
well, yes. trace certainly isn't the brightest crayon in the box, but i still love him for it.
haha really? you wanna marry the 70-something year old man? you are so special.
thank ya lady! mucho appreciated!
so, you posted this crazy sometimes between 6 am and 9:30. you like those detective skills of mine? lmao
ok, really. grandpa is my favorite. hands down. and trace, that little shit needs to be locked up somewhere! who locks someone in the damn closet?!
ok, more. now.
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haha umm... yeah. it was around 6:30 ish i think. this is what happens when i can't sleep. lmao
haha grandpa is pretty awesome, s totally helped with the 'there's no escape' line.
lmfao well... it's trace, he's special.
thank ya lady!
*sigh*
I didn't mean anything offensive by my feedback. Considering how much I love your stories(check your feedback, you'll see me plenty), this one just seemed to lack what the others had(for me) but thats nothing to say how its written, or you as the author, I just think the characters and whats happening is just too "come on now, are you serious" for me.....
I'm sure there are others who are saying the same thing.... I'm just the one who wrote it, but I guess b/c I'm used to more realistic type stories from you, this one is over my head...
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as i said before, it's meant to be ridiculous. it's meant to be a little on the unbelievable side, because i'm doing it solely for the comedic factor. and i'm well aware that alot of people probably won't enjoy it, and as i said before, there isn't a thing wrong with that. i'm a firm believer in 'to each his own.'
and you're right... this isn't as realistic as my other stories, and that is by design. i wanted to do something silly and fun. realism wasn't a concern.
but on the other hand, it's fanfiction. therefore, it's all pretty unrealistic, as far as i'm concerned.
i'm not trying to be a bitch, and i'm not trying to create any bad blood here. so, i'll leave it at that.
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haha that was all glow's idea... i was stuck on the crazy old man, she suggest alan arkin, and viola. lol
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lol yay! hilarity is the goal here, so very glad to hear it's working! haha
thanks for reading and reviewing! i appreciate it a ton!
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lmao i had entirely too much fun writing that whole scene.
thank ya my dear! i appreciate it a bunch!
no but for real, i want to marry grandpa. though i'm sure he'd hate me too lmao it's cool i can work with that
and i don't know what you're talking about, it's easy to lie to children! hahaha
but now that trace is in the mix, i want to know how the hell this is gonna go down cause i suspect he's shit at keeping secrets, lol.
more now, woman!
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haha dude... he hates everyone, so... yes. lol
lmfao umm... yes... trace and secrets probably won't mix. we shall see. haha.
on it's way... soon... maybe. haha. thank ya my dear!
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i don't mean to sound rude or anything when i say this, but it seems like the point of this story is a little over your head.
it's not about how and if she'll get away, it's not about calling him out. it's really not that deep. the whole thing, in essence, is a joke. it's meant to be silly, it's meant to be out there, it's meant to be ridiculous. i'm not trying to create some shakesperian masterpiece thing here. it's supposed to be funny, end of story.
i'm well aware of the fact that it's not going to be everyone's bag, and that's perfectly fine. but, if you're not enjoying something, a simple solution would be to stop reading. or better yet, offer some type of constructive criticism, rather than just blast it from pillar to post.
why is this stupid girl falling for his family?!? oh yeah, it's because crazy is fun. hahah
and trace is babysitting? TRACE?!?! wow. justin needs new friends
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lmao because they're all nuts, her included?
haha i have no clue what you're talking about. trace is the epitome of responsible! lol
thank ya lady! much appreciated!
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haha why is everybody assuming trace is gonna be the fuck up? poor little guy. lmao.
thank ya lady! much appreciated!
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lmao ellie is... well... bits and pieces of her seem to be coming straight from my personality and children just creep me out... so yes. haha.
haha yes... all the nutjobs in one room will equal all sorts of fun. lol.
thank ya hun! i appreciate it a bunch!
