lykeoilnwater (Signed) on Jan 29, 2010 03:33 pm (Chapter 3)
ugh, this is hard... i feel sorry for kaci. i feel sorry for gretchen & i feel sorry for justin. way to mess w/ my brain! i love it though, haha

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it!  I'm working on Chapter 13 right now so keep reading!  Thanks for the review!


lykeoilnwater (Signed) on Jan 29, 2010 03:27 pm (Chapter 2)
wow... this situation is totally balls. poor gretch =/  that letter was touching though. justin, you asshole! moving on to the next chap...


lykeoilnwater (Signed) on Jan 29, 2010 03:20 pm (Chapter 1)
hahahahaha! i love leo already. its so frustrating when ppl have to talk about their whole life story before they tell you what you really want to know, but it's really freaking funny as well :-D hmm... i wonder who jt's tying the knot with...


lykeoilnwater (Signed) on Jan 29, 2010 03:16 pm (The Cast)
your little boy is absolutely ADORABLE!

Author's Response: Thanks :)


musicmel (Signed) on Jan 24, 2010 03:56 pm (Chapter 11)
Oh yes! They are going to the room!! :) I'm glad Justin went through witht he wedding!

Author's Response: I didn't want Justin to be a complete flake...and I needed the story to progress :)  About half done with the next chapter!


XxSmurfettexX (Anonymous) on Jan 24, 2010 06:07 am (Chapter 11)
Oooooooh, them being drunk in a hotel room with mroe alcohol is a recipie for either disaster or a beautiful ending of some sort. Update soon!

Author's Response: I have part of the next chapter written so after I get done with my homework (hate college) I'll write more. 


musicmel (Signed) on Jan 22, 2010 09:43 pm (Chapter 10)

Ok, I didn't expect him to die. I want her to hurt him for this.

Great update though!



Author's Response: Him dying was a surprise to myself...I wanted him to pay for what he did, but I was done with his character.  He is just like my son's father and I didn't want him to have anymore recognition in my fun story :)  Thanks for the review :)


musicmel (Signed) on Jan 14, 2010 08:02 pm (Chapter 9)

So close with Max! I hope this is him.

And YAY!!!! for JC!



Keediluv (Signed) on Jan 13, 2010 03:22 am (Chapter 7)

Shut the front door?!  Not the baby....girl, you got my stomach in knots.  

P.S-Love the internalizing of these two, it's charming...and dare I say sexy.

Ki 



Author's Response: Thanks for the review...I have more written and will post it tomorrow (Thursday) afternoon!


Keediluv (Signed) on Jan 13, 2010 03:17 am (Chapter 6)

I'm so giddy that he's sorta dating.  I think they make a sweet couple...I'm excited!

Ki 



isobo (Anonymous) on Jan 12, 2010 10:53 pm (Chapter 8)
I really do like the story alot and cant wait to read more.

Author's Response: I just saw your review...thank you so much!  I hope you've been keeping up with me.  I'm writing chapter 13 right now!


musicmel (Signed) on Jan 12, 2010 12:41 pm (Chapter 8)

I'm not surprised at all that Justin showed up. I think a part of Justin really does love her but he screwed up and needs to move on with his new fiance.

Jc being there for her is just amazing. I was glad they used his name for the reward!!!!



Author's Response:

Justin really does love her but he still has some growing up to do.  He's not very understanding of a "normal" person's reality!

I'm so excited for what's to come :)



musicmel (Signed) on Jan 11, 2010 06:27 pm (Chapter 7)

NOOO!!!!! I kinda thought something horrible was going to happy with her son.

I hope that JC helps her find him :(



musicmel (Signed) on Jan 11, 2010 07:31 am (Chapter 6)

Sorry, my phone wouldnt let me review for some reason. I am loving JC's bluntness... I am off to read the new update! Keep em' coming girly!!



Author's Response: I have Chapters 8 and 9 and half of 10 written.  Something about them is irking me so I'm giving myself a day off to recoop then go in and fix it.


Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jan 10, 2010 01:11 pm (Chapter 7)
Max has to be okay. I just hope that JC can be there to comfort her through this rough time.

Author's Response: The certainty of Max's future has been written.  It's in the editing phase right now.  There's a couple sections that I'm not real happy about so I'm working on those! Thanks for the review!




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