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Mack (Anonymous) on Jul 30, 2010 02:06 pm (Chapter 6: One Wild Night)
Aw, yes, the skydiving and the Bon Jovi concert. Ok, I loved JC in this chapter because he made me laugh so hard. Usually people don't write him as one to be comedic but I loved it. But i loved it even better 'cause you added BON JOVI! I absolutely LOVE Bon Jovi. Ahem. great chapter!

Author's Response: Bon Jovi is my ultimate musical obsession. They are genius. And, of course, I had to have Ana love them! JC has a quirky sense of humor, and I find him hilarious! Adorable and hilarious! Thanks for the love!



Mack (Anonymous) on Jul 30, 2010 02:05 pm (Chapter 5: Caring for a Friend)
I'm reviewing the chapters I missed, can't believe I missed this many. Anyway, this one was my absolute fav when I first read it. The guys being all protective made me laugh. I love them being protective. And the ending was sweet. I love this couple, as you know.



XxSmurfettexX (Anonymous) on Jul 30, 2010 09:35 am (Chapter 19: Don't Stop)
Don't stop mut be your favorite song of the moment, I don't blame ya. So, I loved the whole chapter. Him learning spanish for her made my heart melt. That's so sweet. I loved the ending so much, Tyler cracks me up. Update as soon as possible! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: "Don't Stop" was totally on replay for a good while! Learning another language for someone is the ultimate sweet thing to do - it demonstrates that you're willing to do all that you can to communicate with them on another level. Tyler just makes me want to laugh, so he has to be the jokester!



Mack (Anonymous) on Jul 03, 2010 06:31 am (Chapter 18: Shoes! Shoes! Shoes!)

I loved it, as usual, and you should know that because...yes (haha, i had to put that in there) Oh, JC and his shoes. I'd throw a fit if someone left their shoes around all the time too. Ouch, the dancing instructer sounds brutal! I don't think I've heard that song before, gotta try and find it now. The few ending lines were sweet but sat weirdly with me too. Maybe that's what you wanted. Please update soon!



Author's Response:

LOL. You're too silly. Sorry for the wait! Shoes - omg. It was such a big issue with my roommate when we moved in - shoes! ah!

Rick is brutal, but so is Mack - ;p. I forgot to put in the song credit, but I've added it now. Its a Tamia song. Its beautiful. The ending will tie in at the end - I promise. You're so intuitive...i love it! Thanks for the love hun!




shan030709 (Signed) on Apr 26, 2010 07:08 pm (Chapter 16: Oh)
So, you leave us hanging for over a month???  I so totally love this story and hope that you update it soon!!!  I want to see what happens with the moving in!!!

Author's Response:

sorry...i needed to get hit w/ inspiration again!




AmberW (Signed) on Feb 26, 2010 05:42 pm (Chapter 14: Tonight's the Night)
WOW.  That's all I can say. :)

Author's Response:

thats all i could say too... ;)




AmberW (Signed) on Feb 26, 2010 12:43 pm (Chapter 13: Waiting for a Spark...)
I think I'm going to enjoy their trip to Rio :)

Author's Response: i think they will too.... ;)



musicmel (Signed) on Feb 26, 2010 12:06 pm (Chapter 7: Lay Your Hands on Me)

Secret lovers!! That makes relationships harder however it also would give them some private time.

I reallly think you are an amazing writer. Hopefully I will finish when you have posted this weekend.



Author's Response: Secret lovers -- i know all this too well. Thank you so much for the compliment. Chapter 13 is coming right up....hold on tight!



musicmel (Signed) on Feb 22, 2010 12:39 pm (Chapter 2 – Game, Curves, and A Whole Lotta Sass)

Seriously that Alanis song is one of my favorites ever! I saw Kelly Clarkson cover that very song in concert and wow! Just wow! Anyways the story… lol I think she is going to be a tough one. I could see her coming between Justin/JC. I hope not but they both seem very interested.



Author's Response: great song & Kelly's version is phenomenal! she is a tough one....u're intuitive, huh? we'll see what happens



FaithBreaker (Signed) on Feb 05, 2010 08:35 pm (Chapter 9: Just one little...)
aww they are so cute together i love this story keep updating 

Author's Response:

i find myself introducing myself as Ana...lol

Thanks for the love!




AmberW (Signed) on Feb 03, 2010 08:31 pm (Chapter 8: Bye Bye for Now)
I'm loving this!  Keep updating!!!



JTimm86 (Signed) on Feb 01, 2010 11:51 pm (Chapter 7: Lay Your Hands on Me)
Love, Love, Love! Age aint nothin but a number! JC def needs someone carefree in his life and Ana seems to fit that perfectly. Please update soon!!

Author's Response:

{super duper late, BUT...] Exactly! Age is really nothing, unless they're underage. lol. I think JC represents everyone that takes too seriously to harboring a talent, a dream, or a craft. We lose sight of the things that matter - like living life. Thanks for the review!




XxSmurfettexX (Anonymous) on Jan 23, 2010 08:02 pm (Chapter 4 -- Maria, Maria)
Ooooh, it's gettin' hot between the two of 'em. Wonder how long it's going to take for them to get together. I'm enjoying this story so much, you better update soon.

Author's Response: next chapter is coming right up! stay tuned!



XxSmurfettexX (Anonymous) on Jan 23, 2010 08:01 pm (Chapter 3 - Start of a friendship…)
Dusting the courts? That seriously made me laugh out loud. You're doing an awesome job.

Author's Response: its such a nerdy comment but i love it



XxSmurfettexX (Anonymous) on Jan 23, 2010 08:00 pm (Chapter 2 – Game, Curves, and A Whole Lotta Sass)

“Look at that body! Damn, I didn’t know dancing could do the body so good,” Joey hissed as he playfully bit his fist to demonstrate his appreciation for her body.

Oh man, that's so Joey. You got his characteristics down pat.



Author's Response: lol...thank you, i try.





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