Anonymous (Signed) on Jan 13, 2012 02:15 pm (
Chapter 28: The Miracle Worker)
Ack! It's close to a year since you last updated! I still can't wait to see what happens next. =)
Keediluv (Signed) on May 24, 2011 10:20 pm (
Chapter 28: The Miracle Worker)
This is so sweet! I love that she got a chance to visit with Miss Diane. She needed to be able to release what she had been holding on to. And if JC isn't back to his normal, sweet, loving self?! I need him for about a week or two. I hope the both of you don't feel neglected lol. I'll starting to work my way back :) Love you girl and great chapter!
Ki
Mack_Attack22 (Signed) on Apr 12, 2011 10:59 pm (
Chapter 28: The Miracle Worker)
A normal date night, that's what Ana needed. Good for her, getting back on track. The whole chapter was perfect, can't wait to read more.
Keediluv (Signed) on Apr 05, 2011 04:00 am (
Chapter 26: Fly High, My Angel)
Heartbreaking, OMG! Seriously, this chapter is amazing and I remember where I was when I heard about it too. You did us Aaliyah fans proud mama, excellent work. :)
Author's Response: And where have you been hiding, missy?!?! Hhmph, I'm feeling a bit neglected!
Thank you for reviewing, lady...now, come back to us!
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Mar 08, 2011 09:14 pm (
Chapter 27: New York Minute: Right Behind You)
Glad Ana's getting back into the swing of things. more, more!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! She's gonna come back swingin'!
Anonymous (Signed) on Mar 08, 2011 09:13 pm (
Chapter 27: New York Minute: Right Behind You)
Read all of this in one day. Love love love it! Ana rocks! Post more soon.
Author's Response: You did not!!! Oh my gosh, thank you! Thanks for taking the time to read it (in one day!). I really do appreciate the feedback! Ana is my little soldier, I love her. So, thank you!
Mack (Anonymous) on Mar 08, 2011 06:26 pm (
Chapter 27: New York Minute: Right Behind You)
D'awwww. I loved everything about this chapter. Justin cracked me up. and yaaay, Ana's going back to normal. She's gotta ease up on the drinkin' though. *nods*
Great chapter, my dear. Ana's pain was understandable, she shouldn't be so hard on herself. Update soon!
Author's Response: I really do appreciate your feedback (you made this sick lady's day!). Thank you! Ana has definitely been through some rough times, and she's only getting stronger. Thanks hun!
Mack_Attack22 (Signed) on Feb 25, 2011 11:52 am (
Chapter 26: Fly High, My Angel)
Awwww. Poor Ana. She's in so much shock. Thank God JC's taking care of her. He's right, it's so weird seeing her broken down like that. Be strong, Ana!
Mack (Anonymous) on Feb 10, 2011 01:48 pm (
Chapter 25: Turning Back Time...)
Ooh, I like this one better. The ending was such a tear-jearker, jerk. Haha. (Lame joke.) JC better be there for her or he'll be at the top of my Characters to Hate Lit. *nods*
shan030709 (Signed) on Feb 10, 2011 01:27 pm (
Chapter 25: Turning Back Time...)
Oh No! I was kind of wondering is this situation would come up!! I hope it will be JC to the rescue. Please don't leave us hanging long!!
Mack_Attack22 (Signed) on Feb 06, 2011 11:00 am (
Chapter 25: Turning Back Time...)
It was a filler, like you said, but it was sweet seeing them together through the day. Like being a fly-on-the-wall of a married couple still in thier honeymoon phase. Great job! Can't wait to see what kind of drama the tour brings.
Keediluv (Signed) on Dec 08, 2010 07:33 am (
Chapter 24: Knight in shining armor...)
Good chapter mama! I need to see a little more effort on Josh's part before I'm on his side again. Who are we kidding?? I'd be down with him through whatever, as will you. :) Again, I enjoyed the chapter and I'm so glad one of her sisters was around for this one. Their exchange is classic. Loved it! :)
Mack (Anonymous) on Dec 07, 2010 09:01 pm (
Chapter 24: Knight in shining armor...)
“I don’t know why you even bother making it straight. A little water, and poof! You’re Justin."
My all time favorite line. You sure know how to make a girl giggle. I loved the whole thing. FINALLY JC admits that he was an ass. Why are boys so blind sometimes. I loved how raw yet real the emotions were, I wanted to cry for them and then give them a hug when things went right. Also, Ana and Myra crack me up, remind me of my sisters actually. Great job, hun!
Mack (Anonymous) on Nov 16, 2010 02:41 pm (
Chapter 23: Jaded)
And I love this song too! Jeeze, woman, you knowhwo to pick 'em. I loved the addition of Aaliyah, it made everything great (not that the story isn't great by itself). I hope you udpate soon!
Mack (Anonymous) on Nov 16, 2010 02:40 pm (
Chapter 22: Shoulda Been You...)
1) I love her Godfather. He's awesome in a very protective way. 2) I loved Justin so much in this chapter. I wanted to give him a giant hug, he was so sweet. 3) This line alone almost made me cry: Once under the spray of the showerhead, she lost her battle. The salty tears raced down her face, mixing with the hot water that poured above her head. Should've reviewed this earlier. I know I suck, but I'm makin' up for it. Great job!
