Comments For Dumbass
DossboughtmeDiamonds (Signed) on Jul 15, 2012 01:03 pm (Dumbass)
Haha I laughed out loud at the way it ended. I didn't see it coming and was pleasantly surprised. Great job!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! It was a nice surprise to get a message that I had a review. I'm glad you liked it and the twist ending. I've been toying with the idea of writing another version of this that works out the way I thought it would when I first started writing it, but I'm afraid the characters will take over again. LOL.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! It was a nice surprise to get a message that I had a review. I'm glad you liked it and the twist ending. I've been toying with the idea of writing another version of this that works out the way I thought it would when I first started writing it, but I'm afraid the characters will take over again. LOL.
grishy (Anonymous) on Jan 17, 2010 06:49 pm (Dumbass)
Funny, intelligent and cute story...BUT JC is not a dumbass! hahahaha, I'm kidding
Author's Response: I know! I was thinking of putting a disclaimer in there because really, JC is my favourite guy, but I just had to rib on him a bit. And "head in the clouds" just doesn't sound as good as "dumbass". LOL. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Author's Response: I know! I was thinking of putting a disclaimer in there because really, JC is my favourite guy, but I just had to rib on him a bit. And "head in the clouds" just doesn't sound as good as "dumbass". LOL. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jan 16, 2010 05:00 pm (Dumbass)
Wow...I did not see that one coming either! Cute story.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I didn't see Chris coming either, but it was fun to twist things up a bit. I may have to write another one where JC actually gets the girl.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I didn't see Chris coming either, but it was fun to twist things up a bit. I may have to write another one where JC actually gets the girl.
azchickadee (Signed) on Jan 16, 2010 09:45 am (Dumbass)
ooo...interesting turn of events...didn't see that one coming! great little clip :)
Author's Response: LOL! I didn't see it coming either. JC was supposed to get the girl. But then the part of my brain that thought up the whole stupid hair and dumbass lines decided to take it in another direction--maybe I should just blame it on Chris ;;)
Author's Response: LOL! I didn't see it coming either. JC was supposed to get the girl. But then the part of my brain that thought up the whole stupid hair and dumbass lines decided to take it in another direction--maybe I should just blame it on Chris ;;)
