Comments For Lost Soul
rev0586 (Signed) on Sep 03, 2007 12:29 am (Separation)
whoa this is jusr awesome i just came back from seeing daddy yankee and u updated lost soul its great i tell u
so they both went w/ britney and i guess the same thing is gonna happen w/ paige kinda like history repeats itself
so they both went w/ britney and i guess the same thing is gonna happen w/ paige kinda like history repeats itself
goodies54 (Anonymous) on Sep 03, 2007 12:23 am (Separation)
Omgaaaaahh. I love the end of this chapter. So JC did it? That asshole. Ugh I'm so wanting her to like accidently fall on his lips or something lol. I wonder if justin will get out
goodies54 (Anonymous) on Aug 31, 2007 07:08 am (Come Clean)
dang i wonder what secrets he has and isnt tellin anyone yet
Author's Response: oh man they all are hiding so much... next chapter is gonna get into it a little bit. lol im writing it now and im like damn, lol im twisted for thinkin up this stuff.
Author's Response: oh man they all are hiding so much... next chapter is gonna get into it a little bit. lol im writing it now and im like damn, lol im twisted for thinkin up this stuff.
rev0586 (Signed) on Aug 30, 2007 11:29 pm (Come Clean)
hmmm getting to the nitty gritty i see jc is def. trying to hide something i hope nothing bad happens to paige for snooping
Author's Response: he def is hiding something... even justin is. the next chapter is in the works and its going to reveal a lot and string a lot of loose strings together. thanks marina!
Author's Response: he def is hiding something... even justin is. the next chapter is in the works and its going to reveal a lot and string a lot of loose strings together. thanks marina!
alimera (Signed) on Aug 30, 2007 02:05 pm (Come Clean)
oh wow, i wonder what is in that paper that JC gave to her?? i'm intrigued--update again soon!
Author's Response: thank you for the review! that paper is definitely going to be a big piece of evidence. I'm currently writing the next update... it should be up sometime this week. Thanks for sticking with me!
Author's Response: thank you for the review! that paper is definitely going to be a big piece of evidence. I'm currently writing the next update... it should be up sometime this week. Thanks for sticking with me!
Mariah (Signed) on Aug 30, 2007 12:43 pm (Come Clean)
Oh man! That was so good. You know how I feel about this story. People are lovin it for reason. LOL JC thought they were whores that was cute. We all know I'd be in their place fo free. Yes, that's how I work. :p Anyway, I can't wait to see what happens with the rest of the report. Everything is flowin nice girl. YOU'RE GOOD, get over it. :*
Author's Response: lmao seriously, if i were Paige, i'd be like... "Lorena... ok you can leave now... JC and I have some business to take care of." lmao. I'm glad you liked it girl... I already started the new chapter... the juices are flowing. lol.
Author's Response: lmao seriously, if i were Paige, i'd be like... "Lorena... ok you can leave now... JC and I have some business to take care of." lmao. I'm glad you liked it girl... I already started the new chapter... the juices are flowing. lol.
aria (Signed) on Aug 30, 2007 12:12 pm (Come Clean)
Awesome chapter. I don't know which guy to believe... it's so hard to distinguish who is telling the truth here. I can't wait to find out what's on that sheet of paper.
Author's Response: It's sad that the boys need eachother so much and things are just extremely messed up for the both of them. And That paper could be anything... you're just going to have to see. Thanks for reviewing!!
Author's Response: It's sad that the boys need eachother so much and things are just extremely messed up for the both of them. And That paper could be anything... you're just going to have to see. Thanks for reviewing!!
d_simplicity (Signed) on Aug 30, 2007 02:23 am (Come Clean)
Fantastic! more soon. poor justin. poor jc. can't wait to find out the truth! :)
Author's Response: thank you! im definitely trying to knock out the updates as fast as possible.
Author's Response: thank you! im definitely trying to knock out the updates as fast as possible.
goodies54 (Anonymous) on Aug 26, 2007 02:52 pm (One Shot)
I need more! I wonder what JC knows
Author's Response: haha he knows alot more than he's saying... thats for sure. :D
Author's Response: haha he knows alot more than he's saying... thats for sure. :D
goodies54 (Anonymous) on Aug 26, 2007 02:42 pm (Jaded)
oh man. its getting good. i loved this story! keep updating!
i just wrote something similar to this last night without the murder thing but i think yours is way better. love the detail and how u have many ways of saying something. im running dry myself lol. ok done noveling it up on here! lol
alimera (Signed) on Aug 06, 2007 09:29 pm (One Shot)
justin actually showed some emotion today--now i'm curious to know what was behind it! don't take so long to update again girlie--this story is getting good!!
rev0586 (Signed) on Aug 06, 2007 08:26 pm (One Shot)
what no teasing justin today whats going on in yr brain today shame on u lol j/p but i really hope she gets some dirt on jc but i dont want her 2 get hurt either
Vessy (Signed) on Aug 06, 2007 03:04 pm (One Shot)
Cool, I hope you won't get writers block again :) I can't wait for more
Mariah (Signed) on Aug 06, 2007 12:56 pm (One Shot)
Da da da *snap snap* da da da da *snap snap* da da da da, da da da da, da da da da *snap snap*. I'm really scared JC might do something bad. I really hope he doesn't, funny Justin says he's worse? Is it true? DAMN UPDATE MA! Love you. You know I love it much. :D
Author's Response: i dont think its true... i think that Justins just afraid of some competition.
Author's Response: i dont think its true... i think that Justins just afraid of some competition.
