Comments For The Big Mistake
kaye (Anonymous) on Jul 16, 2010 11:42 am (Chapter 1)
if i could give it a thumbs down and an F i would - not creative at all!
EvilAngelBrandi (Signed) on Jul 12, 2010 05:43 pm (Chapter 1)
Author's Response: thanks, yeah I need to fix that.
Real quick, you might wanna re-edit this one... At least for me, it's coming up as just one big paragraph...
But, other than that, I really like this story! I read it on the original page where you had posted stories... Just hadn't reviewed it on here yet.. Lol!
~B
Author's Response: thanks, yeah I need to fix that.
