I actually really enjoyed this story! Can't wait until the second :D Great job!
Hey... You ever gonna get around to writing part 2??? I miss reading your stories! :( Love you, girl!
~B
Author's Response: i KNOW! I swear I am going to get to this - I have it all like in my head. It's getting it out that is the hard part. I want to write an outline this time and send it to you and the girls before I get into it. This story for some reason take so long to write becuase there is so much going on and to much to remember.
“Hey, before you guys run off… a little people please?” Kim asked trying to get out from under JC. She was trying to be careful about it, not that she could have woken him up if she wanted too, but she didn’t want him to get hurt in the process. (I'm guessing that you meant help.)
“What is wrong, honey? You have been awfully quiet tonight.” JC finally asked. His eyes appeared heavy as he spoke to her. Kim just smiled, it wasn’t odd for her to be quiet, maybe she had been a little more talkative around him at least she was, until Brandi’s comments earlier regarding the guy being in some psychological trace or something like that. (I think you mean trance...)
(Oh, and the first sentence, the name's Brandi not Brand... Lol!)
I can't believe it's almost over... Time for work on #2... :-)
~B
Author's Response:
Yes, I think there is only 1 or 2 more chapters! I already have Ideas for Kidnapped 2! I need to get them all together so I can find them when I need them. I hope to wrap this all up soon.
I made those changes on my master files, I'll get the posted story updated soon - thanks for the edits.
Author's Response: yeah the first 2 chapters are a little slow, I guess I should have left them out. It gets better around Chp 3, at least that is where the action starts.
Lol! Awesome!!! And, yes, I probably would end up spraying myself while trying to spray Justin... But you're forgetting the glasses... They would help block some of it... Lol!
And I can DEFINITELY see Chris not thinking about the pepper spray and getting it on his lips!!! Too funny! Keep it up!
(And ignore the moronic haters who think it's not suspicious that they're 4 different negative reviews on 3 different stories all within minutes of each other... Or that, apparently, there are 2 people who are too stupid to spell "suck"! Lol! It's another attack by the "Twitter twit"!!! LMAO! [Get a life, ho!])
~B
Yay!!! I LOVED the "pineapple" look! :-)
And poor Lance.... He really is the odd man out in this one now, isn't he?
Great work, hun! Keep it up!
~B
Author's Response: I know Lance is kind of odd man out right now, but I haven't forgotten about him, he is going to have a big part in... Kidnapped 2!
Author's Response: the right choices or the most entertaining ones? You know me by know, I like to try to keep you guys on the edge of your seats.
Author's Response: thanks, I am glad you guys are enjoying the 'ride' so far.
Author's Response: thank you - i love posative feed back, it gets me excited. I hope to have more up soon - this is about to wrap up though i think.
Freaking awesome! You definitely made Kim's first time pretty d@mn special! Amazing job! ;-)
Author's Response: thank you I am trying to to disappoint.
<3 this story. please update more soon!
ugh this is so good! :D
D: cliiffyy! >:O
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OMG! OMG! OMG!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Did that just happened? Jc's off? OMG, No way! I was not expecting that at all.
I'm so going to kill you! Why? Oh, Why?
I hate you because you decided to lost Jc (and don't say it was Kim, you wrote it.. u.u Poor Kim tough) and I love you because It made this story even more, more and more interesting! I'm sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo excited! I want to know what's hapeening next so badly, I'm starting to get addicted to your story! Your fault!
Kidding! xD
But seariously, what's hapenning now? Is Katy going to find Jc? Is he comming back? - I doubt. Is he calling the police and with that is the end of this adventure? Is something else going to happend? ARGH I want to know!
That was so perfect! Can't wait to read more! You're the best.
Author's Response: you are going to give me a 'big head' lol
