Author's Response: yay, i got one right! Lol i knew you would love that. The next few chapters i think might be important ones. And I had like another brain child regaurding this one - I love that feeling.
Author's Response:
Thanks I am trying really hard to keep things...interesting. lol. My firend and I were just talking about that! SOme I don't think the kidnapping would go this well. hehe, but it's fun to thinking about it.
I love all the feed back I am getting, I wasn't sure that anyone would like it when I started.
OMG! This chapter was soooo funny! xD Oh, the good old Jc.
"You are all nuts. But she is on a whole other level. I would make out with anyone else in this room, including Lance before I would even touch her.” JC explained pointing his figure at Katy as he spoke. If Katy even remotely cared she might have been hurt by what he was saying.
“Really? You and Lance? That would be so hot.” Katy beamed as her thoughts drifted to a place that no one else dare to go."
LOOOOOOOOOOL! Hey! Now my mind is going there too.. -.- Look what you're doing to my innocence! Bad Katie, bad, bad Katie! xD LoOoOoOoL
Ok, I have a little doubt here:
"It wasn’t until she heard Mandy squeal that she realized that Kim had lost the coin toss and therefore now had to do the love scene with JC."
Kim is going to do the love scene, isn't she? Please tell that's her! xD LoL
I feel really that are going happen things that are to be interesting:
- Brandi & Chris's date.
- Justin & Katy conversation ( "She hoped he understood what she had done and maybe she could get him alone later to talk about it."). I do think that he understood although, but I think that They're going to talk anyway.. Or I hope so.. LoL!
- And the video! Haha
Can't wait! Keep the good work.. ;)
Author's Response: Yes Kim is going to do the love scene. :)
Hiii.. *-* now I'm here.. :P
I've been reading and searching other stories to pass some time and guess what: your stills my favorite!
Thank god you have time to write again.. :P
Uhhhhhhhhh.. date? Bring it!
Can wait! Sounds exciting.. :P
Author's Response: awe thank you - I am trying really hard to keep it interesting.
Finally! :-) Can't wait to read more.... You know how much I enjoy reading your stories.... (And I've NEVER been a very patient person while waiting for new chapters... Lol!) I hope things start going better for you so that you have some more time to update....
~Brandi
Author's Response: hehe - what are you talking about now I have nothing better to do than write. I hope I can get this one going again with regular updates.
:] oh, the JC-ness!
hehe cant wait for that more on his and kims part
Great so far, btw.
“What get kidnapped and then seduced in a bathroom?” Brandi joked. She could tell that Chris was struggling to find his words, though she could tell if it was nerves or if he was trying to lie to her.
“Well the being kidnapped is a new experience for me, but I have to say it does seem to have some perks. What I meant was I don’t have meaningless sex with random women.” Chris said.
That kinda makes it sound like he's saying that what happened between them was "meaningless" since he said he doesn't "normally do this kind of stuff" and then goes on with he doesn't "have meaningless sex with random women".... In my mind, I was ready for Brandi to ask if if that was all she was... Just meaningless sex... Brandi does have some SERIOUS trust issues when it come to guys based on her past relationships, you know... She's gonna be expecting the worst to happen... (Of course, those are just my thoughts about it though... :-) )
Author's Response:
your thoughts are important to me! I don't want all my charatoers to seem a like. using other people as 'models' is helpful. and You are right Brandi should have a more apparent trust issues - that makes it interesting and Chris did try to pull a fast one on her already. will have to edit this a little.
"In one swift motion he dropped his hands and forced himself between her legs so that he could kiss her." Not sure if I'm the only one but (being me), when reading this part, my mind went a completely different place.... Like he was pushing Katy's legs apart to kiss her there... Lol! Not on the lips on her face... :-) It may have just been me but, knowing my mind & yours, my mind went straight for the deep part of the gutter. Other than that, I thought it was really good! Your stories are always awesome, hun. You should realize that by now. You've obviously got some devoted fans on this site already waiting (like I am) for you to post more. :-) Keep it up! ~B
Author's Response: hum... yeah might need to re word that a little. but then again my mind was probably in the gutter too at that point.
Author's Response: yes, well wait and see... hehe
“I was trying to warn you earlier, you weren’t supposed to investigate the sound you nimrod. The ones that investigate strange noises are always die first in horror movies.” JC yelled.
LMFAO! I'm mad that I am just now finding this story! Loving this!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading - I am trying really hard to finish it up - but not finish it too quickly :) I am so glad you are enjoying it so far.
LMAO! “We have limited means, but we have a crossbow?”
Too funny! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Yeah for now, I got 'stuck' - i hope to have more soon though.
Author's Response: oops sorry B! it has been awhile since i have seen you. We need to get together and refreash my memory.
