Comments For Some Girls (Dance With Women)
musicmel (Signed) on Mar 14, 2010 01:14 pm (Might Have To Peel Me Off The Ceiling )
I didn't expect her to want to make a video! She is a naughty one that is hiding!
musicmel (Signed) on Mar 14, 2010 01:02 pm (Just Look At Everyone As Equal)
Oh oh... she is going back to his place!
kacavendam (Anonymous) on Mar 14, 2010 09:03 am (Might Have To Peel Me Off The Ceiling )
Finally update:). And I can't belive you left it here:((. I supose next chapter will be mind blowing:)
Bastet_Baby (Signed) on Mar 07, 2010 04:00 pm (Just Look At Everyone As Equal)
What you can't leave me hanging right there? PMS
musicmel (Signed) on Feb 27, 2010 06:13 pm (All Moving On Each Other....)
I so didn't expect her to be a virgin. I'm intrigued and want more! Great job!
ltaylor03 (Signed) on Feb 27, 2010 05:37 pm (All Moving On Each Other....)
hahaaha. poor girl almost died at the site of him. i totally would've hit it. lol.
and writing in first person is fine. it's actually better sometimes because you can illustrate better the characters thoughts instead of always saying "she wondered" or "she thought"
liking it so far :)
ltaylor03 (Signed) on Feb 27, 2010 05:32 pm (Love Being Single On A Night Like This)
Damn JC doesn't beat around the bush. Haha. We all know he's a freak. lol.
ltaylor03 (Signed) on Feb 27, 2010 05:25 pm (Some Girls Dance With Women)
Ooooh...So JC and Chace?? I'm liking this already.
kacavendam (Anonymous) on Feb 25, 2010 05:15 am (All Moving On Each Other....)
Great chapter. Very good that he reacted the right way about her being a virgin. And I think it sounds great like this you don't have to change it to "I". Hope you update soon again
kacavendam (Anonymous) on Feb 24, 2010 03:18 am (Love Being Single On A Night Like This)
I like it so far, cant wait to see where it goes so update soon and maybe if chapters coud be longer so that there is more to read since it is very interesting story
Erin Melon (Signed) on Feb 22, 2010 06:48 pm (Some Girls Dance With Women)
Good start! Short but good - we don't get enough JC stories posted. I like how its a bit different, I wasn't expecting her to be bi? Lesbian? Which makes me more curious about what's going to happen with JC. PMS :)
