Comments For Bloodline
Covergirl (Signed) on Jul 12, 2010 12:06 am (Bloodline)
I absolutely, positively loved it! I wouldn't change a thing. So glad that her mother is willing to try.

Yeah, I love a happy ending! =D

Author's Response:

Yay! I think it spoke wonders that her mother was willing to at least try. That took a lot for her to change her mind, even slightly.

Happy Ending! Yay!
Thanks though for staying with me the entire story!




Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on Jul 07, 2010 07:40 am (Bloodline)
I reeeaaaallllly loved this ending!! I can't even put it into words how amazing this story has been, really I can't. Just know that I look forward to all you're future stories. :-) wicked love to ya my dear! ♥

Author's Response:

Thanks :) Sooo much! I don't think anyone understands how much I love when people actually like my stories. Makes me very happy :)

I have a couple stories that I'm still working on and a few new ones up my sleeve but I won't hint on those right now.

Thanks for always reading, reviewing, and enjoying the stories!!

:)




AmberW (Signed) on Jul 06, 2010 10:38 pm (Bloodline)

LOVED IT!  You have a gift for the last line leaving a lasting impression :)

Great job!



Author's Response:

It's exactly how I pictured it would end from the beginning. Even with the different routes I was going to take, I think she ended up exactly where she was supposed to in her life. Plus she gained a backbone and standing on her own two feet! 

Thanks for reading all the way through and enjoying it!

:)




JoJo (Anonymous) on Jul 06, 2010 10:29 pm (Bloodline)
I'm so sad to see this end! I enjoyed it all the way through. It has been one of my favorite stories. Thank you so much for sharing your awesome writing with us.

Author's Response:

Awe! Such kind words! I loved this story from the very first thought until the very end. I'm just glad someone other than me enjoyed it!

Thanks for sticking through this with me and through all my stories. :)




XxSmurfettexX (Anonymous) on Jul 06, 2010 08:37 pm (Bloodline)
You're not a writer? Pfft, you could've had me fooled. The entire thing...it was lovely. You brought everything together pefectly. The emotions...I felt their emtions, it was so great. You wrote it so well. I love Bells and Justin, I can't even believe that this story is over. The whole Bloodline thing...makes me glad it happened in the first place, to be honest, or else she wouldn't be the Bells we know and love. To be honest I had to read the last line to understand it but when it hit me...wow. You, Miss Mel, are an amazing writer, even though you're not a writer. I can't wait to see what else comes to your brain.

Author's Response:

I tried to get those last three paragraphs to be put from two directions. 'Bloodline' actually being how she was raised, the bloodline, and dealing with it. But also having "Bloodline' as a reference to, Justin. Because she believed in him, she loved him, he was her everything. I *hope* I managed to get that to come through or at least I hope I did.

When Justin says, "I owe... your Bloodline." I wanted him to be almost thankful that she had dealt with 'The Bloodline' because, without the bloodline it wouldn't have led her to him (or him to her)

Anyways, thank you sooo much for all your kind words! You're really amazing!

:)




jersey_tenn (Signed) on Jul 06, 2010 08:33 pm (Bloodline)
....i think i'll need to come back & give you a coherent reviews...i'm in tears. i'd be a blubbering mess of incoherent babbling. the only thing i can clearly think to say is: thank you hun.

Author's Response:

Awe! I love tears! That means I did something right!

I can't to hear what you think, without a blubbering mess!! jk, incoherent blabbling could be entertaining!

Thanks :)




Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on Jul 04, 2010 09:46 am (Present… Past… Future)
fan-f*cking-tastic ending my dear!! can't WAIT for the epilogue. :-) A+++++++++++++++++++ definitely *ahem* loved those brief little steamy scenes you threw in there. ;-)

Author's Response: I threw in just little steamy scenes, they seemed to have a great sex life on top of the amazing love they had for each other! So I had to incorporate it in the end!Thanks for always sticking with my crazy ideas and stories!! :)



sChErZo (Signed) on Jul 03, 2010 11:10 am (Present… Past… Future)
do i hear wedding bells? :)

Author's Response:

Wedding Bells? Hmm I don't know if that's the bells you will hear!

Thanks :)




XxSmurfettexX (Anonymous) on Jul 02, 2010 08:29 pm (Present… Past… Future)

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I can't beleive it! I loved this story so much and now it's overrrr! NOOOOOO! Well, all good things come to an end. Aribella and Justin are such an amazing couple, I wish I knew a couple like them (well, not in the same circumstances but you get my point)

"And to think you didn't want my timber!"

That line made me smile like a freakin' dork. Ha. Great job hun, can't wait to read what else your mind spews out. Epilogue, here I come!



Author's Response:

They really were great for each other. Even with all their obstacles they seem to find a way to overcome them. I see these two are 'fate' couples. There was something that stood between them that is hard to break. Family. But sometimes family is outweighed by love and this was an example of that.

That very line was my favorite in the entire story, I had to use it again! Plus in a weird way, I think that comment was who they were as individuals.Thanks for your kind words. I will miss these characters that's for sure! I loved this Justin! 



AmberW (Signed) on Jul 02, 2010 08:23 pm (Present… Past… Future)

What can I say???  I love it!  I'm very much looking forward to the epilogue. 

I loved the Justin in this story-he was very, well, normal.  And Arabella, I love her.  I thought she was gonna go through with marrying the jackass then have a mad torrid affair with Justin but this was so much better!

Great job!



Author's Response:

This was my favorite Justin as well. He was very normal. Even with his slight shadiness.

I don't know if I would have liked even myself if she ended up marrying Gavin. I did think about the idea of a torrid affair with Justin but I think it was better for Arabella to stand her ground.

Thanks darling :)




Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on Jul 02, 2010 09:45 am (It Is What It Is)
A+ my dear!!!   love love love!!! can't wait to see what happens next. :-)

Author's Response:

Ahh! I can't beleive it. The end it near!

Thanks :)




Mack (Anonymous) on Jul 01, 2010 11:18 am (It Is What It Is)
Awwww, he asked who she's wearing. I love how excited Justin was for her. Great chapter. I can't beleive it's almost ending!

Author's Response:

I have to say, having Justin so excited for her was one of my favorite moments. There were many in this story that I loved, but that was a good one.

Almost over :(

Thanks :)




Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on Jun 29, 2010 01:08 pm (Games)
mmm very nice my dear!! I hope bells gets the bitch good :-)

Author's Response:

Hmmm! I'm not sure if that's who Bells is! But you never know!!

thanks ;)




daisyforyou (Anonymous) on Jun 29, 2010 10:31 am (Games)
Don't leave me hanging!!!  Way to put London into her place!

Author's Response:

I'm good for leaving people hanging! Bells is really coming into her own. She is standing up for herself more and more! (More than she always has, just not with her family)

Thanks :)




Covergirl (Signed) on Jun 29, 2010 07:45 am (Games)
No disappointment here. Now it's time to make Holli pay. Great update! =)

Author's Response:

I'm glad you weren't disappointed! I know my thoughts and ideas are different from others reading!

Thanks :)






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