Comments For Persuasion
Tina (Anonymous) on Sep 10, 2010 01:26 pm (Chapter 5)
Love this. 



Timberlake (Signed) on Aug 02, 2010 07:19 pm (Chapter 5)

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!! the ending got me :( justin is the sweetest ex-boyfriend in the whole wide world. gemma, leave peter! he won't even notice lol can i just say that gemma slipping down that gravel because of justin's mini-flashing was HILARIOUS. i'm so glad i'm not the only one in love with elastic band of a man's boxer briefs ;) that was a sensual scene and i would love more of those past or present *wink*wink*nudge*nudge* update soon!



Author's Response:

Hahaha, he's sweet to us, but to Gemma he's pretty much the bane of her existance....sort of! DEAR LORD, YOU ARE NOT THE ONLY ONE WHO LOVES THE ELASTIC BAND OF MEN'S BOXER BRIEFS. It's pretty much like the third sexiest part on any man's body!!! Hahaha, you'll get your scenes eventually! Gemma's just a slow mover by nature, it takes awhile for her to get going!

I'm glad you liked the chapter! :)




Timberlake (Signed) on Aug 02, 2010 06:48 pm (Chapter 4)

Justin pushed in the chair with a thud and ran his hands up and down the wooden arms. Still looking down he answered Trace. "We're just way too different." that was such a sad moment. omg, i feel like justin's gonna have a fucking meltdown and damn it i wanna know WTF happened! all these little clues and reminders, but i want to know what shit hit the fan that caused this mess!... that is all. onto the next!



Author's Response:

Yeah, poor Justin, he's clearly still trippin about Gemma. And ohhh, you just wait until the next couple chapters...all I have to say is that Justin only allows himself to be sad for so long...after awhile it just gets old.

 

:D Fun is to come, I promise.




Timberlake (Signed) on Aug 02, 2010 06:25 pm (Chapter 3)
he was sure she thought he was a crazy stalker, now. No one shows up at your new doorstep after so long without speaking except crazy stalkers. that was one of the most hilarious things i've ever read. justin has a real problem with people touching his stuff. i love that you show that throughout the story, making justin flawed in such a normal way. i also love that he's a photographer, such a unique alternative career choice. their whole conversation was hella awkward and two points to justin for the peter burn. gemma was hella pissed her husband might not be around for their wedding - god forbid if DC calls! geez... that's a lot of time apart and no hot, passionate, electric sex to speak of? something tells me justin knows how to light it up...mmm... if only i could speak from first hand exxxperience ;) lol onto the next!

Author's Response:

BAHAHA! I'm so glad Justin's able to make you laugh! He...is paranoid in the worst ways, sometimes. And he does! He's just very protective of things he's proud of, :). Hahaha, yes, Justin was just JOKING but Gemma sort of flipped...and no, defintiely no hot, passionate, electric sex.

LOLOL Oh my god, I'm pretty sure Justin knows how to SET THINGS ON FIRE. 

I'm so glad you're liking it, by the way!




Anonymous (Anonymous) on Aug 01, 2010 06:13 pm (Chapter 5)
LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!! Can't wait for the next update and hoping that you don't keep us waiting for too long :)

Author's Response: Oh I'm so glad you're enjoying the story, and the next chapter is in the works!



Timberlake (Signed) on Aug 01, 2010 06:08 pm (Chapter 2)
ahhhhhhhh i love this story. i agree with trace, fuck that! so awkward on so many levels, but had justin been sensible, there would be no story, eh? hilarious bickering between justin and trace by the way. package will always make me giggle lol

Author's Response: Yay! Yeah trace totally knows what's up haha. And clearly, if justin would be willing to look deep enough he would acknowledge the fact that he's so hung up on gemma. But you're right, if he was reasonable there would be no story. And I'm glad you felt their discussion was funny!



Timberlake (Signed) on Aug 01, 2010 05:49 pm (Chapter 1)
you definitetly have a jane austen flair, which is definitely a compliment :) i love it so far...onto the next chapter!

Author's Response: Oh my goodness, I cannot believe you just said I have a jane austen flair!!! What a compliment! Thanks so much!

Author's Response: Oh my goodness, I cannot believe you just said I have a jane austen flair!!! What a compliment! Thanks so much!



justinzgirlkb (Anonymous) on Aug 01, 2010 02:39 pm (Chapter 5)
This story is getting beyond adorable... I'm really liking it! The way you describe the tension between Gemma and Justin is great, and they're so cute together. And that gift? Super sweet. Love this so far! Update soon! :)

Author's Response: Yay I'm glad I was able to get gemma and justins relationship across well enough. The next chapter is in the works and hopefully I will be able to get it out within the week.



Tink (Signed) on Aug 01, 2010 02:29 pm (Chapter 5)
Loving this story and can't wait to read more

Author's Response: Yay thanks! The next chapter should be up soon.



azchickadee (Signed) on Aug 01, 2010 01:38 pm (Chapter 5)
The flashback scene between the two of them was so cute!!  I want more of them like that!  lol...so we gotta figure out how to get them together!  You're doing a brilliant job with this story.  Can't wait to see what happens next! :)

Author's Response: Yay!! Haha I know I have all these flashback ideas of their lives, but I dunno where to put them! I know they just move so slow. But all in good time, all in good time!



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Jul 15, 2010 06:31 pm (Chapter 3)
This is getting really good.  I can't wait to see what you do with Justin and Gemma.  Great work!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it, even though it's taking FOREVER for me to get chapters out! Thanks for sticking with it! :)



amai84 (Signed) on Jul 13, 2010 09:50 pm (Chapter 4)
I was just thinking about this story the other day. I love it. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you liked it! I'm working on the next chapter right now, and hopefully I can get it up within the week! Thanks for the review!



azchickadee (Signed) on Jul 12, 2010 11:43 pm (Chapter 4)
I've already given you some of my thoughts on this chapter :)  but I just have to say publicly how much I love this story and the ideas you have planned!!  I love how convinced Justin is that he can do this when we all know he's just lying to himslef!  lol...The boy has still got it SO bad for her...I love that Trace keeps pushing him about it.  Hopefully someday Justin will realize what's going on and stop being so mad at Trace.  The guy is only trying to help!  lol.  Love it, girly!  Can't wait for the next one :)

Author's Response: YAY! I'm so bad at responding to reviews, and we've already talked, but I feel like a jerk just to skip it..soooo. HEY THANKS!



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Jun 09, 2010 11:12 pm (Chapter 2)
The plot thickens!  This is amazing so far.  I love it!

Author's Response: Haha, yes! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Jun 09, 2010 11:02 pm (Chapter 1)
So it was really the story synopsis that got me to this first chapter, but this first chapter is more than enough to keep me reading and wishing there were more to the story!  I love it so far!  I can't wait to see where you take this :)

Author's Response: Oh, yay! I'm so glad you like it, thank you for reading! :D





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