Comments For Yellow
princess (Anonymous) on Jan 20, 2011 05:41 pm (Wake Up Calls)
Wow just... Wow.  I am baffled at how un...mad I am, how unconfused, how undisappointed.  But at the same time I am not proud, not excited, or even nervous.  I don't know what I am other than completely in awe of the fact that you were able to make characters so brilliantly complex, beautiful, intriguing, likeable, contradictory and bedazzlingly simple that everything they do is "just them."  There are no judgements, no criticisms just pure contented enjoyment.  Your are outlandishly talented.  I am giving you a standing ovation in my head (so I won't seem crazy to other people lol) and can barely contain my curiosity as to how this ends.  Hopefully you will post more soon.



tiinydancer xx (Signed) on Jan 20, 2011 02:55 am (Fifty-Five Cents)
This story is fantastic! And a little too reflective of the current state of my life, which is bizarre considering the fact that I am not Quincy Jones' daughter/ a Hollywood writer/ friends with Justin Timberlake.

I love the way you've written these characters -- their conversations are refreshing and realistic and so reminiscent of the kind of friendship you'd expect to blossom into something more (if you weren't blinded by being one of the two people in that friendship)...

Moral compass be damned! Justin will need to man up, but reading about his indecision and Zooey's decision to go with confusion over pragmatism = solid. gold. Nice work!



Gigi (Signed) on Jan 20, 2011 02:03 am (Wake Up Calls)
Honestly I am so conflicted right now!



Heartsevolve (Anonymous) on Jan 19, 2011 11:44 pm (Wake Up Calls)
Ahhhh, SECRET RELATIONSHIP?! Kind of my favorite thing in the entire world. Mannnn, I'm not even gonna lie, I'm not really concerned about Scarlett anymore...but dude, is Andrew gonna go to the press? AHHH. Oh, and I'm glad you're posting again so soon, I loooooove this story!!



megzor (Signed) on Jan 19, 2011 09:24 pm (Wake Up Calls)
there is something i love about the whole justin having an affair thing... i'm totally okay with it.



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Jan 19, 2011 08:20 pm (Wake Up Calls)

You write such an incredible character for Justin, and I don't want to blame him for his indescretions and his inability to figure out what he wants...but, I've come to learn what the other end of infidelity looks like and it's ugly, distorted and completely unfair.  So...Justin, MAN UP!

Sorry.  Obviously I'm taking out my frustrations with a fictional character.  I think I should seek help!

Great update :)




monijt1 (Signed) on Jan 18, 2011 09:16 am (Not All Surprises Are Bad)

I am so so happy, that you didn't forget this story. My heart jump for joy, when I received the update e-mail.  :)

I have no comment on Zooey & Justin retarded behinds. I just hope they know that, karma is something else. What goes around, comes around. 

 




megzor (Signed) on Jan 17, 2011 08:38 pm (Not All Surprises Are Bad)
i am so glad you are back. don't let this story end. it is one of my favorites.. lol



the fresh princess (Signed) on Jan 17, 2011 07:36 pm (Not All Surprises Are Bad)
Oh man oh man. At this point I am just feelin for them all but esp. Scarlett. I know its not as simple as gettin a divorce so you can explore your urges but homeboy took vows and he's just throwin em out the window. And she don't know a dang thing. Its bout to be bad isnt it? BIG sigh.



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Jan 17, 2011 03:40 pm (Not All Surprises Are Bad)

Oh no! Zooey is going to get hurt and it's going to be bad!  I totally wanted them together, but I don't like the Justin that ignores his wife and does what he wants with Zo.  She's the one that's going to get her heart broken...

whew.  That chapter made me emotional :)




Heartsevolve (Anonymous) on Jan 15, 2011 07:31 pm (Not All Surprises Are Bad)

OH MY GOD!! First, Hi!! I have been missing this story! I'm glad to hear it hasn't been abandoned AND that youre maybe almost finished with it!

BUT ABOUT THIS CHAPTER!! ohhh my goodness. I can't believe he just straight up left Scarlett at the house. What if she finds out he never showed up at the party?! AND OMG ZOOEY :(

I...dunno how I feel about what they're up to...like I want to like it, but you make Scarlett SO damn likeable ugh! 

Oh, btw, I definitely read Love The One You're With! 

 




just a girl (Signed) on Jan 14, 2011 11:43 pm (Not All Surprises Are Bad)
Wowww. i need you to update like yesterday!! What about scarlet man? What about your wife!!??



sweetangel (Signed) on Jan 14, 2011 09:34 pm (Not All Surprises Are Bad)
OMG!! please post more!! so glad you are back!



SJane (Signed) on Jan 14, 2011 05:41 pm (Not All Surprises Are Bad)
ooh u cheeky little bugger coming back after being missing then leaving us like that lol
awesome update though



MissTasha (Signed) on Jan 14, 2011 03:05 pm (Not All Surprises Are Bad)
They're both dirtbags. Eww. It wasn't even a caught up in the moment thing. They actually discussed it and decided it was a good idea. Ridiculous. SMH. That being said, Scarlett is annoying right now. Why the hell would she just pop up and have him bail on his plans and his friends? That's not even a reasonable thing to ask of someone, let alone alone a reasonable thing to get upset over and feel hurt about. Nobody likes a clinger. Please update soon.





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