OH MY GOD, I CAN'T BELIEVE THEY KISSED. I'M LIKE FREAKING OUT RIGHT NOW. Does that mean their friendship is completely ruined forever?! Oh lord, lord lord lord! How are they coming back from that? And more importantly, how are you going to get them in the same room, ever, ever again?!
Sigh. You're killin me here, dude. I can't even....OH MAN JUST UPDATE SOON, K BECAUSE I'M DYINGGGG.
Damn woman, you've done it again. What amazes me the most about your writing is how incredibly genuine everything is-your characters, your plot, everything. I like I said over at our little hole, I thank you for writing Zooey the way you did. Everything about her is relatable, so again I thank you.
Oh and thanks for the lack of Oatty lol.
Oh man. That was intense. I didn't want it to happen but then again, I really wanted that to happen. What have you done to me??!! lol. Great update.
Oh and ...'Mindy stared at her from underneath a Red Sox cap.' total bonus points for that. The Red Sox are my team :)
Oh man. You make this really tough, because I like Scarlett. I do. But I love Zooey, and I love Zooey and Justin together and I wish he had the freedom to act on those....warm and fuzzies...
Why do I feel like there's going to be heartbreak? And then, why do I feel like that's just a dumb question?? lol.
Loved the update :)
Author's Response: Well, not gonna lie, my whole intention was to make this as difficult as possible for all parties involved - the readers included! I can guarantee heartbreak and all that good stuff, but I hope you enjoy it anyway. Love hearing from you!
Author's Response: Awwwww, thanks! Bittersweet, I know, but I kind of like that feeling. And I kind of love that you're reading, thank you so much!
"Can you feel the love tonight!!!"*singing*
That was so simple yet beautiful and sad. You have a way with words...
Omg, I felt that in my heart because I know that type of longing between two friends. That was definitely a tug on the emotions for them. And maybe the beginning stages of possible love. Gah! You're killin' me here! I wish this was all written out and posted, it drives me crazy when I reach the end and need more and there's no more to read! teehee
Anyhoo, I feel as if, the fact that neither Justin nor Zooey had any self restraint or control over simply holding hands, what would happen if they ended up loving each other completely? This is exciting. I'm understanding more of what pulls Justin to Zooey since she and Scarlett seem like ploar opposites; Zooey seems like that excitement, that thrill, that unpredictable, reckless abandon Justin never had in his simple, straight forward life. I mean, that's like an 'adrenaline' rush figuratively...when it kicks in (and everything turns 'yellow' maybe) hehe there's no going back. haha. just my little take so far.
Can't wait for the rest! update soon please!
Zooey is like one of my most favorite characters ever, plus I love love love the casting. She and justin would be so cute together! I'm on my phone right now so I'm too lazy to scoll up but that line that justin says, about how he doesn't know if zooey has everything or nothing...GUH. My heart aches, still! Just thinking about it! Give her something definite to have, justin! Damn.
Oh my god and the hand holding. What.......I just...I can't even explain it. Just that I've
been there! I know that feeling. And its terrible and its exhilarating. Yeah.
Lol, so anyway, after a mile long review, I just want to tell you how fabulous a job you're doing with this and I seriously hope its like 50+ chapters, though I get the
feeling that's not how you roll. Update soon, I'm already anxious!
Oh man. I feel like i'm reading two stories. JT and ScarJo, and Justin and Zooey. I just have a feeling that these two stories are going to collide soon enough and it's not going to be pretty.
I'm on the edge of my seat :)
Author's Response: Hmm, I like that assessment. I like it a lot. Because at this point, that's exactly what it is. And you're right, the two tales will definitely meet at some point, and it'll be... interesting. At least, I hope so lol. Stay on the edge of your seat, it's about to get good!
