Comments For Don't Stop
Keediluv (Signed) on Jul 28, 2010 11:43 pm (Epilogue)
Aww yay!  I was hoping that they got married in the end but I didn't expect the twins.  Awesomeness all around!

Author's Response: surprise!!  hahaha...As soon as I wrote Mayra and JC back together I could see their whole life play out in front of me.  It was kind of weird....I just knew that they had twins and so I had to write it because it was just too darn cute to see JC interacting with them :)  Thanks for all the love and reviews <3



shan030709 (Signed) on Jul 28, 2010 11:24 pm (Epilogue)
I like how you started the last chapter the same way your started the first one.  Threw me there for a minute!!  LOL  I really did enjoy this story!!  Great work!!

Author's Response: I thought it would be cool to end it where it began.  Kind of tying everything together and making it "complete."  I'm glad you liked it.  It was short, but it was fun to write and turned out better than I was expecting!  lol  <3



Keediluv (Signed) on Jul 26, 2010 06:27 am (Chapter 6 -- part 2)
Thank you for letting the torture subside.  And YAYAYAYAYAY! I'm really happy that they finally got to get over themselves and admit how they felt.  Burning a hole in the mattress didn't hurt either.  Got me in here with my legs crossed all tight...damn that JC, LOL!

Author's Response:

hahaha!  damn JC is right!  It was fun finally writing them together and getting to let everything explode :)




Nerdily Ingenious (Signed) on Jul 25, 2010 10:49 pm (Chapter 6 -- part 2)
Whoa. She just said yes to marrying JC Chasez....BOUT TIME!! lol. That damn song, I swear anyone else who sings it won't do it justice since it fits JC so well. But since they're serious about this marriage business, I wonder if they'll get a home together in LA. Does Mayra just leave her cute little kiddies. Hmm, guess we'll find out. Update soon. :)

Author's Response: hahaha...I second that!  it's about time!!  And I LOVE that song.  I'm secretly hoping he's going to keep it and put it on his own album :)



jersey_tenn (Signed) on Jul 25, 2010 08:47 pm (Chapter 6 -- part 2)

YES! CUT ME OFF! YES! WHOO! OH EM GEE!

I was reading this and touching my lips, simultaneously. I mean, it was like I could feel him [or what I can ONLY dream he would feel like]. My god, woman, you want to kill me or something?!?!

And, umm....yes, marriage. Let's go! Now! ASAP! YA! AHORITA! RAPIDO! lordy...i love it. Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!



Author's Response: HAHAHA!!  Okay, aside from getting nervous when I'm writing a story specifially for and about someone, I also get nervous writing the more intimate parts of relationships *blushes* I'm glad you liked it :)  As far as marriage.....we'll just have to see what happens....muahahaha *evil grin*



jersey_tenn (Signed) on Jul 25, 2010 08:45 pm (Chapter 6 -- part 1)

ok...so, I read this b4 work, and OH EM GEE! I ran out my apt with teary eyes!!!! I seriously need to get a grip of myself. I get WAY too emotional/attached to this story. I cannot possibly explain to you how on point you have me. It's creepy.

And, JC, my gosh, he breaks my heart. He shatters my soul. I LOVE IT!



Author's Response:

lol...and now you know why Kristen is always accusing me of stalking her!  I'm not stalking you, I promise.  I'm just very observant and I watch (or in your case: read) what people do and say and how they act. I love trying to figure people out.  That's part of the reason I'm going into psychology. It fascinates me and I love it! :)

And JC breaks my heart, too!  He always seems to get the raw end of the deal...poor guy.




champ (Signed) on Jul 25, 2010 06:18 pm (Chapter 6 -- part 2)
keep the chapters coming



AmberW (Signed) on Jul 25, 2010 05:54 pm (Chapter 6 -- part 2)
I want that kind of reunion!  Holy crap that was awesome!

Author's Response: I know, right?!  How awesome of a reunion was that??  lol



shan030709 (Signed) on Jul 25, 2010 04:47 pm (Chapter 6 -- part 2)
I really am enjoying this story!!  The conflicts and realizations both have gone through are very real feeling.  I cannot wait to read what happens next!!

Author's Response: thank you, thank you, thank you!  I'm so glad that you like this story.  I strive for realism in all my stories, so I'm glad that that is coming through! :)



heartsevolve (Signed) on Jul 25, 2010 02:58 pm (Chapter 6 -- part 2)
Omg yayyyyyy! So much for the beach walk, huh? Hahahaha, though I have to say I may prefer this version! wait, is this it?! Tell me its not over!!! I love this story too much!

Author's Response: there may still be a beach walk......but I don't know.  I don't want to promise anything.  Now do you see why I hate doing outlines?!  Even from week to week things change! lol



heartsevolve (Signed) on Jul 25, 2010 02:44 pm (Chapter 6 -- part 1)
Oooh! The flower scene. I have been waiting for that! Poor mayra. :( DOES SHE LOVE HIM!? I think yes!!!

Author's Response: I've been waiting for the flower scene too!  Finally found a place for it to fit in to everything :)



ltaylor03 (Signed) on Jul 25, 2010 01:41 pm (Chapter 6 -- part 2)

Holy crap...i just NOW figured out after you telling me that "don't stop" was JCs song. hahahaha. I'm an idiot. lol.

THIS. WAS. AWESOME.

And the end was perfect. And cute. I LOVED IT!

*bowing* 

You deserve the title. ;) 



Author's Response: hahaha!  I am in love with that song!  When I heard it I knew I had to put it into this story :)  Yea!  I'm glad you liked it.  It wasn't too super cheesy was it??  LOL...I tend to get a little too sappy sometimes...



ltaylor03 (Signed) on Jul 25, 2010 01:29 pm (Chapter 6 -- part 1)

Damn. What a way to end the part.

Poor Mayra. Now I feel bad. That's an awful thing to have to go through :( As irrational as her line of thought was, I can definitely see how she could think something like that. If losing people close to you is all you've ever known, of course you'd be scared to get close to someone else. 

Ugh. I'm hoping next chapter things get turned around. 



Author's Response: yes, it was irrational, but we all do things that are irrational sometimes and then have to live with the consequences.  She was scared, and I don't blame her...hopefully JC won't blame her either....



Jealous Story Fairy Rachel (Anonymous) on Jul 25, 2010 01:00 pm (Chapter 6 -- part 2)

Okay.... goooooodnessssss.

that is all I can say. 

I love that man. 

WHY can I not find a man like that in my REAL life?! I mean seriously. All I want is a hot, passionate man like Jace. 

Loved this chapter. LOVED it. I don't know what else to say because I'm still recovering from reading. 

Sigh. 



Author's Response: hahaha!!  I'm pretty partial to this chapter myself.  I was writing it last night and was like, damn!  this is good!  LOL (not be conceited or anything....)  thanks for all the help on this one :)  I don't know hwat I'd do without ya!  <3



Keediluv (Signed) on Jul 24, 2010 08:50 pm (Chapter 5)
The slow torture is killing me!!!  I need them to get back together or close the book with a romp for the road or something!  The chemistry between the two of them is sick...really.  This is just too damn good girl!

Author's Response: It's killing me too!  And JC and Mayra!  lol...final resolution is coming, I promise.  I'm working on getting this next chapter out but it is being a little difficult and stubborn right now...kind of like these two characters! lol :)





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