Author's Response: I'm working on it. This next one is proving to be a little difficult right now, but hopefully I will have it done in the next few days :)
Author's Response: lol...it's a great song! I was writing that scene and it just popped into my head so I had to use it :) Mayra has her reasons and they will be explained in the next chapter. Thanks for reading!! <3
I must know why it was for his own good!
Great job!
I like how you're writing this from the standpoint of both present time and a look back at memories. It's hard to do but you're doing it fantastically!
Author's Response:
awww, thanks! I love using flashbacks to help tell a story. It can be difficult at times but it's working well with this one. Thanks for the love! :)
I know you just posted this chapter tonight, but PLEASE update soon. I am SO eager to see how this turns out. Poor JC, mayra really screwed with him. And I hope mayra doesnt shut him out again when he tries to talk to her.
EEEEEKkkk...and you put my fav. song of his in this chapter...it worked PERFECTLY!
Love this girl. LOVE IT! <3
Author's Response: I wasn't planning on having the song in there originally, but as I was writing this chapter out I was like...hey! I know what I can use! lol. I am working on the next chapter. We need to hear Mayra's side of the story and hopefully we'll be able to get some resolution for these two! :)
ouch. man do i feel for these two.
poor jayce...i love his inner thoughts here and how on the outside he's all cool and collected towards her, but on the inside he's all messed up.
and mayra...whew...girl needs to figure out which was is up. lol.
Author's Response:
oh, they are both messed up! lol...Jace is fighting it. He wants to believe that he's over her but....he's not. And Mayra...these two just need to have a good ole roll in the sheets to release the tension and get over their stubbornness! hahaha
whew...i'm a puddle. hot jc foreplay. can i meet him in a club like that and have that happen in a private booth? damn.
also...awwww at the little kids. i LOVED cassie and her innocent random questions...so cute. I knew reading this tonight was going to be a bad idea. I have to be up at 645, its midnight and I don't think I want to stop reading.
Author's Response: Cassie is my favorite! I love little kids and the way they have of asking innocent questions and making situations awkward. hahaha...I also love hot JC foreplay *evil grin*
Author's Response: I was quite proud of the first chapter :) hopefully you'll keep loving the story...
i read this entire chapter with a smile on my face...thank you. Its so creepy that you described my studio apt that way, bc thats the way my real apt is. I have ZERO pictures up.
And, omg, I'm afraid. I'm afraid, and I want to know what frightens me. Excuse me, but if JC proposed to me, I'd accept (drunk or sober) BUT, I can understand my reaction. I think.
Thanks for the love, hun! I loved it!
Author's Response: hope it made your night better :) Your side of the story is coming next. No pictures? really? That's the first thing I do whenever I move in anywhere is put pictures up!
Author's Response: thank you, Story Fairy :) The next part should be coming soon--Mayra's side of the story. Glad you liked it. And all it takes is practice....
I love that song. You Ruined Me. It's so good. AND AS WAS THIS CHAPTER, MAN. I'm excited for what happens after. GO GET HER BACK, JC, DO IT.
Author's Response:
best song ever! think he can get her back? I don't know...we'll have to see....
awesome...keep the chapters coming.
Author's Response:
just posted the next chapter :) thanks for reading!
YAYAYAYAY. I love this story so much and it totally was NOT boring, AT ALL. :)
They run into each other alllll the time! Clearly it's a sign they're meant to be.
Author's Response: lol...oh, good, I'm glad it wasn't boring. I was typing it up last night and was like, uhm...this is kind of a dumb chapter. lol. And yes, they run into each other a lot...it's all part of my evil plan! mauhahaha *evil grin*
Author's Response: lol...they do need to just get over themselves, huh? but alas, you are right...it is better that things build for a little bit longer. This isn't going to be a super long story so I'm not going to be draggin this out for too long, though :)
Author's Response: lol...I know, how could you?! but....there is more to be revealed in this story when it comes your your past history. mauahaha *evil grin*
Author's Response: awww...thanks!! <3 I'm glad that you are liking this one, it's a challenge for me to write, but I am excited about it and where it's going.
