I think I would have a coronary had I been in that situation...
I'm totally loving this!
Author's Response: I know, right? lol...I was about ready to have a heart attack for Mayra as I was writing it!
Author's Response: yea! I'm glad you love it. I just posted the next chapter, enjoy :)
You are seriously my favourite author!! I got sooo excited when I saw you had posted a new story.and on top of that it is a JC story:) I adored the JC/Rachel/Aubrey/Justin stories, and this one has grabbed my whole attention in the first few chapters and is bound to be amazing, as all your work is.
Can't wait for the next update. I keep on checking to see if you have a new chapter posted-you have me hooked:)They are so in love with eachother, will be interesting to discover the full extent of their past. Fair play to you:) shell
Author's Response: awww!! thanks, hun! that means SO much to me! <3 I'm pretty excited about this story myself. I honestly wasn't expecting to write another story because in my head JC is supposed to be with Rachel! lol...but this idea came to me and I've just been running with it. It's kind of fun writing a completely different relationship and figuring out the dynamics of these two and their relationship. Thanks for reading and for the awesome review, you rock my socks!! :)
Author's Response: omg! me, too!! that song is on constant repeat for me. I can't get enough of it. It is going to come into play in the story eventually (hence the title) because I love it so much! Th relationship is a bit confusing, but I'm doing that on purpose :) JC and Mayra are both confused themselves about what happened, what is happening, and what (if anything) will happen between them. It will all be revealed, I promise, so stick with me! <3
Author's Response: thank you , thank you! for the review and the birthday wishes :) I'm glad you are liking this one so far. I'm pretty excited about it myself. Hopefully you'll continue to like it.....
i'm freakin campin at the present moment & i see the campground office has wifi & a comp, so I totally bailed on my friend this early AM to come read this....eek! here we go...[#Nsync #MM inspired]
r u sure that u & i havent met in some alternate universe?!?! its like u've lived through my heartbreak! ah! thank you! this chapter was just...ah, wonderful, perfect, bittersweet. I miss my bottle of tequila now. Oh man, I have my own "Kelsey" in my life too. She is just my rock. Ah!
ok, seriously, I love you. Why? Because of this right here, "the weaknesses he had battled all thanks to a certain dark haired, brown eyed beauty who was a beguiling mix of Southern charm and Latin heat and passion." Oh man, really?!?! I think I just fell in love with myself. Gosh, I love it.
Now! I wasn't ready for what?!?!?! Gosh, I was an idiot! And, uh, Rachel, that chica that has such a hold on 'your' Jace is Moi! Me! Yo! hehe...u better be shakin in your stilettos! lol....
give me more! give me more!
Author's Response: hahaha!! yesss!! wifi at the campground! that's awesome...lol...I was pretty pround of that description of you, myself. I wrote it and was like, Damn. No wonder Jace is messed up right now! LOL. The answer to your other question will be revealed...in time...just be patient. I'm going to be working on the next chapter hopefully today at work again. :)
Author's Response: thank you!! I am working on the next chapter now....
Author's Response: yes, last night was wonderful!! lol...I know, I know, I really need to be writing something that the rest of the world can read! I'll start working on that :) I'm glad you're liking this one so far even though it's not you with Jace....
WHY WAS THIS SO SHORT?! Actually, I don't even know how short or long it was, but it FELT short. Because I loved it so, most likely.
Ugh, this story makes my heart hurt, but it's in the most wonderful way and I love it.
And I already told you about what made me literally laugh out loud :) Wonderful chapter, can't wait for an update!
Author's Response:
lol...actually this chapter is the same length as the others :) but, I know the feeling. I always hate it when chapters come to an end. Don't worry, I know what's going to happen in the next one and will hopefully be able to work on it tomorrow.
This story makes my heart hurt too, but stick with me. It'll be worth it, I promise. <3
Author's Response: wow, that's two of you now that aren't JC readers but yet I've managed to get you to read! That's awesome!! lol...I hope I can keep you interested and that you continue to like where I take this story :)
Author's Response: thanks for the review!! :) these two have a very interesting relationship and it will all be revealed in the next few chapters....
Wow! I really like this story and usually I'm not a JC story liker. I love Mayra's character and the portrayal of JC.
Cannot wait till you update!
Author's Response: wow, thanks! that's such a compliment!! :) I'm glad you are liking this story so far. It's definitely different from the other's I've written but I'm really liking the direction it's going. I'm working on the next chapter as we speak. Hopefully it will be up soon!
Oh my god idk why this story is affecting me so much but I loooove it. I suppose I have a weakness for old lovers meeting again after years of not seeing each other..obviously, haha. But seriously. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS.
And damn, you're getting it all out so fast! :)
Author's Response: lol...well, that's all I have so far. The next chapter may be a few days...still formulating and trying to figure out what they're both going to do. :)
I DIDN'T KNOW YOU HAD ALREADY BEEN POSTING CHAPTERS, HOLY CRAP! Um, the ending killed me. SOMETIMES JUST HELLO IS BETTER THAN ANYYYYTHING ELSE!
I am exciiiited for the rest of this! :)
Author's Response: lol...I hope it turns out good. It's good in my head, not let's just see if I can get it to come out good on paper! :)
