Author's Response: Yay for standing-up for herself! She needs to do it more often. We are women, hear us roar! haha
Alot of things can happen in Memphis huh?? Ok 1st off...OMG! there is no way Mack is gonna join that fancy poof class.. lolz reminds me something from Titanic, sitting straight, hold a cup the proper way..they can teach that in your own house..thats where the proper manners begin.. :) and oohh..the Cal guy sounds handsome, no wonder Rachel kinda has a crush on him...and that is also good that Mack put whatever happened b/tween her and BSB behind her...for now that is..
Nice job..thanks for updating! :D
Author's Response:
Poof class!? Bahahahaha.
Your reviews crack me up, i hope you know that.
I like how Mack is finally starting to stick up for herself! JC and Justin are SO protective of her - I feel like one of their feelings will eventually change from platonic to romantic... once she's older of course lol! Just my opinion! :)
Also, I haven't come across many stories that mention Bobbie as much as this story does, and she's EXACTLY how I pictured her to be. Like, completely spot-on! I'm interested to find out who this Fiona chick is, and what she and Bobbie are up to. Poor JC!
Keep up the good writing girl!Author's Response:
It's about time she sticks up for herself, aint it? She likes making people happy but it was only a matter of time until she got annoyed of lying down like a rug, huh? Well, JC and Justin do have good reasons for being so protective of her, it's just that they don't see that they're being too protective. Hahaha, I'm glad I made Bobbie like she was in your head. I've based her off stories that I've heard about her so it's all in my imagination. I'm glad you're enjoying this story, the next chapter should be up soon!
Wow! Mack is totally being overworked here, but look at that..she's still going at this..makes me soo proud! *tear Yes..she can be stubborn at times, but she has the guys to back her up.. LOLZ! I laughed when JC sat on her though. that was funny(yes JC we love u 2) lolz & gotta love the fist fight moments when she said that Joey was her fave..
Pretty good job girl! Thanks for updating! :D
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying this story so much. Yeah, she's overworked, but she can handle it as well as she's organized, lilke a classic Virgo. JC's too funny aint he? Thanks for sticking with the story and the next chapter should be up soon.
Baby Big Ears had me rolling! The sarcasm is just - wow. She truly is fluent in that as a third language. I loved the chapter, and I loved the song choices.
I just have ONE teenie tiny bone to pick with you -- was it really necessary for Fatima to FORCE Mack to apologize? It was humiliating, I think. And, to me, it just put on display Mack once again accommodating those around her. I don't know. It rubbed me wrong. Sorry.
Author's Response: Good eye, and yes it was necessary to force her to apologize. The results will be shown in the next few chapters. Don't apologize, I like the way you think. I'm glad you liked the chapter and thanks for the review! The next one should be up soon.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Mack finally gets a break, eh? Thanks for the review!
This really made me laugh aloud. She thinks like I do in the midst of random seriousness, haha. Loved it!
Author's Response: Yeah, she's really random. It's the way she blocks out when people yell at her since she hates dissapointing people. Glad you liked it and thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Aww, don't cry! Everything gets better eventually. I'm glad you're back! You've been MIA. Thanks for the review.
Author's Response: Oh my god, I'm back again...bad pun, couldn't help myself. Not everything can be held together but things fall apart for a reason, just as AJ had his reasons as to why he did it. Ahh, Fiona, you will know more about her when you least expect it. Thanks for the review!
Oooooooohh! THIS chapter was like woww! AJ is such a UGHH! He was just using Mack & all of the BSB were all IN on it?? Well..my guess is that they were probably afraid of AJ, cause he thinks he's a big macho man.. *scoffs*
& the *NSYNC guys were worried abt her?? Especially JC & Justin..poor Mack..she's soo overworked right now, she needs a break or something, & I loved that Lance is soo comforting..giving her a hug..awww! Nice job girl..& thanks for updating! :D
Author's Response: hee hee hee, AJ is such an UGGHH! Yes yes yes, I loved writing Lance in this chapter. He is so sweet and caring. Thanks for the review.
Author's Response: i'm going to update soon! don't worry =)
OOOOOOooooh! Bobbi! is a freak! She's totally using him..or something...*gasp* Yes JC can be easy to please...one touch & he's on Cloud 9..Ok..let me start from the top...I loved the part when Joey asked Mack abt putting makeup & that Justin came bursting into the bathroom door...lmaooo! I myself, dont like putting makeup either..just some lipgloss/chapstick or something..lolz Anyway..the party scene is good, its sad that poor Nick is getting teased by his bandmates...& lolz Joey & Chris checking the other girl, while they have there gfs sitting NEXT to them...Typical..& I love that Lance is soo concern abt Mack..
Above all, LOVE this chapter, good job! Thanks for updating! :D
Author's Response: lance is sweeeeeeeet. thanks for the review.
ok, ok, I give....go BSB! Mack needs some friendly lovin' and only they can give it to her.
Best Line: "He had been making weird engine noises and rocking from side to side in his seat, pretending he was riding a motorcycle or something."
LMAO! Oh man, my sides hurt. Oh gosh, hehe, epic.
Loved it hun!
Author's Response: hahaha, yes Chris is too funny. thanks for the review
Your writing style has imporved so much. I'm glad you decided to switch this story to first person so we can get to know her a bit more. I felt like we merely scratched the surface with her in the previous story. And with you moving around to different characters to get all sides of the plot I can't wait to see what the others have in store in the BSB camp and the Nsync camp. Good luck with all the characters and update as soon as you can. I'm enjoying this piece of work.
Author's Response: Could've sworn I responded to these before...oh well. Give Liam a chance why dontcha? Lol. Yeah, Lynn is so reliable. I'm glad you're still enjoying this story. The next one should be up soon.