theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 01, 2010 11:43 am (
Chapter 1)
I agree, JC still got it, *grins* & yea Justin, show Jessica what YOU got...this is pretty good, Im liking it so far.. :)
Author's Response: JC wont ever lose it. lol...i think Justin should us all what he's got
thanks for the love...Xo
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 01, 2010 11:38 am (
Prologue)
Ooooh! I like this! Great prologue!
Mack (Anonymous) on Aug 01, 2010 11:31 am (
Chapter 4)
Hmmm, they're so comfortable together all ready. That's a great start to a relationship. Add more soon!
Mack (Anonymous) on Aug 01, 2010 11:29 am (
Chapter 3)
A popstar and a cop. You know, you should've made it so she arrested him. That'd been interesting, but this is amazing as well.
Author's Response: ok, so i totally thought of making this a smutty, s&m type thing, but then i was like...nope, let's just keep it simple. thanks for the love...Xo
azchickadee (Signed) on Aug 01, 2010 10:48 am (
Chapter 4)
ack! to quote JC: "Damn girl, you're killing me!" I need the rest of this story! So, you have to go to work? Pshhh...who cares! lol jk, I am so intrigued with these two! I hope she calls him after her shift. :)
Author's Response: girrrl....i was so tempted to call out. but, man, damn bills to heck! lol...thanks for the love...Xo
azchickadee (Signed) on Aug 01, 2010 10:42 am (
Chapter 3)
du, Dun, DUUNNN!!! hahaha, why is she nervous about telling people she's a cop? I love this story! I love comfortable they are with each other even though they basically know nothing about each other. On to the next chapter.....
Author's Response: Think about it. If a girl told you she's a cop, wouldn't you act differently? If a guy, same thing. Right? Thanks for the love...Xo
MissM (Signed) on Aug 01, 2010 08:56 am (
Chapter 3)
HA! Awesome, LOL!
Author's Response: thought y'all would like that one....hehe
MissM (Signed) on Aug 01, 2010 06:42 am (
Chapter 2)
I'm incredibly jealous and simultaneously amazed at your writing talent. I love a story where I feel like I'm standing in the corner, watching it happen. So uh....FINISH! *waitttiiiinnnggguuuhhh* LOL!
Good job, madam!
Author's Response: Wow...this means so much! I love your writing, and you go and compliment mine?!?! Gosh, darnit. Thank you! Thank you!
sChErZo (Signed) on Aug 01, 2010 06:32 am (
Chapter 2)
Wow! Can't wait to read the rest of this! Great way to kick off the month!!
Author's Response: eeek! thank you! i can't wait for the other 30 days....ah!!!!!
Nerdily Ingenious (Signed) on Aug 01, 2010 02:12 am (
Chapter 2)
Aaaaaaahhhh! One of my favorites by Lloyd. It's crazy how I started singing it when I saw the title...lol. Kind of a chance meeting between these two but it's definitely nothing less than entertaining. Can't wait for the rest ...and now I've gotta go play my jam....lol.
Author's Response: my coworker kept being stupid yesterday and singing this song, and I just ran with it! I love the song, and it was just perfect! Thanks for the love! Jam for me!
azchickadee (Signed) on Jul 31, 2010 11:44 pm (
Chapter 2)
you're my hero. you write so beautifully and poetically and I'm jealous!! eeep! I can't wait to read the rest of this later today...or actually tomorrow since it's only 9:45 on Saturday night here in AZ :)
Author's Response: oh lordy, thank you. Jeez, do you want to make me cry? Thank you for the compliment hun. Better rest up now, ya hear! lol
xoxo
azchickadee (Signed) on Jul 31, 2010 11:38 pm (
Chapter 1)
hahaha! K, 2 things made me laugh in this chapter:
1. “Well, I’m sure either Lindsay or Jared know her. I mean, it’s a private party." Astute observation there Jessica *rolls eyes* Thank you Captain Obvious! lol
2. “Boy’s always had it, and I’m afraid he won’t ever lose it,” Justin chuckled.
Hell Yeah!! Jace has and always will have "it"
Author's Response: 1. I knew you'd point this out! I did it just for you! Gosh, I love your hate for her. hehe...
2. Priceless. I couldn't have said it better myself. Thank you, Mr. Timberlake.
azchickadee (Signed) on Jul 31, 2010 11:33 pm (
Prologue)
OMG! I am already in love with this story!!! I got tingly all over with this prologue. This is gonna be a good one, I can feel it!! :)
Author's Response: "This is gonna be a good one, I can feel it!!" <--- LOVED THIS!
I hope you do love it...and watch out for small references (wink, wink)
champ (Signed) on Jul 31, 2010 11:33 pm (
Chapter 2)
keep the chapters coming.
Author's Response: i'm tryin, i'm tryin....thanks love!
XxSmurfettexX (Anonymous) on Jul 31, 2010 11:13 pm (
Chapter 2)
Awww, the ending was so sweet. How lust turned to (some form of) love. I don't know why but I found it kinda funny when she said "I think I may be completely sober now..." maybe it was the way i heard it in my mind...
Author's Response: lol...I think it was TOTALLY the way you heard it in your head, but I just read this and heard the same way [hahaha!!!!]
"some form of love" is the perfect way to describe them...thanks hun!
