I LOVE IT!!!! It's AWESOME!!! I love Dani, the cop (didn't expected that on Chapter 2, LOL) I love how JC fell. WOW!!! Great plot and I love the whole story itself it's just that it's short..I hope there's a sequel hahaha..
I really really love it. Great JOB!!! :D
Author's Response:
eek...it worked!!!! lol, yes!
thanks for the love...Xo
All I can say is bravo! That was really good woman! I loved it!
This was a great way to start the challenge-you set the bar pretty high!
Author's Response:
::bows::
thanks for the love...Xo
Author's Response: i couldnt do that to JC's heart...at least not with him in LA and me in GA. I couldnt console him, then. lol thanks for the love...Xo
Author's Response: eeek....thanks for the love...Xo
Jesus woman! You about gave me a heart attack. I had been anticipating a not so happy ending so when she didn't show up at first I was preparing myself to cry. lol.
But then she did. Jeez, JC. Fall in love quickly or what? I guess though that sometimes, when you know, you know.
You did a FANTASTIC job with this, mi amor. I bow down to your talent. haha.
<3
Author's Response:
::ducks:: sorry...
and thank you!!!!!!! so much!!!!!!!!! xoxo
*applauds* job well done!!
okay, lol...when I read the first line where it said "day before wedding" I was like, "No Way!" thinking that this was like a fast forward and it was the day before THEIR wedding! lol...I completelly forgot about the other couple! hahaha
Awesome job opening up this challenge! You deserve like, ten billion gold stars :)
Author's Response: oh man...thats too funny! nope...i wouldn't have any where else to go if they got married [wink, wink]...thanks for the love...Xo
I seriously gasped when she didn't show up. I thought she was going to die on JC. Phew. Glad that didn't happen.
And now that you have set this bar so freaking high... I have to stop this review and type more on mine... :)
Author's Response:
i'm not that mean, jeez woman, have a little faith...ok, nevermind, I'm a total meanie. I would've so done it.
thanks for the love...Xo
Good lord, I thought the woman was dead! Don't SCARE me like that! *smacksmack* Awesome first entry! Yay!
Author's Response:
::SMILE::
thanks for the love...Xo
Author's Response:
There's no other way to take that...it's just priceless.
thanks for the love...Xo
Author's Response:
wouldn't u spend the night?!?! exactly...
thanks for the love...Xo
More More More!
Ironically, I was listening to the very Tony Lucca, as I started reading this chapter! I'm in love with the song "Undertow"
Author's Response:
is he not like amazing?!?! him and JC are the other JT and Matt....gosh, i love these pairings!
thanks for the love...Xo