Comments For Displaced Deception
Hollie (Signed) on Oct 18, 2007 10:47 am (Pink Elephants on Parade)
Well NOW he realises? stupid bastard. i bet she was going to try and frame Lauren, too. anyway, Queen was too cute, and if they're going to the West End they should so go see We Will Rock You. if they're still going after all that...
Author's Response: OMG Hollie! I fucking LOVED We Will Rock You! I saw it in Vegas like 8 times and saw it in London twice...and will be seeing it again next summer if they renew (and if I get to go back). Yeah...definitely one of my most favorite muscials and you get like a billion cool points for referencing it lol. And yeah, Justin is a stupid bastard. Got a lot of apologising to do...haha. - Amanda
Author's Response: OMG Hollie! I fucking LOVED We Will Rock You! I saw it in Vegas like 8 times and saw it in London twice...and will be seeing it again next summer if they renew (and if I get to go back). Yeah...definitely one of my most favorite muscials and you get like a billion cool points for referencing it lol. And yeah, Justin is a stupid bastard. Got a lot of apologising to do...haha. - Amanda
MissTasha (Signed) on Oct 18, 2007 10:17 am (Pink Elephants on Parade)
I loooooooooooooved this chapter. Maura finally got the ass beating that was coming to her. I'm surprised that she got in any hits at all. I figured she was all talk. Turns out that she's just mostly talk cause she did hurt Lauren a little bit but she did LOSE. And she got busted! Maura's getting fired! Maura's getting fired! Maura's getting fired! Please, please, please update soon. Pleeeeeeease.
Author's Response: How do you know she's getting fired? How do you know she doesn't get an explanation out of her ass and manages to make Justin believe her? Hmmmmmm? Lol I kid...maybe. You'll have to wait and see. And you know Maura can pack something of a punch. Believe me, if Lauren could walk all over her it wouldn't be that good of a read! lol Update coming soon! - Amanda
Author's Response: How do you know she's getting fired? How do you know she doesn't get an explanation out of her ass and manages to make Justin believe her? Hmmmmmm? Lol I kid...maybe. You'll have to wait and see. And you know Maura can pack something of a punch. Believe me, if Lauren could walk all over her it wouldn't be that good of a read! lol Update coming soon! - Amanda
Vessy (Signed) on Oct 18, 2007 08:34 am (Pink Elephants on Parade)
i love it
Author's Response: Thanks girl! Update coming soon! -Amanda
Author's Response: Thanks girl! Update coming soon! -Amanda
Liz (Signed) on Oct 18, 2007 08:25 am (Pink Elephants on Parade)
Author's Response: Thanks Liz! And I'm not making any promises on what Lauren or Justin will do. And don't apologize for the cursing...as you can tell, DD2 isn't exactly a swear free piece of work lol. Thanks for the review, update is coming soon! - Amanda
Holy-mother-fucking-shit.
Number one I apologize for the curses but really- bitch just got her punk ass beat and thank GOD she did.
And now all we have left to do is hope that Lauren will forgive Justin for not believing her in the first place b/c he better be kicking Maura's lying ass out of the door asap.
Right, I think you know what i'm going to say- INCREDIBLE chapter, can't WAIT for the next one! :)
Author's Response: Thanks Liz! And I'm not making any promises on what Lauren or Justin will do. And don't apologize for the cursing...as you can tell, DD2 isn't exactly a swear free piece of work lol. Thanks for the review, update is coming soon! - Amanda
Alicia (Signed) on Oct 18, 2007 03:57 am (Pink Elephants on Parade)
what a KLEPTO!!!!!
Author's Response: LOL true that. She's fucking crazy! - Amanda
Author's Response: LOL true that. She's fucking crazy! - Amanda
smrkks (Signed) on Oct 18, 2007 12:53 am (Pink Elephants on Parade)
omg omg omg omg omg FINALLY. i swear to god i am so glad that lauren finally got to beat this shit out of that stupid bitch. and amanda, chapter 20 needs to be up riiiiiiiiight about now. yeah. that sounds gooood. lol. this was a crazy ass fucking chapter. i absolutely LOVED it.
Author's Response: SO glad you liked it girl! And yeah I wasn't going to have her beat the shit out of Maura in the beginning, but I figured I'd let Lauren go a little bat shit crazy on the hoe. And don't worry...Chapter 20 will be here before you know it! Much love miss lady! - Amanda
Author's Response: SO glad you liked it girl! And yeah I wasn't going to have her beat the shit out of Maura in the beginning, but I figured I'd let Lauren go a little bat shit crazy on the hoe. And don't worry...Chapter 20 will be here before you know it! Much love miss lady! - Amanda
lizzy99 (Signed) on Oct 17, 2007 11:50 pm (Pink Elephants on Parade)
ohh! that was fun to read
I loved it, it was great....you need to update soon :D!
Author's Response: Glad you had fun reading it! An update should be up soon! I've been working hard on it :) - Amanda
I loved it, it was great....you need to update soon :D!
Author's Response: Glad you had fun reading it! An update should be up soon! I've been working hard on it :) - Amanda
jerseygirl1833 (Signed) on Oct 17, 2007 11:40 pm (Pink Elephants on Parade)
HOLY shit! SCORE! update again! like now!
Author's Response: Lol! I'll update as soon as I can write! Thanks for the review! -Amanda
Author's Response: Lol! I'll update as soon as I can write! Thanks for the review! -Amanda
Madcrazychick (Signed) on Oct 17, 2007 11:27 pm (Pink Elephants on Parade)
I'm sooooo glad Maura finally got a beat down, though she got off easy since Lauren at that point could barely stand. When Loho tackled her, knocking her down into the puke, I was like, eww. Then, yeah! lol And Maura's whole you've ruined me life excuse...seriously? How in the world could she consider her life ruined?! Justin was still being stupid and not wanting to believe that precious little Maura could do anything wrong. And I swear if seeing her in the act of doing it doesn't get it through his thick skull that she's the thieving bia that everyone has been telling him she is, I'm going to have to reach into the story and slap some sense into him... or Drunk Lauren could do it. lol Even though she already did get some blows in on him, a few more common sense ones couldn't hurt. And Maura is seriously committed to her thievery lol, I mean she just took a pretty thorough ass kicking and yet she's still quick to rush back and take more stuff? smh
Author's Response: Methinks you'll find out how Maura's life could possibly be ruined in the next chapter. There's a reason why we don't know her whole backstory for a reason ;) And yeah...Justin was just hit over the head with a huge 'um freaking obvious?!' hammer. If he doesn't realize that Maura is the one to blame then there really is no hope for him lol. I'm glad you liked the chapter and I'm writing the new one while trying to stay posted with Gossip Girl lol - Amanda
Author's Response: Methinks you'll find out how Maura's life could possibly be ruined in the next chapter. There's a reason why we don't know her whole backstory for a reason ;) And yeah...Justin was just hit over the head with a huge 'um freaking obvious?!' hammer. If he doesn't realize that Maura is the one to blame then there really is no hope for him lol. I'm glad you liked the chapter and I'm writing the new one while trying to stay posted with Gossip Girl lol - Amanda
angel_from_africa (Signed) on Oct 17, 2007 11:01 pm (Pink Elephants on Parade)
Ahhhh!! I am so excited!!! Yay!! Such an exciting chapter!! Update soon!! Maura has been caught!! Maura has been caught!! (As you can tell i throughly enjoyed that chapter :) ) Great work!!
Author's Response: Couldn't tell at all that you liked the chapter lol...I kid. But yup, she's been caught red handed. Thanks for the review and an update is on the way! - Amanda
Author's Response: Couldn't tell at all that you liked the chapter lol...I kid. But yup, she's been caught red handed. Thanks for the review and an update is on the way! - Amanda
Queen MiMi (Signed) on Oct 17, 2007 10:30 pm (Something There)
Author's Response: I don't even know what to say...seriously. Thank you so much for the feedback and just...yeah I'm totally speechless. I'm glad I was able to inspire you to write your own story and I'm sure it's awesome (I'll definitely be checking it out). Thank you, thank you for all the support and don't worry, I'll keep writing until I can't no more! lol Thanks again, Mia...it is so very appreciated. - Amanda
I typically never have time to leave reviews on stories, but I love your story. I get on the computer every other day and check and see if you update it. Your story inspired me to write my very own actually. I basically just wanted to say keep on writing.
Author's Response: I don't even know what to say...seriously. Thank you so much for the feedback and just...yeah I'm totally speechless. I'm glad I was able to inspire you to write your own story and I'm sure it's awesome (I'll definitely be checking it out). Thank you, thank you for all the support and don't worry, I'll keep writing until I can't no more! lol Thanks again, Mia...it is so very appreciated. - Amanda
glitter15 (Signed) on Oct 17, 2007 10:18 pm (Pink Elephants on Parade)
Author's Response: stfu ho...and omg. I cackled at your little FIVE HANDS shit...never again. Just no. Love you...we'll talk soon because lord knows you've forgotten the outline. Stupid LPS. - Amanda
OH MY FUCKING GOD, BEST TITLE? BEST TITLE...WHO THE FUCK THOUGHT OF THIS....bwuahahah HELLS YEAH. Wooo, loves it. Anyways, I love me some DD2 and yes I already read this cus I'm your editor so I'm gonna be fucking awesome and leave the first review of this chapter. Maura's a slut and deserved her ass whooped. Thanks for fitting it in, really.
ON that note, I leave you with this: FIVE HANDS, and a HOT layout...mmm.
Author's Response: stfu ho...and omg. I cackled at your little FIVE HANDS shit...never again. Just no. Love you...we'll talk soon because lord knows you've forgotten the outline. Stupid LPS. - Amanda
Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Oct 15, 2007 12:00 pm (Strange Things)
Hah! I guessed it! Kinda. That was really good though and twisted. Now that Justin kinda knows, I'm anxious to see what happenes next. Maybe Trace will tell Lauren? Maybe it WILL work out for them? :) Awesome job once again, I can't wait for the next chapter! Awesome job as usual!! TTYL -Traci
danie (Signed) on Oct 14, 2007 05:26 pm (Strange Things)
i'm like its about fucking time he's the truth about her ass. i mean he was seriously getting on my fucking nerves. i would have never thought she would have asked theo to do that.
Kathleenie (Signed) on Oct 13, 2007 07:04 pm (Strange Things)
I'm so glad to have all the answers finally. I hope Justin finally gets it together and begs for Lauren's forgiveness soon.
Damn that Maura...
Can't wait for the next chapter. Post soon!
