Comments For Displaced Deception
Chelsia (Signed) on Oct 13, 2007 09:39 am (Strange Things)
ugh finally i have my answer as to what happened to all the stuff in maura's apartment. now i can go back to sleeping at night :) awesome chapter. and yeah, maura isn't as great as she says she is. i'm glad justin's finally getting that
alimera (Signed) on Oct 13, 2007 09:12 am (Strange Things)
freakin' maura la whora!! get the hell away from him you tramp! and i totally believe theo over her, for sure! his story sounds much more credible than hers. ugh. he's deserves the idiot of the year award. wait until he finds out that he did lauren dirty, and wait til she laughs in his face. MAN this is royally messed up! ooooooookay, update again soon!
Hollie (Signed) on Oct 13, 2007 07:01 am (Strange Things)
Oh fod God's sake. If the man is worried about her, why doesn;t he start asking everybody else instead of thinking he knows it all? Then his dancers can tell him how she's a bitch and she rifles through people's bags and maybe he'll get a clue. Sheesh!
smrkks (Signed) on Oct 13, 2007 12:48 am (Strange Things)
cant wait for lots of stuff. and proud of justin for at least thinking a little bit. i like him better when he uses his brain. although that doesnt excuse him at allll for his behavior with lauren on her last night.
and have i mentioned that i love trace? cause i doooo.
and have i mentioned that i love trace? cause i doooo.
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Oct 12, 2007 09:00 pm (Strange Things)
Uhmm....well...
Being an English Major, I usually have a hell of a lot to say...but I'm pretty sure you just left me speechless.
wow
Madcrazychick (Signed) on Oct 12, 2007 08:58 pm (Strange Things)
Oh and Elliot...I didn't even see the crush thing coming. I feel bad for him, but really he had to know that she wasn't going to just start dating him. But he took a pay cut for her, opened his home to her. No good deed goes unpunished. lol Hopefully, he really is able to just be okay with them just staying friends and it doesn't get really awkward between them. Cause that's just what Lauren needs. An idiot ex-boyfriend she's still in love with and an awkward best friend who's in love with her. lol
Oh, lord, though what if she decides to really give up on Justin and give Elliot a chance and that's when Justin finally opens his eyes? Hmm.
Hmm, indeed. lol
Oh, lord, though what if she decides to really give up on Justin and give Elliot a chance and that's when Justin finally opens his eyes? Hmm.
Hmm, indeed. lol
Madcrazychick (Signed) on Oct 12, 2007 08:46 pm (Strange Things)
God, could Justin get anymore dense?!? Lauren told him what was happening. Theo tells him, with proof. And he still has doubts, then Maura slips up (cause I'm not sure he actually gave her this info) and tells on herself with the whole “Thank God you found that bracelet in his room, because then you might have blamed the wrong person” thing and STILL, he's clueless then her bitch ass comes onto him AGAIN and he says "You're a great girl and all" NO, SHE'S NOT! lol She's a bitch-ass ho. She's an asshole. And he's still like, oh, I dunno. And willing to give her another chance. Why does she get so much room for doubt?! The whole it was only because there was no proof thing is out. *sighs* Because the more and more I think about it, the more I’m thinking that Maura Delaney isn’t all of the great things she says she is. Ya think? *rolls eyes* lol Update soon.
MissTasha (Signed) on Oct 12, 2007 08:33 pm (Strange Things)
Is this dude stupid or just an idiot? He needs to get his head out of his ass very soon and fire Maura. Note to Justin: she is a LIAR. Your girlfriend is not. Please update soon.
ChaseznLuccaLover (Signed) on Oct 12, 2007 08:29 pm (Strange Things)
Yeah Maura isn't all those great things... he is a stupid ass whore. Glad we finally found out where all the shit from the closet went!! Hope Justin isn't too late to get Lauren back!
jenster28 (Signed) on Oct 12, 2007 01:37 am (Something There)
awkward!! :D update update update! <3
Author's Response: Updated! Thanks for the review! - Amanda
Author's Response: Updated! Thanks for the review! - Amanda
tiinydancer xx (Signed) on Oct 09, 2007 02:19 am (Chapter 12)
Just read this chapter for the first time and can I say I'm JEALOUS that you've seen that movie and I haven't and that I'm also really happy that you included the Beatles in this chapter? Holy lord. Sensational.
Loving this, even though I'm behind on reading...
Loving this, even though I'm behind on reading...
Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Oct 08, 2007 01:09 pm (Sing Sweet Nightingale)
Noooo! LoL. It wasn't supposed to end like that! But, ok maybe it should. That truely was awkward...I was like ehhhh. LoL. Awesome job as usual! I'm anxious to see what is going to happen. But okay ... oh and congrats again on the awards! :-P ttyl -Traci
Hollie (Signed) on Oct 07, 2007 01:53 pm (Sing Sweet Nightingale)
What the heck was the sex thing? That was weird. Why on Earth did they sit there having bad sex? Huh? At any rate, excellent chapter.
Vegas Chick (Signed) on Oct 07, 2007 01:23 am (Sing Sweet Nightingale)
I am crying because there are killing me..they belong together and they know it...And poor Justin....I am really want to know what is going to happen next...is he going to get into drugs not that he has promised to stop with the drinking...Or better yet will he just fire the Witch Maura!!!! Or better yet she dies!!! I like that...lol...sorry...Update again soon!!
Tina
