Comments For Displaced Deception
Kathleenie (Signed) on Oct 01, 2007 11:30 am (Something There)

Thanks to the title of the most recent chapter, I have had "Why Should I Worry" from Oliver and Co. stuck in my head for the greater portion of the day. However, I love a bit of Billy Joel--so no complaining.

The chapter was fabulous--I'm already so anxious for the upcoming one. You are my relief from midterm studying this week and that means a lot!




Miraclebabe (Signed) on Oct 01, 2007 09:07 am (Why Should I Worry?)
I cried , I really cried that was so , I can't even tell you that's how out effective that chap was to me. He need her and that's greatbut Lauren better be on guard the last time she helped him it backfired and speaking of that hoe while Lauren there just so the trip don't have to be all about helping helping Justin maybe you can put a bug in Lauren ear and have her stomp a hole in his PA ass just to make us all feel better. This is the start of drama ain't it but that's okay I love this story!!

Author's Response: You cried? My goodness...I'm sorry! And I make no promises on whether or not Lauren kicks some PA ass. And yup...could be the start of more drama...I'm glad you like the story and thank you for the reviews, I love them! - Amanda



aswift (Signed) on Sep 30, 2007 09:47 pm (Why Should I Worry?)
Yay!! He better not screw it up! LOL

Author's Response: What if Lauren screws it up, hmmm? Update is posted! <3 - Amanda



jerseygirl1833 (Signed) on Sep 30, 2007 09:26 pm (Why Should I Worry?)
aww *hugs sad and wounded justin* i love them! awesome chapter...update again...like now! lol

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it and the update is up! Go enjoy lol! - Amanda



JoJo (Anonymous) on Sep 30, 2007 08:23 pm (Why Should I Worry?)
YAY!! she's gonna go help...hopefully he's not an a-hole when she gets there. can't wait to see what happens!

Author's Response: Yup, Lauren to the rescue! Glad you liked the chapter and the update is up! Hope you enjoy it :) - Amanda



smrkks (Signed) on Sep 30, 2007 07:15 pm (Why Should I Worry?)
yesssssssssssssss! obviously they have issues. and obviously lauren is pissed. but THANK GOD. and anyway, i missed lauren being all hard ass with him lol. loved itttt.

Author's Response: Hee! I'm glad everyone is excited to see the hard ass Lauren back in action. We'll see if she retains that when she gets to Manchester. Glad you enjoyed it and an update is coming up soon! - Amanda



wpoohbear (Signed) on Sep 30, 2007 05:26 pm (Why Should I Worry?)
I need the next chapter!

Author's Response: Next chapter is up! I hope you like it and thanks for the review! - Amanda



Madcrazychick (Signed) on Sep 30, 2007 05:12 pm (Why Should I Worry?)
I don't know how much "I Don't Need A Man" strictly professional Lauren is going to be able to help Justin who wants his 'no matter what' girlfriend Lauren. And I can just see that leading into fights and unintentional confessions and hopefully Maura getting her ass kicked and Lauren not then getting carted away in a black and white because of it. lol And depending on how determined Lauren is to be Miss Independent, it could be tender and heartbreaking and everything that could make that last sentence of this chapter actually come true (don't do it! lol). And I love that Lauren Motherfucking Walters is back! I love her sassy and taking charge and kicking ass rather than feeling like the world's kicked hers. But Justin's wounded right now and maybe he needs to be handled with kid gloves and I don't know how much she'll be willing to do that. This chapter makes me happy and sad and hopeful and worried. And that's what makes it great, I'm not sure if it's going to work out for them, I want it too, but I've learned that sometimes the struggle to get together is the best part. Now on to England to kick Justin's ass, save it, or both! Love this story to pieces and I can't wait to hear their first words to each other. lol For some reason I think it's gonna make me laugh. Update soon!

Author's Response: There are no words for me to say. Really, your reviews just make me SO freaking happy. Maybe I'll write an alternate universe to this story and have Lauren go completely postal on Maura's ass and chase her through the hotel with a machine gun or a knife or something. Hmmm....possibilities. And I hope their first words make you laugh...I have to wrack my brain for some of that shit thought heee. Much love girl! - Amanda



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Sep 30, 2007 04:14 pm (Why Should I Worry?)

Oh....they so better get back together with this trip.  SHe can't move on!! gah....I want them together :)

I loved it :) 

 



Author's Response: I'm glad you loved it and we'll see how their meeting goes. They may or may not end up together. We'll just have to wait and see! Patience! Thanks for the love! - Amanda



angel_from_africa (Signed) on Sep 30, 2007 02:59 pm (Why Should I Worry?)
OMG!! Now i just hope justin doesn't screw it up!! Great job as usual!!

Author's Response: How do you know Justin is screwing up? What if Lauren does? Ooooh! Haha. Thanks for the love and an update is coming soon! - Amanda



ChaseznLuccaLover (Signed) on Sep 30, 2007 02:30 pm (Why Should I Worry?)

I was so freaking excited when I was just checking all my story sites that this one was updated already!! I actually squeeled out loud... (did I really just admit that?) 

OOOOOooooo I love love love the fact that he is using his present! And I am equally happy that Lauren is going! But I am just guessing that it isn't going to go as great at I am hoping, is it?

Can't wait for the next one! 

 



Author's Response: Hmm I can't answer your question, my brain does not compute. :P And it's okay I squeal all the time in pulic and freak perfect strangers out. You aren't alone! Mucho love girl! - Amanda



Hollie (Signed) on Sep 30, 2007 01:49 pm (Why Should I Worry?)
Oohhh, can she kick Maura's ass while she's there? And if Justin was just drunk and confused and that wasn't Birmingham, i was at that birmingham show and I will totally help her kick Maura's ass. because I'm like that *lol*

Author's Response: No that was Birmingham! I'm trying to make this as real time as possible so I looked up all his old tour dates and shit. So you could very well go kick Maura's ass...I can just see the headlines lol! Love you girl, go update Lovelight now! - Amanda



Vessy (Signed) on Sep 30, 2007 12:05 pm (Why Should I Worry?)
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response: Thanks Vessy! I'm glad you liked it, the next one is up, enjoy! - Amanda



Maggie (Signed) on Sep 30, 2007 11:23 am (Why Should I Worry?)
I fucking love you. Seriously. I keep going to read your updates but my stupid Logic class has prevented me from doing anything but updating, and only because the chapters were written a month ago. This story kicks ass, which by the way is what Lauren should do to Justin. Love it.

Author's Response: Aww thanks Maggie! I know how you feel with school...it's a complete bitch and I've hardly had the time to update let alone write. And you can thank my major for that too...five hours a night of rehearsals are killing me softly. But thankfully I'll be done with that soon and then I can write and yeah. I'm glad you like the story, and yeah, Lauren needs to do some ass kicking. Whether she does that or not remains to be seen. Thanks for the love! - Amanda



MissTasha (Signed) on Sep 30, 2007 11:17 am (Why Should I Worry?)

Denial, denial, denial. You can lie to yourself Lauren but you can't lie to me or Marty. Justin's her lobster and she knows it. I was actually like "yeah, that's right" when she told Marty off and hung up on him. But, honestly, I'm glad she's going to see Justin now. I see a reconciliation brewing and I am happy. But could you make Justin suffer for a little while longer? I would be grateful. Please update soon. 



Author's Response: Yeah Lauren needed a little of her spunk back. And yeah I'm glad she's going back to see Justin, too! And I may or may not make him suffer...it depends on how bad he is when Lauren gets there. Thanks for the love Tasha! - Amanda





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