Comments For Displaced Deception
aswift (Signed) on Sep 22, 2007 10:31 am (Hero to Zero)

Aghhhh!!!  That was awesome.  I got so caught up on it that my heart was racing.  I absolutely can't wait for the next chapter!

 



Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked the chapter and the next one is coming up! I just have to start writing it lol. Thanks mucho m'dear! - Amanda



alimera (Signed) on Sep 22, 2007 08:51 am (Hero to Zero)
jesus christ. i am utterly speechless right now. did he cheat on lauren with maura or did he just say that to piss her off? either way, i am NOT happy with his stupid ass. NOT AT ALL.

now i want you to keep the updates coming before i tear every bit of my hair out with worry. thank you!

Author's Response: Please don't pull a Britney and pull out all your hair. Not a good thing. And he didn't sleep with Maura at all. He just said that to piss Lauren off and I think he succeeded, don't you think? And no one is happy with his stupid ass...I'm not pleased with him either. The updates will continue, you guys are awesome with the feedback and that just makes me want to write even more! Thanks for all your feedback and yes, update is on its way! - Amanda



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Sep 22, 2007 08:12 am (Hero to Zero)
I don't want them to break up...no no no no no!  Please....make this better....please!!!

Author's Response: They have, sadly, already broken up. I might make it better, I might not. Justin said some pretty messed up crap, and so did Lauren come to think of it. But I will update soon, how 'bout that? - Amanda



glitter15 (Signed) on Sep 22, 2007 07:52 am (Hero to Zero)

Dude, Amanda, you didn't have to bust me out like that and say sorry for the grammar errors like your editor is too stupid to find them! I only stopped editing at like the very end ya old bag! ROFL.

Anyways, bish, my god, I love my adopted baby aka DD2. It's the fucking shit. Pure, pure genius...especially all the stuff I contribute. LMAO Mwuahahhahhahaha. Anyways, I LOVE IT! lps for life bitch. You're one of my favorite authors, but I kinda can't stand Justin. :D But you know my thoughts on THAT.



Author's Response: STFU bish. And I know your thoughts on your adopted baybay - you tell me all the time. Now send me that outline bish! - Amanda



Hollie (Signed) on Sep 22, 2007 07:07 am (Hero to Zero)
I'm still at a loss as to how Maura managed to not only move all that stuff but plant something on Theo, unless you're totally setting Maura up and there's another culprit altogether. Hmm. This is far too taxing for my brain on a Saturday morning.

Author's Response: I never meant for your brain to be taxed. And I won't say anything about the moving of the stuff and the Theo thing. Like I said, that will come in due course and yes. Thanks for the love, Hollie, and thank you for Lovelight. No, seriously. Update it soon! - Amanda



Miraclebabe (Signed) on Sep 22, 2007 06:02 am (Hero to Zero)
I don't like this at all. Is he crazy what would make him trip like that justin need his ass beat. I want maura's blood all over the wall that bitch neeeds to go down. WTF Theo . i need more and soon cause this is just too good and too much but I love it.

Author's Response: Yeah Justin is an insane individual. And my goodness people have got some death wishes for Maura, my goodness! And yeah the Theo thing...well not going to comment on that. More is on it's way and I'm glad you're liking it so far! Thanks, as always, for your feedback - Amanda



Kathleenie (Signed) on Sep 22, 2007 02:05 am (Hero to Zero)
What a powerful chapter. I was actually in tears when Justin said he had slept with Maura to Lauren. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please post soon!

Author's Response: Man I am just making people cry all over the place and no one is sick or dead or anything! Good lord. Thank you for the review and the update is coming soon! Much love - Amanda



Madcrazychick (Signed) on Sep 22, 2007 01:55 am (Hero to Zero)
Oh, god. I felt like a break-up was the only thing that was going to end the fight and there was even a certain part where I thought, okay this is it. She's going to just grab some stuff and go, but when that didn't happen, I started to have some hope. But then Justin had to go and say that. And as much as it sucks that he did, it was the final breaking point on his rage and he was back to the loving boyfriend Justin, too bad asshole Justin had already fucked this up so nicely. And then when he was out in front of her car, I thought of the Vibe (I think that's the one) photo shoot where he's hanging on the front of the car and the view point is from the inside of the car looking out at him. lol Anyways...this chapter was amazingly heartbreaking, very well written. I kinda wanted to hear what those 30 voicemails sounded like. And aside from that...I don't believe that Theo took that or anything, really. I still want to blame everything on Maura. The other stuff was in her closet, dammit! Stressed out or not, I don't think Lauren was just seeing things. And why would Theo do it? And why do I have Maura pegged as some evil genius who set that up as well? lol Oh and I'm sure Justin would be happy to know who Lauren's shacked up with now. lol Can't wait 'till the next chapter, come what may!

Author's Response: Again, I adore your reviews. And I just remembered that photoshoot right after I finished writing the chapter. It's the one with him wearing the Mickey Mouse shirt right? And don't think you won't be hearing from those voicemails. And I'm not going to even adress the last few sentences of your review :P All in due time my friend, all in due time. Thank you, as always for the amazing review! And yes, the next chapter is on its way! - Amanda



lesanne (Signed) on Sep 22, 2007 12:57 am (Hero to Zero)
what the hell? i mean, shit. one thing i will say is that you know how to write a good realistic fight.

Author's Response: That's the one thing I was most concerned about - writing a realistic fight and not making it seem over dramatic or nonbelievable. So thank you for thinking it was realistic. - Amanda



rev0586 (Signed) on Sep 22, 2007 12:50 am (Hero to Zero)
wow that was very intense. girl u had me crying here for real lol how pathetic is that lol

Author's Response: Not pathetic at all, I'm sorry you were crying. My bad. I mean to piss people off with this, not make y'all sad! Glad the intensity came across though! Update is coming soon! - Amanda



angel_from_africa (Signed) on Sep 22, 2007 12:17 am (Hero to Zero)
Omg!! I am so inlove with this story!! I hope Justin sees sense soon!!! Great job!!

Author's Response: Thanks dear! Yeah, hopefully Justin will stop being a fool, but only time will tell. -Amanda



MissTasha (Signed) on Sep 22, 2007 12:13 am (Hero to Zero)
Holy crap. I absolutely did not see this coming. I was embarrassingly excited to see that you updated. I was so looking forward to a big blow up fight. But I'm a little devastated now. I'll still be ridiculously excited when you update next time and, also, newly devastated. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Well you got your big blow up fight haha and I apologize for your devestation. I'm glad that you liked the update even though it upset you, believe me it upset me to write it lol. An update is coming soon and thank you, as always, for the constant feedback! - Amanda



danie (Signed) on Sep 22, 2007 12:05 am (Hero to Zero)
i can't believe he fuckin said that, i could not be here. i mean him saying that just pushed the shit right over the edge. i wouldn't even try to talk to him or anything unless he dumped maura out on her ass. i mean i'm not saying all there drama is her fault but she's a big ass part of it. that whole thing made me cry & i just kept saying "wow" b/c i couldn't believe it. its why i hate reading things like this b/c its makes me get emotional. anyway that's just stuck in my head right now "Don't worry, she's better than you ever were". what a way to make sure your relationship is over.

Author's Response: Yeah Justin is kind of an idiot in that sense and I'm sorry I made you cry! That's one dynamic of their relationship that they need to work on because once the start fighting they get at each other's throats. But then again they can't really work on it since they aren't together anymore heh. Thanks again for the feedback and an update is coming soon! - Amanda



JoJo (Anonymous) on Sep 21, 2007 11:41 pm (Hero to Zero)
WOW that was intense!! things have to get better!!! i'm so into this story!! i've been checking my computer everyday for updates. you're doing an amazing job. can't wait for the next one! SOON PLEASE!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much JoJo! I'm glad you liked the chapter and things may get better, but they may not. An update should be coming up soon. Thanks again! - Amanda



ChaseznLuccaLover (Signed) on Sep 20, 2007 02:51 am (World's Greatest Criminal Mind)

So I just spent the last three days read this story and the one before it, and I freaking fell in love with Lauren and Justin!! Definitly one of the best stories I have read recently!!

And just for the record, I think you just smashed my heart. I am very intrigued though to find out where all the stuff went... 



Author's Response: Thank you so much Annie! I'm glad you like this story and thank you ever so much for the compliment. It's always a joy to hear from new readers! I'm sorry for smashing your heart and you might find out in due course where all the things went. I know its hard, but be patient! Lol. Thanks for the review and the support, it is much appreciated! - Amanda





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