Comments For Displaced Deception
danie (Signed) on Sep 19, 2007 09:07 pm (World's Greatest Criminal Mind)
Author's Response: I know, Danielle, I'm sorry with the whole cliffhanger thing, but sometimes it needs to be done. I love reading stories where the writer is able to make the reader feel like one of the characters. I was hoping people would feel like Lauren in the sense that she has to wait in suspense for Justin to get home to see what happens. I hope I did it justice. And yeah, I also wanted people to be confused about what the hell is actually going on right now - again, the whole experiencing the stuff with the characters. And I'm glad you like this one and thanks for the feedback! An update should be up by Saturday or Sunday at the latest, but depending on my schedule, we'll see what happens! - Amanda
that's wrong to make us what to the next part to see what happens next. i don't even understand what the fuck just happened but some crazy shit is goin on right now. when do you think you'll be putting this next part up anyway b/c i can't wait to read this. i usually hate those justin gets with his pa stories but i can't stop reading this one.
Author's Response: I know, Danielle, I'm sorry with the whole cliffhanger thing, but sometimes it needs to be done. I love reading stories where the writer is able to make the reader feel like one of the characters. I was hoping people would feel like Lauren in the sense that she has to wait in suspense for Justin to get home to see what happens. I hope I did it justice. And yeah, I also wanted people to be confused about what the hell is actually going on right now - again, the whole experiencing the stuff with the characters. And I'm glad you like this one and thanks for the feedback! An update should be up by Saturday or Sunday at the latest, but depending on my schedule, we'll see what happens! - Amanda
smrkks (Signed) on Sep 19, 2007 05:10 pm (World's Greatest Criminal Mind)
well, first of all, why the hell would you ever ever apologize for long chapters, amanda? that's the silliest thing to ever apologize for especially when the chapters are sooooooo motherfuckin greatttttttt. fucking lauren- i absolutely fucking love her. rash and crazy and wtvr, she's awesome.
Author's Response: Thanks Stace! I'm glad people aren't too put off by the length of the chapters. And I'm glad you like them. And yeah, I have an enormous soft spot for Lauren. I love the girl to death! Love you girl! - Amanda
Author's Response: Thanks Stace! I'm glad people aren't too put off by the length of the chapters. And I'm glad you like them. And yeah, I have an enormous soft spot for Lauren. I love the girl to death! Love you girl! - Amanda
smrkks (Signed) on Sep 19, 2007 01:07 pm (The Walters Company)
that really was incredibly, inredibly hilarious. everything. the bow on theo's head, the picture. godddd love love love lauren walters.
monkeymonkey85 (Signed) on Sep 19, 2007 01:05 pm (World's Greatest Criminal Mind)
OH MY GOD GIRL!! holy shit! you need to update RIGHT NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW!!! WOW.... I hate that Justin is so nice to Maura... just WOW
Author's Response: Well if I updated right NOW it'd be like 5 pages of random stuff that makes no sense to you guys. Just give me a little bit of time (keyword being little) and I'll have an update for you. And yeah, its frustrating how Justin is nice to Maura although I don't think he's really nice to her. He just doesn't put her through as much shit as he did with Lauren. I explained that in a sense when Lauren had a discussion with his mom back in Chapter 2. She says, "“I’ve come to realize that Justin only likes to put the people he really loves through hell." So in a way he's already found the person he wants to be with so therefore he doesn't need to put Maura through as much, right? I hope that makes sense. Thank you for the review and an update is on the way! - Amanda
Author's Response: Well if I updated right NOW it'd be like 5 pages of random stuff that makes no sense to you guys. Just give me a little bit of time (keyword being little) and I'll have an update for you. And yeah, its frustrating how Justin is nice to Maura although I don't think he's really nice to her. He just doesn't put her through as much shit as he did with Lauren. I explained that in a sense when Lauren had a discussion with his mom back in Chapter 2. She says, "“I’ve come to realize that Justin only likes to put the people he really loves through hell." So in a way he's already found the person he wants to be with so therefore he doesn't need to put Maura through as much, right? I hope that makes sense. Thank you for the review and an update is on the way! - Amanda
Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Sep 19, 2007 12:11 pm (World's Greatest Criminal Mind)
O-M-G!!!! :-O!! that is my expression at the moment. Which is pretty funny looking in the computer lab at school, but oh well. You KNOW Maura had help...she had to have. And now Lauren and Justin are on the rocks! AH! Well I hope everything turns out okay ... :( This was an awesome chapter ... full of suspense and all! Sorry it took me so long to read it, I wanted to read it when I had time to relax. Anyway, I can't WAIT to see what happens next...it's gonna be good! LoL. Awesome job once again! TTYL -Traci
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this chapter, Traci! And you're right, what happens next is freaking awesome! At least I think so. An update is coming soon so don't worry! Thanks for all the love! -Amanda
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this chapter, Traci! And you're right, what happens next is freaking awesome! At least I think so. An update is coming soon so don't worry! Thanks for all the love! -Amanda
Chelsia (Signed) on Sep 19, 2007 09:02 am (World's Greatest Criminal Mind)
i cannot believe that all happened in one little chapter. ok so big mystery, where did it all go....i cant even think up a place...ugh...i hope there's an update near in the future
Author's Response: I don't think it was a little chapter....it was 20 pages lol! Yes, the missing stuff is a big mystery but I can't tell you where it went! There is an update in the near future...hopefully by this weekend! Thanks for all the love Chelsia! - Amanda
Author's Response: I don't think it was a little chapter....it was 20 pages lol! Yes, the missing stuff is a big mystery but I can't tell you where it went! There is an update in the near future...hopefully by this weekend! Thanks for all the love Chelsia! - Amanda
alimera (Signed) on Sep 19, 2007 08:13 am (World's Greatest Criminal Mind)
OH. MY. FUCKING. GOD!!!! i am NOT HAPPY RIGHT NOW!!! jesus christ, where the hell did all that stuff go? maura is a little wench, and i am not thrilled that justin yelled at lauren like that! this is worse than the drama i thought you had cooked up! ugh, i wish i could tell you NEVER to update again, but i need you to fix this!! aaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!
:/!!!
Author's Response: My lord woman, breathe! I don't need anybody passing out or dying while reading my story. I will do my best to fix it to the best of my abilities, but if the story goes one way or the other I make no apologies. Just know I appreaciate the review and all the support! Update is coming soon! - Amanda
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Author's Response: My lord woman, breathe! I don't need anybody passing out or dying while reading my story. I will do my best to fix it to the best of my abilities, but if the story goes one way or the other I make no apologies. Just know I appreaciate the review and all the support! Update is coming soon! - Amanda
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Sep 19, 2007 07:23 am (World's Greatest Criminal Mind)
So, I'm happy that you gave me a solid reason to hate Maura, because I didn't like that girl and I wasn't sure why...but not I've got a reason so it's OK....just one question...where the hell did all the stuff go??
Author's Response: Well I can't tell you where all the stuff went that would totally ruin a few things I have planned lol. You might find out in due course. I'm not going to tell you exactly when though! Thanks for the love! - Amanda
Author's Response: Well I can't tell you where all the stuff went that would totally ruin a few things I have planned lol. You might find out in due course. I'm not going to tell you exactly when though! Thanks for the love! - Amanda
Miraclebabe (Signed) on Sep 19, 2007 05:52 am (World's Greatest Criminal Mind)
Oh i knew this would happen! i feel for laure &justin but i luv the drama. i luv this great job!
Author's Response: Gotta love the drama! lol. Thanks so much for the love! Update is coming soon - Amanda
Author's Response: Gotta love the drama! lol. Thanks so much for the love! Update is coming soon - Amanda
aswift (Signed) on Sep 19, 2007 12:37 am (World's Greatest Criminal Mind)
Ahhhhh!!!! Awesome chapter. Left us hanging again :( Can't wait for more!!!!
Author's Response: Sorry to leave you hanging...sometimes I just like the suspense. But an update is coming soon! Thanks, as always, for the review! - Amanda
Author's Response: Sorry to leave you hanging...sometimes I just like the suspense. But an update is coming soon! Thanks, as always, for the review! - Amanda
rev0586 (Signed) on Sep 18, 2007 09:37 pm (World's Greatest Criminal Mind)
omg i cant even explain the suspense u have me in but that little bitch maura i know shes up to no good n i have this feeling that shes gonna try to take jt away from lauren
Author's Response: I'm sorry for the suspense but you'll just have to wait a bit longer for an update! It won't take that long I promise! Not going to make any promises for the future actions of characters! You'll just have to wait and see. Thanks so much for the review and I'm writing the update as quickly as possible! - Amanda
Author's Response: I'm sorry for the suspense but you'll just have to wait a bit longer for an update! It won't take that long I promise! Not going to make any promises for the future actions of characters! You'll just have to wait and see. Thanks so much for the review and I'm writing the update as quickly as possible! - Amanda
Liz (Signed) on Sep 18, 2007 09:24 pm (World's Greatest Criminal Mind)
Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking the story and I'm glad that it continues to be better for you! That's what I was aiming for with this piece. And yes, I'm thinking general consensus is that Justin is an idiot. Update is coming soon! - Amanda
OMG I am in LOVE with the story- the first one was amazing and this one just keeps getting better andbetter. I really can't stand Maura and I want to Bitch slap justin for how he was talking to her- she's had his back thru how much shit before?
Wow- Sorry I'm getting way to into this story!
Update SOON! :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking the story and I'm glad that it continues to be better for you! That's what I was aiming for with this piece. And yes, I'm thinking general consensus is that Justin is an idiot. Update is coming soon! - Amanda
MissTasha (Signed) on Sep 18, 2007 06:57 pm (World's Greatest Criminal Mind)
Even if it's forbidden I want to kill you! Why did you stop there? Noooooooooooooo! When is the next chapter coming? When? When? I'm dying over here! Noooooooooooooooo!
Author's Response: Don't die! That would be bad. And I can't die because then you wouldn't find out what happens next lol! So an update is coming soon...just need to figure out how to write it! - Amanda
Author's Response: Don't die! That would be bad. And I can't die because then you wouldn't find out what happens next lol! So an update is coming soon...just need to figure out how to write it! - Amanda
angel_from_africa (Signed) on Sep 18, 2007 06:27 pm (World's Greatest Criminal Mind)
OMG!! Now i'm beginign to hate Justin again!! How can he not see maura for who she really is?? And i really do not like Maura.. anyways good job again pls update soon!!
Author's Response: Well we all know that Justin is a moron lol. At least in this story. Update is coming soon, thanks for the continued support! - Amanda
Author's Response: Well we all know that Justin is a moron lol. At least in this story. Update is coming soon, thanks for the continued support! - Amanda
Vessy (Signed) on Sep 18, 2007 05:00 pm (World's Greatest Criminal Mind)
wow that was interesting, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks Vessy! More is coming soon! - Amanda
Author's Response: Thanks Vessy! More is coming soon! - Amanda
