Comments For Displaced Deception
danie (Signed) on Nov 22, 2007 12:50 am (She's a Tramp)

don't know if i already did a post for this chapter already, can't remember really. i was checking out your site and just felt like reading this cuz this chapter isn't on there. i think i read this but i have trouble remember things so whatever.        i wasn't expecting these two things: justin to cry and lauren to leave. i thought she'd talk to him or at least go to leave and then come back. now i thought justin just might keep calling her all the time but i guess he realizes how hard it might be to get her back this time. this is nothing like all the other screwups that happened with them.




Lynn (Signed) on Nov 17, 2007 11:33 pm (She's a Tramp)
WOW, I just caught up and WOW, I can't think of a better description to how wonderful this story is. I LOVE IT. WOW! WOW! WOW! *I told you Maura was abitch! I hated her from the moment Lauren interviewed her!*



Liz (Signed) on Nov 14, 2007 05:50 am (Something There)
I think I'm going insane not knowing what happens! Update sooon please :)



Niffer (Signed) on Nov 06, 2007 01:39 am (She's a Tramp)
I love your story!  OMG!  Please update it.



Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Oct 24, 2007 12:59 pm (She's a Tramp)
“she managed to take the trust, love, and camaraderie I felt with one person and tear it to shreds”

That’s exactly what she did. Grrrr Maura! I bet that was her plan from the very beginning—to take what Lauren had and just mess it all up. I feel bad for Justin, but sometimes he can be sucha idiot! LoL.
What a wonderful job though, sorry it took me so long to review. But I’m anxiously awaiting the next chapter to see what’s going to happen. I hope that things work out though :(. Awesome job once again! -Traci



ChaseznLuccaLover (Signed) on Oct 22, 2007 10:40 pm (She's a Tramp)
Yes, my heart did just break for Justin. I am mad at him still for treating Lauren like he did!!! I do want them back together though!! I'm kinda surprised that Maura went down like that. I was expecting her to try and weezil outta it, but she kinda went willingly. Although that makes me think that this might not be the last we see of her... is it??



Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Oct 22, 2007 09:33 pm (Pink Elephants on Parade)
Good! Hurry, hurry, hurry with Chapter 20! Dont leave me in the trenches!



Tash2 (Signed) on Oct 22, 2007 02:30 pm (She's a Tramp)
almost , well yeah i do but he needs to beg and feel her pain a lil mo'.



Kathleenie (Signed) on Oct 22, 2007 11:25 am (She's a Tramp)

What an incredible chapter. I absolutely loved it. I love that Maura's lies have come to light and that Justin is finally taking the steps needed to win back Lauren.

However, I am not ready for them to get back together yet (because then that means the story is over--boo!) I think Justin needs to fly his ass back to the states and butter Lauren up until she finally realizes how much she still needs Justin despite his mistakes and imperfections! Can't wait for the next update, missy.




JustinsAngel (Signed) on Oct 22, 2007 12:19 am (She's a Tramp)
Update soon



danie (Signed) on Oct 21, 2007 06:59 pm (She's a Tramp)
i felt sorry way before all this shit happened. i didn't really catch how the title fit into this story until i read that thing about maura's deception, i wasn't paying attention to that. i still think they gonna get back together even with all the drama that's going on right now.



angel_from_africa (Signed) on Oct 21, 2007 03:51 pm (She's a Tramp)
WHAT?? Lauren is crazy!! She needs to open her eyes ASAP!! But what maura said is a bit fishy and justin needs to high tail it to the airport and get lauren back!! OMG great chapter!!! Amamzing!!!



smrkks (Signed) on Oct 21, 2007 12:31 pm (She's a Tramp)
omg lauren better not get on that flight. that's all i have to say about that.. and i'm seriousssss!



lesanne (Signed) on Oct 21, 2007 11:25 am (She's a Tramp)
i want to feel sorry for justin and do in some ways, but he also did it to himself. i know that sounds bitchy, but it's true. he brought it on himself and power to lauren for not caving immediately. i probably would have fallen right back into his arms.



Maggie (Signed) on Oct 21, 2007 10:27 am (She's a Tramp)
I love it, though I do think Lauren should have gotten another shot at Maura. Justin better start in on some serious ass kissing.





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