Comments For Displaced Deception
MissTasha (Signed) on Oct 21, 2007 10:09 am (She's a Tramp)
Yes, I do feel sorry for idiot Justin finally. I know it's not easy forgiving somebody for calling you a liar, saying that you're worse in bed than his personal assistant, and overall treating you like shit but Lauren isn't even trying. They'll never work it out if she won't bother trying and runs away every time they start to make a little progress. If Justin was the one driving me nuts before, Lauren is driving me up a fucking wall. I love her but she's the officially taken over the idiot position from Justin. Can't they ever just be one the same page? And... Maura got fired! Maura got fired! Maura got fired! (claps hands and cheers) Please update soon.
Hollie (Signed) on Oct 21, 2007 09:28 am (She's a Tramp)
P.S. what with me being poorly sick today this was a big cheer up. Thank you
Hollie (Signed) on Oct 21, 2007 09:22 am (She's a Tramp)
*takes a bow* Thank you, thank you, I knew it... and in answer to your previous quetsion, the second Lauren mentioned seeing they went to the same university when they raided Maura's apartment, I had suspicions. You think like I do honey bunch, which is why i love ya!!! Of course I may have just paid you the biggest insult ever saying that, but I love ya!!! I do feel kinda soryr for JT but... kinda not. Eedjit *lol*
alimera (Signed) on Oct 21, 2007 09:09 am (She's a Tramp)
aww, i'm totally feeling sorry for him now! poor baby! okay, okay, he gave lauren hell and he didn't believe her, but now he knows he was in the wrong and lauren is definitely making him pay for it. she's got tons of strength--i would've forgiven him already, lol. update again soon!
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Oct 21, 2007 08:40 am (She's a Tramp)
Oh goodness...that was rough. I don't even know what I have to say about all that...
Lauren needs to forgive JT, he's pathetic and a mess without her, lol
Liz (Signed) on Oct 21, 2007 08:20 am (She's a Tramp)
Right so a few chapters ago I kind of hated him and now I just feel bad for him. Trace should kidnap lauren right off the plane and bring her back to justin and lock the two in the room together until they're a couple again....
fantastic plan, get on that will you :)
Vessy (Signed) on Oct 21, 2007 07:30 am (She's a Tramp)
Poor Justin, fix this :P can't wait for more!
ChaseznLuccaLover (Signed) on Oct 19, 2007 12:48 am (Pink Elephants on Parade)
I second the "WHAT THE FUCK?". If he doesn't believe Lauren after this, I am going to quit this story... yes that is a threat. Really that's an empty threat. I won't quit the story because it is my form of drugs, but I will be very very angry with much swearing at my computer screen (which means you won't hear it and what good does that do me?). So in other words, just please update!!!!
Author's Response: Hah...will he believe Lauren? Can;t make any promises because Maura could pull the wool over his eyes again...who knows. You'll have to stay tuned for the next chapter (which is coming soon, I promise!). Thanks for the review and for all the support! Much love! - Amanda
Author's Response: Hah...will he believe Lauren? Can;t make any promises because Maura could pull the wool over his eyes again...who knows. You'll have to stay tuned for the next chapter (which is coming soon, I promise!). Thanks for the review and for all the support! Much love! - Amanda
lesanne (Signed) on Oct 18, 2007 09:53 pm (Pink Elephants on Parade)
oh my goodness. so good. so bad but so good.
Author's Response: Glad you thought it was good. Did you think it was bad because Lauren got herself into a fight and the can of worms has gotten bigger? - Amanda
Author's Response: Glad you thought it was good. Did you think it was bad because Lauren got herself into a fight and the can of worms has gotten bigger? - Amanda
wpoohbear (Signed) on Oct 18, 2007 06:51 pm (Pink Elephants on Parade)
Finally he knows!!!! Next chapter!!! Loved the fight scene. I could toally picture the whole thing.
Author's Response: Glad you got the picture, I was worried people wouldn't let it materalize. And yup, he knows now...finally. Hopefully he can stop being an ass and an idiot and apologize and the like. Next chapter is comingup soon! - Amanda
Author's Response: Glad you got the picture, I was worried people wouldn't let it materalize. And yup, he knows now...finally. Hopefully he can stop being an ass and an idiot and apologize and the like. Next chapter is comingup soon! - Amanda
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Oct 18, 2007 03:55 pm (Pink Elephants on Parade)
oh snap. good, get rid of that bitch! and I think JT and Trace should've let them go at it a little longer, I would've loved to see Lauren kick the shit out of Maura some more!
Author's Response: Yes, but then Lauren would be thrown in a foreign jail and that wouldn't be good at all. And who's to say Lauren's done with Maura? Hah. Glad you liked the chapter and more is coming soon! - Amanda
Author's Response: Yes, but then Lauren would be thrown in a foreign jail and that wouldn't be good at all. And who's to say Lauren's done with Maura? Hah. Glad you liked the chapter and more is coming soon! - Amanda
Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Oct 18, 2007 02:00 pm (Pink Elephants on Parade)
"...I suppose you could wag out with your vag out, but that doesn’t sound sanitary or as cool…”
That has got to be the funniest line. I seriously laughed out loud reading it. I love Trace. Well, I love you for writing Trace so well. :-P.
BUT, back to other topics! I was hoping Justin and Lauren would be able to work things out but seeing as in the end of this chapter she's pretty much down and out with the alcohol in her system (not to mention the damage Maura did to her), and FINALLY Justin caught Maura in the ACT! OoO! I can't wait for her to get what's coming to her. LoL.
But awesome job as usual! I hope the next chapter is comin soon!
-Traci
Author's Response: Yeah I freaking LOVE that line lol. Sometimes I don't get where all the pervetedness comes from. Yup, Maura has been caught in the act! I'm glad you liked the chapter and the next update is coming soon. Thank you so much for all the love, Traci! - Amanda
That has got to be the funniest line. I seriously laughed out loud reading it. I love Trace. Well, I love you for writing Trace so well. :-P.
BUT, back to other topics! I was hoping Justin and Lauren would be able to work things out but seeing as in the end of this chapter she's pretty much down and out with the alcohol in her system (not to mention the damage Maura did to her), and FINALLY Justin caught Maura in the ACT! OoO! I can't wait for her to get what's coming to her. LoL.
But awesome job as usual! I hope the next chapter is comin soon!
-Traci
Author's Response: Yeah I freaking LOVE that line lol. Sometimes I don't get where all the pervetedness comes from. Yup, Maura has been caught in the act! I'm glad you liked the chapter and the next update is coming soon. Thank you so much for all the love, Traci! - Amanda
Kathleenie (Signed) on Oct 18, 2007 01:58 pm (Pink Elephants on Parade)
Author's Response: Maybe, maybe not. But I'm glad you liked the chapter. And never thought about Maura selling the story to the paps...interesting twist. You'll get the back story sooner rather than later :) More is coming soon! Thanks for the review! - Amanda
Oh my God, I love this chapter! Maura probably planned on stealing Justin's belongings and then running to the paps and selling the fight story. Bitch! Can't wait to find out what the back story is between Lauren and Maura--you know there is something from their Stanford days!
Post more soon! PLEASE!
Author's Response: Maybe, maybe not. But I'm glad you liked the chapter. And never thought about Maura selling the story to the paps...interesting twist. You'll get the back story sooner rather than later :) More is coming soon! Thanks for the review! - Amanda
alimera (Signed) on Oct 18, 2007 01:15 pm (Pink Elephants on Parade)
hahahahahahahahahahahaha! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT! okay, on one hand, i am so fucking thrilled that lauren beat the shit out of maura la whora! two, justin caught her in the act! but noooooooooooooow--he's going to have to do a shitload of groveling and kiss assing to get back in lauren's good graces. yeah, you're an idiot, justin...you should've listened to lauren from the very beginning! omg, you better have that next chapter up soon!
Author's Response: Hmm excited much lol. And yes, Justin will have to do a crap load of groveling and ass kissing. Chapter is coming soon! - Amanda
Author's Response: Hmm excited much lol. And yes, Justin will have to do a crap load of groveling and ass kissing. Chapter is coming soon! - Amanda
Hollie (Signed) on Oct 18, 2007 10:49 am (Pink Elephants on Parade)
Oh, and I don't think "you were a bitch back then" actually refers to when Maura first started working for Justin, either. I have other reasons for thinking this from previous chapters... or maybe i just read way too much into crap. I dunno. More soon.
Author's Response: Oh I don't know...you should totally email me and tell me your other reasons because I'm a stickler for knowing what people think will happen with the story and the like. But you'll find out in the next chapter for reals lol. Much love girl - Amanda
Author's Response: Oh I don't know...you should totally email me and tell me your other reasons because I'm a stickler for knowing what people think will happen with the story and the like. But you'll find out in the next chapter for reals lol. Much love girl - Amanda
