Comments For Noche de Verano
JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Jul 04, 2011 12:34 am (Chapter 1)
Sweet lord.. This freakin made my night! haha Perfect! I freakin loved it!!!!! Mmmm JC.. *fans self* jeez girl.. That last chapter.. Woahhh.. and the part where the guys were watching her take control on the stairs with him. I literally LOL.. Amazing job!
Keediluv (Signed) on Aug 21, 2010 12:02 am (Chapter 4)
So, I had to take a few breaks on this one...wow that was so damn...hawt! Is it my week to have him again? Let me know, LOL! Fan-fuckin-tastic mama!
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 10, 2010 07:11 pm (Chapter 3)
Awesome! :D Woot! Off to the next chapter!
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 10, 2010 07:07 pm (Chapter 4)
Thats the BEST bday gift to give him! WHATT?? I would totally do the same thing to him... woo! is it hott in here of is just me??..lolzz & I laughed when all the guys were there watching them...priceless...I LOVED IT! Awesome job girl..
Nerdily Ingenious (Signed) on Aug 10, 2010 06:03 am (Chapter 4)
I vote that if JC ever read this, he'd bone....lol. I'd also vote that if five guys watched them do it, he'd bone TWICE. :D
I seriously thought this was gonna be about Salsa dancing, actually, I thought he was on Dancing With The Stars...lmao..yeah I know. Sometimes I wonder if any of the guys stumble upon this stuff accidentally. If not, good old myspace messaging works, just a little direction is all. Great story. :)
I seriously thought this was gonna be about Salsa dancing, actually, I thought he was on Dancing With The Stars...lmao..yeah I know. Sometimes I wonder if any of the guys stumble upon this stuff accidentally. If not, good old myspace messaging works, just a little direction is all. Great story. :)
musicmel (Signed) on Aug 09, 2010 10:16 pm (Chapter 4)
Author's Response:
:Thud: You have a way with writing chapters like this with such ease. Ugh So freaking great ;)
Author's Response:
uh...Mel? U ok? Mel? Mel? Oh shiz...lol hehe!
Thank you! I don't know if I should be proud or a bit ashamed (which I'm totally not) that your compliment was about sex chapters. Good thing I'm damn proud! Thank you!
musicmel (Signed) on Aug 09, 2010 10:01 pm (Chapter 3)
Author's Response:
I love stories like this. She is in total control and he is enjoying it! I think men should be more like this. Sometimes a woman just wants control damn it! lol!
Great job!!
Author's Response:
Right? We can put it down too, jeez. Men need to back off sometimes, right?
THanks!
musicmel (Signed) on Aug 09, 2010 09:56 pm (Chapter 2)
"Cchop chop, up you go!" Haha... and up he went, with her not there to help him out.
Author's Response: HAHA! oh my...i love it! hehe...
Author's Response: HAHA! oh my...i love it! hehe...
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 09, 2010 09:23 pm (Chapter 1)
OOh! JC dancing salsa! Would love to see him doin that, rockin his hips..ohh yeaaa! Love it!
Author's Response: man oh man...him singing in spanish kills me, him dancing salsa would mutilate me....ah!
Author's Response: man oh man...him singing in spanish kills me, him dancing salsa would mutilate me....ah!
azchicakdee (Anonymous) on Aug 09, 2010 06:51 pm (Chapter 2)
ok....I was confused at first about this chapter, but I think I got it now. lol....I think. This is kind of a flashforward to the first chapter? right? hmmm....on to the next one.....
Author's Response: nope, hehe...maybe it is confusing. dammit, should've used a beta! its the morning after the salsa showcase, sorry
Author's Response: nope, hehe...maybe it is confusing. dammit, should've used a beta! its the morning after the salsa showcase, sorry
XxSmurfettexX (Anonymous) on Aug 09, 2010 02:17 pm (Chapter 3)
Awwww. I love the two of them so much. The ending...*fans self* something tells me things are only going to get hotter. Please update soon.
Author's Response: something tells you right...read on!
Author's Response: something tells you right...read on!
XxSmurfettexX (Anonymous) on Aug 08, 2010 09:56 pm (Chapter 2)
I find it funny that almost everyone depicted JC at not enjoying the fact that it's his birthday. Love it, update again soon.
Author's Response: no, no, he enjoys that its his bday. he just doesnt want to get out of bed...and damn, i'd love to climb in!
Author's Response: no, no, he enjoys that its his bday. he just doesnt want to get out of bed...and damn, i'd love to climb in!
Bobbilynn (Signed) on Aug 08, 2010 12:49 pm (Chapter 1)
loved it! I'd love to see JC salsa, hahaha :)
Author's Response: me too! but, i dont think my heart could take it!
Author's Response: me too! but, i dont think my heart could take it!
MissM (Signed) on Aug 08, 2010 11:34 am (Chapter 1)
SIGH. What I wouldn't give to see that hotness!! Hips hips hips.... where was I?
Author's Response: umm....hips, i think
Author's Response: umm....hips, i think
azchickadee (Anonymous) on Aug 08, 2010 11:16 am (Chapter 1)
mmm, mmm, mmm! salsa dancing is sex-ay!! and JC salsa dancing?! be still my heart!! lol....I need more!! I'm hoping your parent's internet stops sucking so you can post the rest quickly :)
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
so obviously...it did not stop sucking! sorry! but yes, mydear "Be still my heart" is right...
