WOW!!! Can a girl or woman really speak or utter words from having been kissed unexpectedly by a guy (JC's so brilliant) or are there instances?? Cause this is really extraordinary.
"Get your bags, eh?" A gentle breeze blew around them, the sudden scent of the vanilla, amber and blackberries filling his nose. "Lauren, stop." He reached forward, grabbing her by the wrist and pulling her to him, pressing his lips to her own. She was tense, he releasing her hand as she lifted hers up, pushing him away. "Better bring them inside before it rains."
I love it but I was a bit cut short in the bed part. LOL. I can't imagine how gentle was JC in bed. haha. He was just plainly in love, I think. Anyway, as for the whole story, it's unique and unexpectedly romantic but I hated Lauren for being so in-denial at the first place. LOL. But...
"You were worth the wait."
:)
Author's Response: Haha, thank you :) I think I'd be a bit flabbergasted and speechless if I were to be unexpectedly kissed by anyone I was in love with :) I kind of purposely made it a short bed part ... just because I wasn't one to really put it all out there with this one ... I wanted it sweet, a little sexy and just something to smile about :) Thank you for reviewing! And sorry I responded so late!
Your welcome! :D lolz yes I had a moment, What a great ending! *thud* Now dont we all wanna be with this guy?? YES! Anyway good job girl! Loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks, doll! It was fun to write once I got over that annoying little beginning bump. I didn't wanna get too dirty with the ending, either; it was just a sweet way to close it off. :)
Author's Response: Thank you!! I love writing him; there's just something honest about him that it makes it fun to write. :)
Author's Response: Haha, anytime, doll! And thank YOU! You always give me something to read when it's late at night and I have no inspiration - don't be surprised if I start asking you for helpful ideas coming up here, soon :)
Love happens, no matter how many years it takes you to wake up and realize it.
This was a string of true love that pulls at your heart. Great job!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you!! Glad you liked it! :)
Eep! What a great way to change the way JC would see his Twitter account forever. Heck he might actually log in once and a blue moon.
Off to the next :)
Author's Response: I can only wish, right? A little more interaction would be greatly appreciated, hahaha.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! I enjoyed writing it, too :)
Author's Response: That was the story of my life for the longest time - I gave her the happier ending, though :) And I agree on the Twitter comment, hahahaha
Author's Response: Thank you, doll!!! :)
Oh wow! Im loving this chapter all ready! awesomeness! Good job! Keep goin!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I was trying to build some sort of ... I don't know ... reason for this girl and this was the quirkiest one I could think of. I'd been trying to write the beginning for four days and I just finally let it go and it wrote itself, haha.
Had to put words to my nightmare, didn't ya?! Ugh, if he ever thought to read any of our stuff. *Headdesk* I need that 4th and even 5th and 6th wall. Desperately!
Looking fwd to Pt 2!
Author's Response: lol, that too, is also my worst nightmare. If it ever came down to it, I'd be like, "What kind of stories do I write?" *scrambles to delete all fiction* "eh, you know, just little drabbles. I don't even save them half the time ..."
