Comments For Overhung.
Covergirl (Signed) on Oct 19, 2010 08:40 am (Hung.Over.)
Great job, Mel! *thumbs up*

"Friends, lovers, companions, family... it doesn't matter at the end how you got there, as long as you get there."

This line sums it all up for me. =)

Author's Response:

Thanks :)

I love that line as well. It really does sum up really all that matters.




Keediluv (Signed) on Oct 19, 2010 03:32 am (Hung.Over.)
Mel!  This is so endearing honey...I love it!  I love that it went the way it did and that they had a heck of a time in Vegas.  It's awesome that Justin and Anya stayed married and that it all worked in the end.  Love really is all that matters in the end.  Fantastic job sweetheart. :)

Author's Response:

Vegas is about craziness so they guys needed that! I wanted Justin to do one thing in his life that wasn't calculated and make him see life from a different view, with it turned out to be the right one!

Thanks ;)




Keediluv (Signed) on Oct 19, 2010 03:20 am (Suite Life)
I'm not used to this JC, change him back! (in my five year old, less mature, so in love with Joshua Chasez voice) It's disheartning to think of this being a possibility.  But, your writing is the dopest mama!  On to the next one...

Author's Response: This JC was surprisingly, in some weird way, easy for me to write. This JC was a mess and needed his friends back. He was just stubborn, as most men are, and thought he could walk this life alone and be fine.

I adore your kind words! Thanks ;)




theusagirl (Anonymous) on Oct 18, 2010 08:03 pm (Hung.Over.)
LMAO!! the hotel scene was soo freakin funny! Chris always makes me laugh "I think u found some smurfs!" LOLZ! & Lance waking up with two women, not knowing what the heck happened..priceless! What a wild & interesting night the guys had..LOVED it! I also like that segment at the end as well very true.... Great job! :D

Author's Response:

Haha. Everytime I read that line I could totally see Chris, in all seriousness in only a way Chris could do it, saying that line! Lance with two women was just funny to me, for obvious reasons. Sometimes we do things intoxicated that we would never do sober!

Thanks :)




theusagirl (Anonymous) on Oct 18, 2010 07:47 pm (Suite Life)
OOohh...Im lovin this chapter! Im soo glad that JC & Trace were having that convo together....g2 read the next one! :D I like this little segment by the way: Nice job!

"Friendships were hard to repair sometimes. There are things that can't be repaired and sometimes the people involved are so forever changed that they themselves can't be repaired. There has to come a point when you let the past be just that, that past. Live and learn, but never let it take over."



Author's Response:

JC & Trace together were fun to write!!  And I could totally see them sitting in the bar screaming movie quotes at each other! lol

I wonder sometimes where I come up with these quotes. That particular quote started with just the worlds "forever changed" It's honest and true!

Thanks :)




Nerdily Ingenious (Signed) on Oct 18, 2010 12:03 pm (Suite Life)
Ho-ly shit. Best part: Lance with two women, not one, two...lol. As a Joshtin lover, I loved the bromance, but Justin married and JC's career?! That's a tough one.....I want one but don't want the other ( guess which one THAT is....lol. ). Either way, cute story. I liked reading it.

Author's Response:

I have to agree, best part is Lance with two women! I don't know which I would chose as well. Justin Married or JC's career? It's a tough choice but I'm glad that Justin chose to support his best friend and take the hit.

 

Thanks ;)




AmberW (Signed) on Oct 18, 2010 11:52 am (Hung.Over.)

This turned out soooo good!  I love it!

I love the resolution at the end :)  

Great job girl!



Author's Response:

Awe! Thanks ;) It was a bit of a challenge for me to write! But since I have been there seen everything, experienced life in Vegas, I bet I could write a different version of this story now!




sChErZo (Signed) on Oct 18, 2010 11:33 am (Suite Life)
and you said you couldn't write a pop! story.  it's something different for you but i loved it :)

Author's Response: Write happy Pop! stuff isn't in my nature. I love bringing the tears, but this was fun to write and scheme about the craziness they would endure. I may have to do it again... maybe!

Thanks ;)




jersey_tenn (Signed) on Oct 18, 2010 09:38 am (Hung.Over.)

now...to have to give up Justin's bachelorhood for JC's career?!?! you put me in a touch spot! but...i think i can do! give it to me! bring it on!

I know you need tears, but i loved it.



Author's Response:

I do need tears, it's kinda in my nature to want that but I liked doing a rare, fun, pop! story! Choosing Justin over JC or vice versa is such a difficult choice... but I think choosing a friend over a bump in your career is the better choice!

Thanks Love! I may have to venture into another fun happy story... maybe. lol






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