ninabina (Signed) on Dec 26, 2010 01:49 am (To The Three...)
Girl, you know that I so think that this is not finished.  I want to read more.  I NEED more.  Please revisit this ending. :)

Author's Response: Why does people keep saying that?  It feels finished to me but we never know.  We'll see what happens but I think I'm done.  Glad you liked it though :)



Mariana (Anonymous) on Oct 25, 2010 01:48 pm (One...)

OMG, I can't belive I finally founded (is that a word? sorry, my english isn't the best) someone with the same opinion that I have! GIRL, MAKE JUSTICE! I don't know If actually Justin didn't walked around a little bit on her shoes like you said on your story you know, the idea that I had was that They fought until their last stenght for the relationship.. But honestly, he's too blinded with hate, I don't see him apologising for what He did and does either.. I don't! Like you said: very things are left usaid. I think even between them, but that's just guessing. They're both not saints. I know that some people may by chance read this and think "Are They still taking about this? Move one, it was so long ago", but the truth is, and we can see that in this year's concert JT & Friends, that at least Justin hadn't move on. 

Well, I agree with you, from what I know, she only talked 3 times on a Tv interview (one was actually in 2008, I think, The Record, you know that interview?) and was very mature about it. I think that the reason why we don't know as much her side is because she handled the break up more maturely and didn't speak as much. I think that the worse that she said was about CMR and was something like this; "I think it was a desperate act f asking attention", Oh well.. If you don't have anything good to say about something or someone, then shut your mouth, right? Well, That's actually what I'm going to do, but I would love to continue this conversation with you.. You know, I don't have many people to talk about my opinion on this, one: people don't care. Second: Don't have my opinion. So, I know that this may sound kind of random, but do you have Facebook or Msn or something where we can talk more privatly? Just asking, I don't to disrespect or say bad things about someone in public, like some people we may or may not talked about in this converstaion.. coff-coff, that very imature and rude. 

Apart (or not) from this subject, when are going to update your story? It's just I'm excited about it.. :) Not trying to hurry you up or something, it's just to have some period of time that I have to wait in mind. Just to come run to my computer.. :P

That's all, sorry for the long post, but it's such a deep subject..

Bye! 



Author's Response: WOW...again thank you so much!  You can email me so we can chat on gmail.  KiheartsGS@gmail.com is the email.  Feel free to email me anytime you're ready.  Thank you so much for your thoughts, I really appreciate it!



Mariana (Anonymous) on Oct 24, 2010 05:04 pm (One...)
Hi! I really liked your story! I was actually atracted to it because I'm a Britney fan.. :P
I was actually expecting a little bit more drama, especially from Justin.. At least before the happy sex talk in the end of Chapter 3.. Just to keep it more real, which is always good altough is a fan fiction. But maybe you just want things to happen fast.. It's a slash story after all.. And we never know what's happening next.. Espeacially with Britney! ;P
I'm ver anxious for the next chapter, also because I already read some of your storys and I liked it!
So good work, good luck! And Bye.. :)
Ps- Just something that I noticed that it might help you in terms of dialogue context or even ideas. They spoke and mentioned "Cry me a River " but They didn't mentioned Everytime ( not that I notice it, I'm going to have to read it again).

Author's Response: WOW!  Thank you so much hon!  To be honest, I wasn't much of a fan of hers when they were together but she grew on me over time.  It's a heavy subject, dealing with their breakup and I didn't want it to become this shouting match of 'he said she said' you know?  I was trying to keep it very adult and I think we've already heard alot about his side; I didn't want to over do it.  I just hope I did some justice.  Thanks again and P.S, I left out 'Everytime' on purpose.  I just wanted to mention that line. :)  Thanks again!



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Oct 21, 2010 11:03 pm (One...)
Very good story! I really enjoyed it!  They complimented each other so well back in the day.  Seems like this was a story that just had to come out.  

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I felt the same way when I first started writing it.  Thanks again, I really appreciate it.



Mack (Anonymous) on Oct 21, 2010 06:27 pm (To The Three...)

Awww, the "What If?" scenario. Man, I really wish this actually happened. It would be great to see them together again. I mean, Justin sees everyone else from the 90s, even Christina, but he doesn't see Brit? *Sigh*

Anyway, I loved the idea behind this story and I loved how awkward things were between them. The blow up was amazing. I could see it all happening and I felt sorry for both of them. Great job, hun!



Author's Response: Thank you so much.  It's weird because as a fan, all you could hope for is his happiness.  I just can't help but think that he was at his best with her and her with him.  Thank you for your review, I really appreciate it.  :)





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