Comments For Happily Ever After
SomethingBlue42 (Signed) on Oct 31, 2010 12:00 pm (Say Yes and Live Happily Ever After.)
I'd been waiting to read this when I wasn't at work and it was SO worth the wait. Seriously awesome! I love all the tension and the build was electric. Great job!
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wow, thank you! i rly appreciate you reading; i'm so glad that you enjoyed it :)
Whit1210 (Signed) on Oct 29, 2010 09:38 am (Say Yes and Live Happily Ever After.)
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Ohhh, Trace...I really enjoyed your 3-way narrative style. Great short!
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thanks so much for reading & reviewing! i'm glad the 3-way worked for you :)
jersey_tenn (Signed) on Oct 29, 2010 07:41 am (Say Yes and Live Happily Ever After.)
what?!?! poor trace! he's getting shafted - once again! My heart broke for him. This was great. I wish there was more, but I liked it. Great job.
Author's Response: thank you so much! indeed, it's a very tragic situation for trace... i felt bad for him while writing it. not only does she not love him back, he's proposing & there's a possibility that she'll just be honest w/ him & say no in front of a lot of ppl. or she might lie & break his heart later down the line when even more feelings have been invested. gah! now i just might have to write more to c where the story takes me. thanks again tho for reading and reviewing; i deeply appreciate it.
Author's Response: thank you so much! indeed, it's a very tragic situation for trace... i felt bad for him while writing it. not only does she not love him back, he's proposing & there's a possibility that she'll just be honest w/ him & say no in front of a lot of ppl. or she might lie & break his heart later down the line when even more feelings have been invested. gah! now i just might have to write more to c where the story takes me. thanks again tho for reading and reviewing; i deeply appreciate it.
Kijuana(Keediluv) (Anonymous) on Oct 29, 2010 01:15 am (Say Yes and Live Happily Ever After.)
OMG....FINISH IT! FINISH IT! FINISH IT! If you couldn't tell, I'm excited about it, lol. Great start...keep going :)
Author's Response: lol, i love your enthusiasm! but i really only meant to write it as a capture. maybe one day i'll expand on it tho... it does interest me quite a bit; maybe this could be the prologue and then i'd pick on narrative & tell the story in that... hmmm idk maybe... but thanks so much for reading & for reviewing.
Author's Response: lol, i love your enthusiasm! but i really only meant to write it as a capture. maybe one day i'll expand on it tho... it does interest me quite a bit; maybe this could be the prologue and then i'd pick on narrative & tell the story in that... hmmm idk maybe... but thanks so much for reading & for reviewing.
