Comments For The Sun & The Moon
azchickadee (Anonymous) on Apr 01, 2011 05:46 pm (Chapter 4)
aaahhh!!!  an update!!!  :)  A perfect start to the month.  He's starting to become more creepy.  lol...he is a dark and twisty man.  And so angry!  goodness.  I'm kind of starting to get worried for Autumn....


azchickadee (Anonymous) on Jan 27, 2011 06:49 pm (Chapter 3)
decided not to lengthen it, huh?  *sad face*  I was hoping to read more!  lol...I love it, as previously stated.  I vote for Autumn's POV before going back to Justin.  Just for a little bit. 


SJane (Signed) on Jan 13, 2011 07:08 am (Chapter 2)
girl u definately are holding my attention with this, the unknown is just soo exciting lol

Author's Response:

Hey!!!

Quite possibly the best thing to hear!!!!  I am so thrilled that you're enjoying it!  That really means a lot to me, since this story is so different for me to write.  He's definitely the unknown character, not really understanding his thought process or why he acts the way he does...so much more to be revealed. 

Thank you again so much!   It means everything!

-BD



Whit (Anonymous) on Jan 12, 2011 11:20 pm (Chapter 2)
This was awesome!!! I love the cliffhanger... I love how she tried to hide him....I love these few chapters! i am soooo intrigued by the story already!!!

Author's Response:

Hey there!!

Thank you so much!  I am thrilled you're enjoying this story as it's sooo completely different from Lucky Me.  Justin is definitely creepy, possessive, but there's something underneath it all that will be revealed, he has good intentions.  He likes to be in control...or at least feel like he is.  Things will definitely spiral a bit for him.   I hope you stick around for it all.  Thank you again, so much for leaving a review...it means so much to me!

-BD



azchickadee (Signed) on Jan 12, 2011 09:43 pm (Chapter 2)
I like the banner without the "obssession" on it better.  You already have all of my quesitons for this chapter :)  I haven't thought of anything else since yesterday except...when are you going to be updating?!  lol...I'm so intrigued with this story and it's only just begun!!  He's such an interesting, complex, dark, creepy character.  I don't usually like stories where Justin is something other than the guy we all know (or wish we did) and love but you have me completely hooked on this one!!!  <3

Author's Response:

Ahhh...you're like my lifesaver!!!

 Thank you so much for all your help, thoughts, questions, comments, input, concerns...just everything!!!!  You rock!!!!!

 I am so glad that you're enjoying a Justin that you normally wouldn't read.  That's just...awesome to hear!!  

Love ya tons!!!

-BD

 



Whit (Anonymous) on Jan 08, 2011 06:44 pm (Chapter 1)
I am very intrigued! I am excited to read more and see where this is going.

Author's Response:

Hey girly!!

Thank you so much!  There's so much more to unravel!  Justin can be a super complicated, darker man in this fic...but I love a good bad boy!  :)  

I hope you like the new chapter, can't wait to hear what you think!  Thanks for giving this story a chance, too! :)

-BD



azchickadee (Signed) on Jan 08, 2011 09:02 am (Chapter 1)
O. M. G.  I....I'm speechless...I am in awe over this first chapter.  First of all:  DAMN can you write!!  This was so amazingly descriptive and heartbreakingly emotional.  I can't even put into words how in awe of you I am right now.  This is the kind of writing I wish I could do but I can't.  Second: when is the next chapter coming because now I'm addicted!  lol...Please don't be nervous about this story.  If this first chapter is any indication it is going to be AMAZING!  <3

Author's Response:

Girly, I heart ya!!!!  You seriously rock my world!  Thank you so much for all the encouragement, advice, and editing!  You're the best!!! 

I am thrilled that you liked it!  I was pretty nervous!  You can totally write this stuff...pffft, you rock!

Anyways, I am sending you an email very shortly with the next chapter! :) Can't wait to hear what you think!!!

-BD



ninabina (Signed) on Jan 08, 2011 06:31 am (Chapter 1)

Your writing style is really unique, and I really enjoy it.  But I'm a little confused--I'm sure intentionally, though.  It seems like this is a vampire thing, but I can't really tell.  It's like you explain it, but always subtly hide what you're saying too.  Or maybe this is all part of his secret.

Either way, can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Hey there!!!

I am so excited that you like it! My first review!  eek!  This one is totally different than what I usually write, and I love the challenge.  The prologue is a little chaotic-just glimpses into the words that define how Justin lives his life, what is happening in the future.  Chapter 1 backs things up a bit, developing what you see happening in the Prologue.  Hopefully some answers will be given.  It's not a vamp story, he's totally human, just with some paranormal abilities.  However, it is AU, he's not the Justin from *Nsync or the celebrity...he's a normal guy, navigating the world the way he knows how.  Each piece will be pulled back a layer at a time, so hopefully, I won't lose ya and things will start to make sense more and more.  :)  It's definitely a little darker...but I am a sucker for the bad boy.  :)

 Hope you enjoy, next chapter very soon!  

Thank you again!!!!!!!!!!!!

-BD





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