Author's Response: It's been bound to happen, they don't seem to address anything that goes on between them until someone gets mad...lol. Yes! I also loved that look, it was my favorite. Justin and JC curly at the same time, however, Timbersezgasm. All over the place...lol. Thanks for your review! :]
Author's Response: Haha, still team J-Zee!! I think you're one of the very few that are....lol. Thanks! :]
Author's Response: I know, I'm thinking I could've taken the fight further, but there's still some things that if gone further, would've been uncovered too soon. Thanks for the review. :]
Author's Response: I know, not everybody does...lol. Thanks!
"You think you're the more vulnerable one, but you're not. JC is terrified of you and what you could signify in his life. When a man's scared, the possibilities of what he can do to feel safe again, are endless. Keep that in mind."
Joey is a smart man, and now with the news about Justin and a mystery woman, things could potentionally get very bad for Zahra, Justin, and JC. There is no doubt in my mind that JC is in love with her, but I believe there is doubt in his mind that she loves him, even after they had sex and this "gossip" won't calm that doubt. Great update, can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Yes, Joey is a smart man, gotta give him credit for being able to give Zahra a heads up since he knows JC so well. Thanks for the review! :]
This line here "JC's my best friend, my brother, I'd kick anyone's ass in the world for him" Alright Joey! :D I like that, and I also like that Zee told him what was going on b/tween her, JC, and Justin. And oohh, Zee is the mystery woman, *dun dun dun* Now, who DOES she love more?? AHHH! Im so happy you updated, this is good.. :D
Oh wait, yay for starting your senior year of college! WOOT! *throws confetti*
Author's Response: Thanks for the confetti and the review!! :]
Author's Response: It's always a mess!! Lol Thanks for the review! :]
Author's Response: Thanks! :]
Yes go talk to JC Zee... :) Ok..um lets get back that first half of this chapter...oooooh "Soundproof bathroom" I like that.. ;) Tee hee..its a good thing Zee and JC didnt really DO anything there..that dude wouldnt be able to concentrate anyway..lolz But OMG! MSG 2000..JC, lick mic..DGD was *swoon* I mean, when I was 12 I was like oh look, but now...YES! LOLZ I also like that Truth game that the guys were playing, that was fun..and ooh what is Lance hiding?? Hmmm.. Anywho..thanks for updating..this is good.. ;D
Author's Response: Lol, and it would have been soundproof anyway with him easing her into some sort of dungeon-like area....haha. I was 10 when I saw the DGD performance. That was the first time I saw JC in a different way....lol. I knew it then. =D
very good chapter....loving the whole bobbi being a bitch secne....very good :)
Author's Response: Well you know she can't help it....lol. Thanks. :]
I've been following this story from day one & absolutely love it. So glad Zahra & JC finally made love, looking forward to them doing it again. At the same time, I would like to see Zahra try out Justin as well. ;D
This story is keeping me on my toes, so please update soon!
Author's Response: Have you? That's pretty cool, thanks for being such a loyal reader. I'm sure my other readers are with you on them finally taking that step together, though no one has said anything about Zee and Justin yet...lol. Thanks for your review! :]
woah. i'll come back to the woah in a minute but i had to put it out there.
lol at Zee, i've been to PR 3 times and my spanish wasn't that good but having a guy that speaks the language is a plus ;)
now the woah, it's a good woah. :) 1st i can't believe she caught him...she should have went in there and joined him, i know i would have especially if he was calling my name. haha. so her first time was with JC and he made it so passionate. but i have a feeling this could be a bad thing. especially if he doesn't end it with Bulbasaur. and oh my, what about justin.
great update. I'm going to bed with images of JC... shame on me.
Author's Response: That's awesome, PR does sound fun, I'd like to go one day. The good Woah! I keep reading it as Joey Lawrence's "Woah"....lol. That had to be super awkward for her, catching him in the act. I'm loving that their first time together is perceived so differently. Few say passionate, few say it was selfish, but you all ultimately feel like it might've been a bad thing. Bulbasaur! LOL. And Justin...Justin, Justin, Justin. ;] Thanks for the review! :]
Author's Response: Ahhh...nice observation. I swear, some of you guys point out things in your reviews that I don't even take heed of when I'm writing. And honestly, I prefer it that way, because I think it gives the opportunity for the character to just take on naturally without my tampering or fixing. Thank you for your review. :]
