Author's Response: It could be a total mistake, we'll see in the chapters to come. Thanks! :]
HOLY SHIZNET! WOOT! Dangnabbit where do I start? Ok um...lets get back to Chris Montez, aww he wants to invite Zee to Puerto Rico, but she went to New York with the guys instead..GREAT choice Zee.. :P Now, lets get back to this lovely JC goody, man do I want him to be MY first.. yes siree.. *daydreams*but then again, dont we all?? ;) Seriously I know that Zee and JC loved eachother, but THIS time they actually did the wonders of love making, and the sun was rising over the horizon..That is sooo romantic and just WOW! Im gonna sleep well tonight.. :) Awesome job on this chapter, Loving this story! :D
Author's Response: Chris never said WHEN....!!! Lol, regardless, would YOU go with him or choose NY with NSYNC? :D It was so hard writing their first time together. I get really weird about writing sex scenes because I'm in no way an expert, so I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you. :]
Author's Response: Two words: Thank you, you're awesome....oh wait that's four, sorry i had a Kirkpatrick moment. :D I meant it though....lol. Thanks. :]
Oh boy, JC still has way too many fears for this moment to end well for either of them. She is probably going to end up hurt whether he means to hurt her or not. *sigh* But as first lovers go, JC is a pretty good one to have!
Oh, and when she asked if he had protection, is it bad if the first thing that came to my mind was 'is the Pope Catholic'? lol
Author's Response: Exactly, the one fear that Zahra was sure he had gotten over, is still lurking its' ugly head along with a few friends. They both seem to hurt each other a lot, but whether JC does it intentionally or not is the mystery. Haha, the Pope?!?!?! I'd only hope my smut didn't make anyone else think of The Pope...lol. Thanks for the review. :]
Author's Response: It would seem that JC finding out about Chris would've made things a bit different when they finally decided to talk about it. But...then again, he can't really say anything since he's taken as well. Thanks for the review! :]
Author's Response: Thanks! :]
Author's Response: Ahh, this is where it gets interesting. I rarely have anyone say they're against JC, but it's nice to see the other spectrum. And no, it's not weird to be Team Montez, go for it...lol. Thanks for the review. :]
Author's Response: LOL! Don't give me ideas...haha. Thanks! :]
Author's Response: Although a day with Chris Kirkpatrick would be fun, that'd just be weird in terms of Zahra sneaking around....lol. She definitely had to make a huge decision....but it's not the only one she'll be making. Thanks for reviewing! :]
Author's Response: Haha! Thanks! :]
uh-oh but glad my review helped you realize you posted wrong update.
i fixed my tumblr so you should be able to post now. If I did that wrong, my email is brightbrowneyes83@yahoo.com
Author's Response: Got it. Thanks. :]
Author's Response: You don't have the ask box function, so is there somewhere where I can send you a link?
Author's Response: I'm so glad you put that part of JC into your review, because if you didn't I would've never noticed that I submitted the wrong update. *slaps forehead*. Regardless, thanks for the comment.
Author's Response: Who knows what's up with her, hence the nickname "Bitchie"...lol. But yes, she does have a point, she obviously knows something that the others are failing to not see. Thanks for the review. :]
"Because Im not perfect" Really?? JC?? Really?? Ok, now I must say this "you can call me unperfect, but who's perfect, tell me what do I gotta do to prove that Im the only one for you, so whats wrong with being selfish" That song right there fits this chapter..oh yea! *SIGH* Um..lets see what else do I like about this, OH! the avoiding thing b/tween Zee and JC was just wow..that would be really awkward, but eventually nature took its course and such lovely things happened.. Awww, I wouldve melted at the moment when JC was crying then started kissing Zee...Im getting that warm fuzzy feeling again... :) Oh and I also like this line here, I find that cute, "I'll pour you some orange juice, you big sleepy baby, you," I cooed. JC looked up at me with a look on his face and I laughed. "What? Joshy doesn't like it when Zee Zee teases her widdle baby?" I pinched his cheeks. JC pouted his lips and looked up at me with big eyes. "Can I have a straw?" Like I said CUTE AWW! Man..your story is making me love JC even MORE, Great job, and thank you for updating! :D
Author's Response: Ahhh! Now I won't be able to stop singing 'Selfish' now. =D I sure didn't think about that though, makes sense. Anything after an argument would prove to be an awkward situation, but like you said, nature took it's course and information was revealed. I enjoyed writing that part, too....lol. Thanks and I appreciate it! :]
Author's Response: Ahhh! Now I won't be able to stop singing 'Selfish' now. =D I sure didn't think about that though, makes sense. Anything after an argument would prove to be an awkward situation, but like you said, nature took it's course and information was revealed. I enjoyed writing that part, too....lol. Thanks and I appreciate it! :]
