Author's Response: Awww...lol! You were so sure about Zee and Justin. Thanks for the comment. :]
ohh JC in nothing but a towel *pictures it* niccccce. My mouth dropped when I read that JC opened his towel to adjust... I wasn't prepared for that either. (and YES my jaw dropped once again when he asked that question - wondering if he was serious or not) I gasped when JC whispered those 3 big words.
That was sweet of Zee to help Chris out with the steps.
Goodness, it had to be Joey to catch them like that, innocent or not. Good thing it wasn't Justin though.
Be back later to read the next chapter. It'll be a reward for completing some schoolwork.
Author's Response: Thanks! :]
"Don't. Don't look at me like you have feelings for me. Don't talk to me like you care about me. Don't touch me like I'm the only man in the world for you....because I'm not. You never even said if you loved me back..." Oh woww..that is some interesting choice words that JC said to Zahra..DANGNABBIT JC break up with that Bobbi freak! UGH! I despise that woman, this line here "Justin, JC, and Zee. The three musketeers. An odd number. Threes don't last very long, because two always go off and....pair up." *slaps her* I hope a cat attacks her face.. Hmph!
Anywho, I really love this, looks like Zee is the grand prize alright...two guys that like her, even if they have dates of their own, no Bobbi doesnt count, she's an ugly FAT BUG! *snickers* Great job though, thanks for the update.. :D
Author's Response: Don't you just wanna slap that Bobbi, sometimes....all the time? Lol. I never though about making her even remotely important in the relationship between Justin, JC, and Zahra, but she becomes a key player in what's to unfold. Thanks for reviewing! :]
Author's Response: Anonymous who are you?! I love you! This is a great in-depth review of the characters JC and Zahra. It's quite refreshing and interesting to read what someone else thinks about these characters and their approach to the situation at hand. At times I find that I've stopped thinking of what motive I want for each character and just let it play out as I write. Nonetheless, I appreciate your review. And that's another for Team Zahra/JC! LOL. :]
Author's Response: A Team Zahra/Justin on the rise! Lol. And yes that treacherous snake Bobbi, she's just as important here as everyone else as everything starts to get more intense. Thanks for the review, appreciate the ranting, always...lol. :]
*dun dun dun* OOohh..Joey KNOWS something is going on b/tween Zee and JC, *sigh* JC is irresistable, the dude is attractive, its hard to NOT look at his pretty face and the rest.. ;) I liked the part where JC had the towel around him and Zee was acting all jittery about it, then she made breakfast at lunchtime..HAHA! Oh and the whipped cream part was just wow..and it would be fun to just tackle him once in a while.. ;) And my other fave part was where she showed Chris what his missed step was, that was sweet of her.. :) Above all, this is good..Im feeling all JC lovey dovey now..tee hee..Thanks for the update..
Author's Response: But of course, nothing is complete without the all-knowing Joey! :D It seems JC has magical powers, making women all over the world eat breakfast at lunchtime....lol. And yeah helping with the missed step was sweet of her, even if she didn't think so. I appreciate the review. Thanks! And if you're feeling all JC lovey dovey, I can't wait until you read the chapters to come ahead. :]
Love the work so far hun:)
Author's Response: Trust me, it's that much more fun to read the naughtiness after I've written it and then wonder what the hell I was thinking...lol. It's starting to get rolling now. Hope you stick around for the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing. :]
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Author's Response: You're the first person to call JC a jerk...! Lol. Thanks, though. :D
this was a great update. while reading the beginning I couldn't help but think that Zahra wanting to move on means the end of this story is near and that makes me sad so i hope i'm wrong there.
oooooooo a road trip with the guys, i dreamed of that as a teen. and Zahra is right, loving a Chasez and Timberlake at the same time could mean big trouble. especially when they BOTH love her back
Author's Response:
Are you kidding me?! I love writing this story, I HOPE I'm not ending it this soon....lol. And yeah, something about being on a tour bus with the guys just sounds fun. Yes! While what I said was true about her loving them both, what you said is rings even more true: they both love her back. Trouble's a-brewin'. :D Thanks for the review. :]
Author's Response: Exactly, she thought it'd be fun, turns out it's not all it's cracked up to be when things get serious. Thanks for your review! :]
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A part of me wants to yell some sense into Zee that she shouldn't be there but then the story would be boring and I love reading about drama. You better upated soon, girl! I can't wait for more.
P.S. She needs to choose JC *nods*
Author's Response: I know, just to let her know it's a bad idea. But Zahra is definitely one of those "learn it the hard way" people and who knows? In the end it might be good for her. Can't be too sure about who she'll choose if she has to, it could go either way. ;) Thanks for your comment! :]
Author's Response: It'd seem like it would be SUPER easy to turn away from someone, like a JC or Justin, but this proves that it gets tough...especially when emotions start to grow. And yes eventually she will have to choose...or if she's lucky, she won't. It's hard to tell. ;) And I actually just edited that line last night, because it was something different and I ended up not liking it. Glad I changed it though...lol. Thanks for your review! I appreciate it! :]
Just wow....amazin....loving the love triangle....keep it up...im hooked to this story.
Author's Response: Thanks. I enjoy writing it so much. :]
