jrtimberyes (Signed) on Jun 20, 2011 10:28 pm (
Chapter Twelve)
Freaking awesome!! Love this story. Justin's so sexy!
Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate it. :]
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jun 20, 2011 07:38 pm (
Chapter Twelve)
Oh wow...and this is Justin we're talking about, wait a sec..Justin and Zee...tee hee! *giggles* Yeah they were caught in the heat of the moment..Yeah Mr. Crewman, it was a "wardrobe malfuction" alright.. ;) Ok..now to JC, aww..is JC a bit jealous that Zee is going out with Christopher Montez.??.wow..that is interesting.. this line here ""I can definitely work, but only if you let me," he whispered. OOoohh..yeah I KNOW that he can work it alright..WOO! Ok..let me get off from my cloud 9..or should I stay there?? hmm ;)..lolz Above all, good job..thanks for the update.. :D
Author's Response: Yep, Justin and Zee again. And it's true, it WAS a wardrobe malfunction...sorta....lol. ;D You'd think JC wouldn't be jealous, right? And I lie that line, too...float on cloud 9 all you want, I don't ever kill those wants...lol. Thank you for reviewing. :]
brightbrowneyes83 (Signed) on Jun 20, 2011 01:00 pm (
Chapter Twelve)
"Ju-liciously gorgeous" I like that. I agree with Zee, what Justin wore in Bye Bye Bye had me drooling, melting and ogling too, especially after that chuckle. I would (and still do) rewind that part over and over and over - anyway back on topic. Woah! that scene between Zee and Justin was hot. I had to reread chapter 9 to see which was hotter. It was a close call but I think I liked the scene between Zee and Justin - but both were very good.
Author's Response: I think for me, it was seeing Justin in the denim..whoo! :D Haha, it's so funny, I had to go back and read Chapter 9, too....lol. Thanks for the review. :]
kb4jc (Signed) on Jun 20, 2011 12:37 am (
Chapter Twelve)
hot....very hot....nice job
Author's Response: Thanks! :]
brightbrowneyes83 (Signed) on Jun 16, 2011 01:46 am (
Chapter Eleven)
aww her presents were sweet, well the present from Chris was funny but still sweet. i think celeste is right, he's afraid to completely give his love to Zahra and then she falls out of love with him.
Author's Response: Yeah it could be what's stopping JC from being with her. Hopefully we'll be finding out. Thanks for the review. :]
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jun 15, 2011 09:13 pm (
Chapter Eleven)
Yeah Zee.. ;) Tee hee..Ok, love the Christmas gifts that she got, LOLZ I laughed when Chris got her pics of himself, thats a great gift, I wouldnt mind at all, I would put them all over my room.and stare at his cute face.. *giggles* And the necklace that JC gave her. All the guys gave her such nice thoughtful gifts.. :) This is a sweet chapter, loved it.. thanks for the update..
Author's Response: LOL...it does seem like something Chris would do as a joke. You're welcome, I'll be updating very soon. Thanks. :]
jrtimberyes (Signed) on Jun 15, 2011 08:19 pm (
Chapter Eleven)
Looooooove it!!!! :)
Author's Response: Thanks.
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jun 01, 2011 08:00 pm (
Chapter Ten)
Oh that freaking shiznet! Is that a word? lolz Bobbi that witch UGHH! JC why did you invite her to the party? cause its his girlfriend thats why, I answered my own quesition, but JC is in love with Zahra, he FINALLY told her that he LOVED her, and he thinks that she doesnt feel the same which is why he cant break up with that witch face..haha..and ooh JC in the shower?? Nekkid?? YES! :D *fantasizes* though Im happy that Zahra punched Bobbi square in the jaw, she TOTALLY deserved it..Now to Justin, since he was pirate, did he have a talking parrot on his shoulder??(Oh wait..thats Chris..tee hee) He still cares for Zahra, but she doesnt feel for him like she feels for JC..*sigh* And I quote "
Love may not make the world go round, but it sure makes the ride worthwhile" From the movie "On the Line" ;) Great job on this and thanks for the update! :D
Author's Response: Love the movie quote, can't believe you remembered that....lol.
YES! It's finally happened, JC admitted his love for her and it all sucks since he doesn't think she feels the same in return. And yes, I'm sure we've all felt the urge to punch Bobbi in the face because she had JC for so long....witch...lol, jk. And with Justin, yes, she doesnt feel for JC what she feels for him...but....that's not necessarily a bummer. Be on the lookout.
;)
brightbrowneyes83 (Signed) on Jun 01, 2011 03:36 pm (
Chapter Ten)
Finally JC admits he loves her. The sluttty witch comment made me crack up. I loved the convo between Justin and Zahra. I wonder who she will end up with in the end. (btw, I went and created my account because of your story ;) -ChiChi)
Author's Response: I know, finally. Awwww, thanks. Glad you made an account. Thanks for the review. :]
jrtimberyes (Signed) on Jun 01, 2011 07:36 am (
Chapter Ten)
Awesome update. I love it. Can't wait for more. :)
Author's Response: Thanks. :]
ChiChi (Anonymous) on May 29, 2011 04:59 pm (
Chapter Nine)
I loved reading this story so much I'm considering making an account just so I can add it to my favorites. I hope you update soon b/c I can't wait to hear what happens next.
Author's Response: Aww! That means so much to me, thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read the ideas in my crazy mind...lol.
ChiChi (Anonymous) on May 29, 2011 02:22 am (
Chapter Three)
A kiss from JC and Justin, lucky lucky girl
ChiChi (Anonymous) on May 29, 2011 02:03 am (
Chapter Two)
I'm loving this so much. JC moving into her house, the humor. Love it all
Kazd (Signed) on May 26, 2011 04:44 am (
Chapter One)
Love it, Love it, Love it, your indepth descriptions of feelings and the looks passing between them its great can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Wow, thank you very much. I always thought I wasn't very good at describing things, so thank you. :]
anon (Anonymous) on May 17, 2011 10:34 pm (
Chapter Nine)
can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks. :]