theusagirl (Anonymous) on May 17, 2011 08:35 pm (Chapter Nine)

Oh by the way...I havent listened to that Beatles song in years..such a nice song, how wonderful if JC actually did a cover for it.. :)



theusagirl (Anonymous) on May 17, 2011 08:16 pm (Chapter Nine)
Wowww..that man YES! JC does have those nice jazz fingers, if I was Zahra, I'll let him work his magic on me..Wooo..And aww thats cute that he trusts her enough to give her the key to his new house.. :) Haha..6 months and they still cant keep their hands off from eachother, I am LOVING this, thank you for the updating! :D Good job..

Author's Response: You'd figure after 6 months that things would have gone sour, guess not. ;] and thank you for the loyal reviews, I really appreciate it. And Yesterday is one of my favorites, I could only WISH that JC did a cover of that song. :]


jrtimberyes (Signed) on May 17, 2011 05:13 pm (Chapter Nine)
Ugh he needs to dump bobbi!! Lol love the update :)

Author's Response: Lol, I know, right? Thanks. :)


JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Apr 25, 2011 12:38 am (Chapter One)

Thanks for the welcome :) and like i said, this story is terrific!!

I'm working on a story as well (but not nearly as good as this) Feel free to let me know how to improve it if u ever do read it!

ahhh i'm loving the little triangle between Zahra, Justin & JC!!



Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'll definitely check out your story when you post it. I'll put up my tumblr on my bio if you ever want feedback or to bounce ideas. :)


jrtimberyes (Signed) on Apr 24, 2011 10:42 pm (Chapter Eight)
Lovedddddd it

Author's Response: Thanks!


theusagirl (Anonymous) on Apr 24, 2011 08:12 pm (Chapter Eight)
*gasp* That little...Oooh! Bobbi has issues, hahah "evil bat" I laughed at that..this is soo hard! JC likes Zahra, and Zahra likes JC, but JC is dating Bobbi, his heart is torn two ways..*sigh* which is why he's thinking of moving out of Zahra's basement..cause he's attached to her, and he LOVES her..and cant forget Justin, he likes her too, but as a friend I think..This is a pretty good chapter, poor Zahra, she is "lost in emotion" ;)

Author's Response: As a JC lover, I have to perpetuate the gate for Bobbi, but at least I kept it fair....lol. Yes, don't forget about Justin because it's gonna get crazy once they hit the new millennium. Thanks for reviewing. :•]


JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Apr 23, 2011 11:29 pm (Chapter One)

Ohh man i am LOVING this!! PLease please keep updating! and soon!! btw, Bobbie's a b*t*h! LOL really liking this story! :)



Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading. I noticed you're new, so welcome! :)


Mack (Anonymous) on Apr 23, 2011 10:28 pm (Chapter Eight)
I think I speak for everyone when I say I REALLLLY hate Bobbi. The whole chapter was great, as usual. Hope you update again soon.

Author's Response: Lol, I'd hope everyone would hate her. :D Thanks for the review, I plan on updating real soon.


jrtimberyes (Signed) on Apr 16, 2011 08:44 pm (Chapter Seven)
Loooooooved it

Author's Response: Thank you. :)


theusagirl (Anonymous) on Apr 16, 2011 08:05 pm (Chapter Seven)
*falls off chair* YAY! You updated! Ooooh where do I start? Um...OH! Her bday party, woo hoo she's 18, OMG the guys sang at her party, BEST one EVER! If only they came to my party when I was 18, pssh Im 21 now... ;) Tee hee..and Im glad that Zahra is not rushing herself into intimacy(like me also woo hoo) So thats Kudos for both of us, lolz but Cel telling her to lose it with Justin?? *scratches head* Now..I dont know about him, I think JC is a better suggestion, (shh, dont tell Justin that) lolz. To top this review, JC ALWAYS gets what he wants, he likes to play hard to get, he got a kiss from Zahra, after he was being moody patootie with her, totally worth the 41/2 month streak..Great job! :D Thanks for the update, looking forward to the next chapter..

Author's Response: I always love reading your reviews. You're so animated, lol. Thanks so much!


jrtimberyes (Signed) on Mar 19, 2011 11:24 pm (Chapter Six)
Aww amazing update! I loved it.

Author's Response: I'm glad you did. :]


theusagirl (Anonymous) on Mar 19, 2011 07:54 pm (Chapter Six)

"If you love someone, your gonna have to let them go" thats a line from a freestyle song..ok that was off topic...OHH But that is SO hard to let such a beautiful gorgeous man go...(for a while anyway..lolz) where do I start?? oh like the part where the other guys come in..that was cute..and the basement/water bottle scene..woot!Taste of his own medicine yes *gasp* And Justin kissing Zee too..Woww ..Im lovin this story..thanks for updating! Nicely done.. :D



Author's Response: LOL! Thank you!


Ari (Anonymous) on Mar 05, 2011 12:46 pm (Chapter Five)
Just started reading this. It's getting so good! Please update soon!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I hope you've been enjoying everything so far, there's more to come.


Mack_Attack22 (Signed) on Mar 03, 2011 07:20 pm (Chapter Five)

Four words: I. LOVE. THIS. STORY!!

Please please please please update again soon!



Author's Response: Haha, wow, that means a lot coming from you, so thank you for reading and reviewing.


theusagirl (Anonymous) on Mar 02, 2011 07:21 pm (Chapter Five)

Ohhhh there is no stopping when it comes to JC...but hellooo.. ok LOVE THIS! Im actually speechless right now..Zahra is having all these crazy emotions for JC and JC feeling the same...nope age does NOT matter..what a sexy chapter..yess...Good job and thanks for updating.. :) *goes watch video of Tearin Up My Heart" just for little fun.. lolz



Author's Response: I know, sometimes it's like, when will Zahra stop giving in? But I've got some cute little surprises coming up. I actually had to watch both the TUMH and IWYB videos so I had the hairdo's right....lol. Thanks for reviewing.




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