Comments For You Don't Know My Name
CutiePie07 (Signed) on Jan 13, 2008 10:08 am (Causing A Scene)
Justin's a dumbass. lol. It wasn't really confusing, just fast paced. But more happily, you updated! :) When is Julie's friend going to meet Justin? I guess thats coming up, right? Can't wait till you update again.
Author's Response: Yep, the meeting is going to happen very, very soon. Next chapter soon.
Author's Response: Yep, the meeting is going to happen very, very soon. Next chapter soon.
Kahlymilla (Signed) on Jan 12, 2008 10:03 pm (Causing A Scene)
I don't think I was that confused even though in generally I'm usually confused anyway lol. Um...that was a good chapter Ange. Justin confuses me, but I think he confuses himself even more. Where did he come up with the bright idea to propose to Cameron? I don't think he even thought it through really. I didn't really hate Jules in this chapter so that is a plus lol. I kind of like the relationship between Chris and the narrator in this chapter, it was funny and playful, but maybe they are better just as friends instead. It was nice of her to pick him up from Jail, why was he that wasted in the first place though lmao. Frankie is probably the smartest character in this story thus far lol. Can't wait until the narrator and Justin meet!! Do you have that scene planned already?
Author's Response: lol Not really hating her is almost like liking her. Maybe next chapter she'll be likeable? Or not, who knows. lol why was he that wasted in the first place though lmao. Does a college student really need a reason to get drunk? lol I don't have it planned. I did, but I've changed it. I liked it the old way, but the one person I let read it wasn't that fond of it, so hence the changing. That scene is going kill me.
Author's Response: lol Not really hating her is almost like liking her. Maybe next chapter she'll be likeable? Or not, who knows. lol why was he that wasted in the first place though lmao. Does a college student really need a reason to get drunk? lol I don't have it planned. I did, but I've changed it. I liked it the old way, but the one person I let read it wasn't that fond of it, so hence the changing. That scene is going kill me.
c00lxkiddo (Signed) on Jan 12, 2008 09:32 pm (Causing A Scene)
Author's Response: Yep, you're right. And I didn't mention her name, so you didn't miss it. And there was a semi-good reason for not mentioning it in the story thus far, but that was before I re-worked the ending, (which I'm still re-working lol) so maybe in the end it will be stupid that I didn't have her name mentioned sooner. But anyways, hopefully having those thoughts confirmed takes away any lingering confusion, if not let me know! Thanks for reading/reviewing!
I think I got it, but I'm still a little confused.
Justin proposed, even though he just had sex with Julie. Chris and the narrator (did you mention her name & I missed it, 'cause I feel really bad that I don't remember her name) are rebuilding their friendship, but it's more like a new relationship. Am I right? Either way, I enjoyed it. [:
Author's Response: Yep, you're right. And I didn't mention her name, so you didn't miss it. And there was a semi-good reason for not mentioning it in the story thus far, but that was before I re-worked the ending, (which I'm still re-working lol) so maybe in the end it will be stupid that I didn't have her name mentioned sooner. But anyways, hopefully having those thoughts confirmed takes away any lingering confusion, if not let me know! Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Kahlymilla (Signed) on Jan 01, 2008 12:11 am (You Dropped This)
[i]Took me a few more times of playing the fool before I found my balls again and gathering them up, literally--I actually held them as I said to her, "This isn't going to happen anymore. So whatever you've done to give your pussy that voodoo magic--kudos-- but it wasn't going down like that anymore, because I'm a man dammit. And a man's gotta have balls."[/i]
That part of the chapter was classic lol, even though he hadn't actually said it to her with that wording. Um...wtf is going with Justin's perspective on his relationship with Cameron and Jules. He made all of that fuss earlier and now that they are having pretend sex he's bitching.
I'm waiting for him and the female character to meet. I wonder how that'll go down.
I enjoyed the chapter immensely. Kinda, hate Chris, but I don't really know why. Maybe because he just stood there and hadn't said a damn thing, which made her look like an even bigger fool. This mystery guy sounds intriguing, who is he? Of course, it isn't Justin because she would have fainted lol.
Good job Ange!!!
Author's Response: haha, glad you liked it. And it was meant to be that he did actually say those words to her. I guess Justin in a nutshell is someone who can't just be happy. Because he was for a good while happy with Cameron, then he slipped up with Jules and ever since then he couldn't figure out how to make it right. And sometimes he thought he didn't even want to, but suddenly when she tells about her secret and then proceeds to dump him, he doesn't know how to take it, because that's not how it works for him usually. So she started to look good to him again, then the not-a-relationship relationship thing happened, then break-up sex happened and hence his bitching. Does that make sense? I hope it does. lolrnHe's going to meet her! I keep re-writing that chapter, and it's driving me crazy, but it's going to happen. lolrnYou hate Chris? Well, the main reason he did that to her is because of what she said during the other chapter and then when she proceeded to completely ignore him, which wouldn't make him all that happy with her. lolrnThanks for the review, Kah!
That part of the chapter was classic lol, even though he hadn't actually said it to her with that wording. Um...wtf is going with Justin's perspective on his relationship with Cameron and Jules. He made all of that fuss earlier and now that they are having pretend sex he's bitching.
I'm waiting for him and the female character to meet. I wonder how that'll go down.
I enjoyed the chapter immensely. Kinda, hate Chris, but I don't really know why. Maybe because he just stood there and hadn't said a damn thing, which made her look like an even bigger fool. This mystery guy sounds intriguing, who is he? Of course, it isn't Justin because she would have fainted lol.
Good job Ange!!!
Author's Response: haha, glad you liked it. And it was meant to be that he did actually say those words to her. I guess Justin in a nutshell is someone who can't just be happy. Because he was for a good while happy with Cameron, then he slipped up with Jules and ever since then he couldn't figure out how to make it right. And sometimes he thought he didn't even want to, but suddenly when she tells about her secret and then proceeds to dump him, he doesn't know how to take it, because that's not how it works for him usually. So she started to look good to him again, then the not-a-relationship relationship thing happened, then break-up sex happened and hence his bitching. Does that make sense? I hope it does. lolrnHe's going to meet her! I keep re-writing that chapter, and it's driving me crazy, but it's going to happen. lolrnYou hate Chris? Well, the main reason he did that to her is because of what she said during the other chapter and then when she proceeded to completely ignore him, which wouldn't make him all that happy with her. lolrnThanks for the review, Kah!
c00lxkiddo (Signed) on Dec 28, 2007 12:25 pm (You Dropped This)
I really like this. Update as soon as you can! [:
Author's Response: *does new reader/reviewer dance* lol Thanks for giving this a chance. And while I hope that I can update soon...as soon as I can, probably won't be "soon." But we'll see.
Author's Response: *does new reader/reviewer dance* lol Thanks for giving this a chance. And while I hope that I can update soon...as soon as I can, probably won't be "soon." But we'll see.
CutiePie07 (Signed) on Dec 28, 2007 05:25 am (You Dropped This)
Wow, this is a surprise, surprise! lol. I don't want to get too excited cause you might not update again for a long time. lol But I do wonder who the mysterious guy is? I hope you update soon cause I didn't realize how much I missed this story until now so please do so if you can. lol -Jelisha
Author's Response: I'm assuming the surprise is that I actually updated this? lol Which is sad, I should work on that. Normally, I'm not this bad. It's funny that you and Kah pointed out the mysterious guy, but when I read the reviews, I was just confused as to who you were talking about. lol That's how little the guy was in my head. lol Basically the one line he had was supposed to be it, but I guess, I could try to think of something. Try being the key word. No promises. Thanks for reading/reviewing, Jelisha, even though the updates are far and few between. I really appreciate it. :)
Author's Response: I'm assuming the surprise is that I actually updated this? lol Which is sad, I should work on that. Normally, I'm not this bad. It's funny that you and Kah pointed out the mysterious guy, but when I read the reviews, I was just confused as to who you were talking about. lol That's how little the guy was in my head. lol Basically the one line he had was supposed to be it, but I guess, I could try to think of something. Try being the key word. No promises. Thanks for reading/reviewing, Jelisha, even though the updates are far and few between. I really appreciate it. :)
justinaham (Signed) on Dec 28, 2007 12:10 am (You Dropped This)
I told my sister if she ever got with Justin I would muder her... okay never speak to her. I don't like Jules at all and I keep sayin no Justin stop smiling at her you idiot!!!
Author's Response: lol I would be pissed if my sister got with him. And plus, that would just be weird/nasty, given that she's 17. lol But anyways, yes, he does need to stop that ASAP. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Author's Response: lol I would be pissed if my sister got with him. And plus, that would just be weird/nasty, given that she's 17. lol But anyways, yes, he does need to stop that ASAP. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Kahlymilla (Signed) on Oct 09, 2007 12:01 am (Staying There Gets Pathetic)
I just want to say that I absolute love "A House is not a Home" my favorite part is:
Are you gonna be, say you're gonna be
Are you gonna be, say you're gonna be
Are you gonna be, say you're gonna be
I was singing along right with Justin. Ok back to the story. Oh Mr. Chris sounds like a handsome fella might I add. Aww her mother died?? That's so sad. Somehow I don't think Jules apology was sincere. And when is the BFF and Justin going to meet? And what is the BFF's name? Milla said Renee is that right?
Author's Response: You don't think Jules was sincere? Hmm, I can't remember what she was apologizing for right now. The lost jewelry or the Justin thing. But I think on either one, she was being sincere, because she does feel bad, but then if you possibly continue to do/want to do what you're apologizing for, I guess that would be reason to wonder about her sincerity. lol When are they going to meet, lol, that's what everybody wants to know and that's what the beginning of chapter five alludes to. So my answer is soon. lol About the name thing, yes, that's her name, but it hasn't been said in the story. Because I wanted it go with the title, and I asked someone, can't remember who, if that would be annoying to hold that back until the end, and I think they said yes, but as you can see, I've done it anyways. lol smh.
Are you gonna be, say you're gonna be
Are you gonna be, say you're gonna be
Are you gonna be, say you're gonna be
I was singing along right with Justin. Ok back to the story. Oh Mr. Chris sounds like a handsome fella might I add. Aww her mother died?? That's so sad. Somehow I don't think Jules apology was sincere. And when is the BFF and Justin going to meet? And what is the BFF's name? Milla said Renee is that right?
Author's Response: You don't think Jules was sincere? Hmm, I can't remember what she was apologizing for right now. The lost jewelry or the Justin thing. But I think on either one, she was being sincere, because she does feel bad, but then if you possibly continue to do/want to do what you're apologizing for, I guess that would be reason to wonder about her sincerity. lol When are they going to meet, lol, that's what everybody wants to know and that's what the beginning of chapter five alludes to. So my answer is soon. lol About the name thing, yes, that's her name, but it hasn't been said in the story. Because I wanted it go with the title, and I asked someone, can't remember who, if that would be annoying to hold that back until the end, and I think they said yes, but as you can see, I've done it anyways. lol smh.
Kahlymilla (Signed) on Oct 08, 2007 11:23 pm (When You're Not Looking)
Wow...um...that was kinda harsh Mister. But I can see that he wasn't in the right mindset to talk and actually be nice to her...especially after the information Cam just delivered. But for some reason I still don't feel sorry for Jules. Is that mean?
Author's Response: I don't think that's mean. I'm not sure if you should feel sorry for her necessarily. It's probably bad that I haven't made my mind up about her. lol
Author's Response: I don't think that's mean. I'm not sure if you should feel sorry for her necessarily. It's probably bad that I haven't made my mind up about her. lol
Kahlymilla (Signed) on Sep 30, 2007 11:49 pm (A Surreal Haze)
I wonder why I could remember this chapter very well but not the others. I clearly remember discussing this over Aim and thinking why is Cameron not listening to his confession! It's like she was purposely ignoring him as if she didn't respond it would make it less true. I missed the female character in this chapter a little. Oh Justin's character is brutally honest that I almost felt for Cam, notice I said almost lol. I have no words about Jules. I don't really care for her ass. How are you going to think about your bestfriend's feeling after you boned her fantasy husband. But anyway I wonder what's in store for these characters.
Author's Response: That's exactly what Cameron was doing. It's her way of dealing, but not immediately dealing at all. So no love for Cameron or Jules? lol Well can't really say I blame you on that. lol I wonder what's in store for them too, lol, I'd definitely update a lot faster if I knew. lol Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Author's Response: That's exactly what Cameron was doing. It's her way of dealing, but not immediately dealing at all. So no love for Cameron or Jules? lol Well can't really say I blame you on that. lol I wonder what's in store for them too, lol, I'd definitely update a lot faster if I knew. lol Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Kahlymilla (Signed) on Sep 30, 2007 11:29 pm (I Hate You. No, Seriously. I Really Hate You.)
Reading this chap made me imagine you. I could honestly see you in class blanking out from absolute boredom and on conversation that you could care less about. You and your character have a lot in common too. I could imagine you acting the same way if you were in that same situation. Poor...what is the girl's name lol? I guess I'll find that out late right? She ought to cut Jules...anyway on to the next chapter. If you don't get the second review that means I went to sleep lol. Loved it :)
Author's Response: Yeah, she is a little like me. All my main female characters usually wind up being at least a little like me. I'm not sure all the things she'll wind up doing , but probably won't wind up being something that I'd do. Yeah, Jules...smh...she knows she was wrong for that.
Author's Response: Yeah, she is a little like me. All my main female characters usually wind up being at least a little like me. I'm not sure all the things she'll wind up doing , but probably won't wind up being something that I'd do. Yeah, Jules...smh...she knows she was wrong for that.
Hollie (Signed) on Sep 30, 2007 08:47 am (That's What Friends Are For)
You so want to wake up and have that Buffy 'Once More With Feeling' moment where everybody breaks into song, don't you? *lol*
Author's Response: I had to google that to find out what episode that was, turns out it was after I'd stopped watching and Buffy shouldn't sing, at least not so high. lol I like the musical moments where you wouldn't normally expect them, but that was just...hmm, special. lol But yeah, if we could all break out into a song and dance every now and then I think the world would be a better place. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Author's Response: I had to google that to find out what episode that was, turns out it was after I'd stopped watching and Buffy shouldn't sing, at least not so high. lol I like the musical moments where you wouldn't normally expect them, but that was just...hmm, special. lol But yeah, if we could all break out into a song and dance every now and then I think the world would be a better place. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
CutiePie07 (Signed) on Sep 30, 2007 02:53 am (That's What Friends Are For)
Awww....such a cute chapter! Please don't wait so long to update again - I was going through MAJOR withdrawal!
Author's Response: lol Thanks! Yeah, that was a really long time between updates, even for me. lol I'm going to try to do better next time. Try being the key word. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Author's Response: lol Thanks! Yeah, that was a really long time between updates, even for me. lol I'm going to try to do better next time. Try being the key word. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
classicbeauty (Signed) on Sep 30, 2007 01:07 am (That's What Friends Are For)
OMG?! girl i havnt laughed that hard in i dont know how long! i loved it and want more now oh my i cant stop smiling that chris/rae omg that was too too funny she didnt have to do him like that. lmao and trace with the unbreak my heart- only u only could've done it and pulled it off. i know u aint leaving me hanging after that welcome back - dani
Author's Response: Originally that chapter was a lot different, but then I got bored with it and...that came out. lol Glad you liked it though. :) I'm gonna try to update more often, but as always there's no guarantee. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Author's Response: Originally that chapter was a lot different, but then I got bored with it and...that came out. lol Glad you liked it though. :) I'm gonna try to update more often, but as always there's no guarantee. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
CutiePie07 (Signed) on Aug 08, 2007 05:24 pm (Staying There Gets Pathetic)
LMAO!!! Who is "her"? I missed this story so much! Poor Justin. :( Please update soon!
Author's Response: Yes, who is her. lol Dun, dun, dun. You're the only one who asked that. And when I get around to updating you'll find out. Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Author's Response: Yes, who is her. lol Dun, dun, dun. You're the only one who asked that. And when I get around to updating you'll find out. Thanks for reading/reviewing!